I Play LOL in Naruto World

First of all, the cover gives me a feeling that E will never come back. At the beginning, when I woke up in the ward, as a 50-50-year-old brother, I was tired of the baby's opening, so I gave such a favorable start. I met Naruto as soon as I left the hospital. It can be said that the plot is very compact. There is no feeling that the word count is too high. The writing is smooth (at least smoother than me, beep quietly). All in all, I think it's very good and worth pursuing,

Not bad, not bad, it saved me from the book shortage. Come on, the author is great!

A belated return visit, come on, come on, come on!

Very well written, bookmark it and work together 😁

I have already tested the poison, so I suggest you watch it with caution. The protagonist's IQ is not enough, the operation is very weird, and he does not overly directly accept the body's strength, etc., And other plots are very embarrassing to watch.

When I read Chapter 9, I felt that there were too many jokes. There were just a few chapters, seven or eight jokes, and I didn't even check whether they fit. The protagonist was always given by Aoli, and Aoli gave it. Don't you really feel embarrassed? It's not that all the jokes are interesting. You have to see if they suit you. Occasionally, one is fine, but if you cram them all in, it's really speechless😓

In the middle, the enemy is used to destroy the protagonist's ability to introduce the system. How dare you write such a vicious method?

I was confused when I saw Danzo gradually getting fatter. He looked so similar to the one from the Hatake family.

I am the younger brother of Shen Nong. I came across this book by chance, but I had a weird temperament. I clicked on it and found out that the poison was so poisonous that Ganoderma lucidum was useless. I endured my heartache and read more than 50 chapters. The poison took effect. What a shame. I don't regret my remaining death, but I feel sorry for the readers. There are not enough worshippers, but I burned 500 taels of paper money, and I am grateful!

The protagonist doesn't have any trump cards. He just goes through time and goes crazy to commit suicide without any thought of the consequences. Crazy temptation on the verge of death? Can't read.

It feels like it's imitating "The Happy Man of the Hatake Family of Konoha", and others have already finished the book. After reading two chapters, it's still not as good as others.

When I saw Qigong, I immediately gave up the book. .

The content is quite interesting, but the shadow of imitation is too strong. I personally suggest that the author should not imitate the happy man too much, otherwise you will not be able to express your own taste.

Which type of people usually read this novel, alliance players and alliance players, so I feel like you should at least add some alliance elements. Contains language, such as "Come back, don't send it away", "You are so sentimental when giving away human heads", "Brother save me", "I am angry with blood", "Fatal Triumph", "Fuck Kobe, iron Kobe", "You have never won, have you? (I don't know if the author plays the league or not. What does this sentence mean? It's someone doing whatever it takes to win)"... Including actions, such as "Don't fight, don't fight, hold on, wait for me", "My CD is almost ready", "Into the grass", "Card vision" Of course, when I see the word dog tag, I know that you have the goods.

Just use memes appropriately. If you only have one joke for several pages, you'll make me vomit.

The protagonist looks like a fool, has no brains, and is being toyed with. Since he wants to be happy, he adds so many plots that make readers unhappy.

Seeing the second chapter, I decisively gave up the trap, which was a bit poisonous.

Hehehehe, if you don't have E in many lines, you will not be autistic 😏😏😏

People often say that as long as my E is fast enough, my teammates' question marks will not be able to catch up with me. Haza gave

The age of the ninja has come to an end.

The protagonist is a man, right? That man that Naruto said he wanted to be a happy man, well... There's something wrong with the author

Who is called LOL (serious face)