Grand Adventure in the Spirit Card World

I saw this book again today. I originally wanted to read it, but I found it was abandoned by me before. I will tell you my opinion here. First of all, I abandoned it after the first chapter. The reason (purely a personal issue) feels that the author may want to emphasize the color of the character description, but I feel that the author is a bit exaggerated. First of all, First of all, the supporting character named Zhang, judging from his behavior, felt that it was impossible to achieve his goal (finding a girlfriend). Secondly, the woman was too harsh. The person named Zhang didn't tease him. He just expressed his love and didn't pester her, so he hit Zhang's balls so hard that he chilled them for two hours. You know this This part is very easy to cause problems. It can be said to be more delicate than the head (not that it is important). It is too exaggerated to keep it in ice for two hours. This part has been fine and sometimes has problems for such a long time. There is also an uncle named Zhang (the company manager) who just smiled and ended it. The biggest problem with this uncle is that the author gave He described his inner activities, saying that the family wanted to get the man named Zhang married early, so they let him do whatever he wanted. The early marriage was to prove that he wanted to have offspring or to have someone take care of him (this was obviously not the case based on his inner activities). So when the person who carried on the family line was seriously injured, he didn't even mention taking his nephew to the hospital for a check-up, and that was it? There is also the issue of the company's commission in the post (since I didn't read it, I can only tell my feelings from the descriptions of other readers and authors). The protagonist is not a reborn person, nor is he the kind of person with great strategies. He cannot see the company's hidden benefits, so the company's 90% commission is very toxic, especially when the protagonist needs money. Let me tell you my advice to the author (purely my personal opinion). If you don't have a fan base, don't be too exaggerated at the beginning of the book, especially in the first few chapters, because this is a process for readers to get deeper into the book. Any poisonous point here can be easily amplified. The logic here must be clear. It must be smooth and smooth for the readers. Once something goes wrong, it will be like when a person is about to fall asleep and someone suddenly turns on a loud speaker and howls and wails, and he wakes up all of a sudden. There is also the foreshadowing. Don't bury a foreshadowing that seems very difficult to understand at the time but only reveals it very much later. Remember that you are just a small author with no fan base, and readers have average tolerance for your books, so you have to write well now and not have any or very small poisonous points, because this is to increase readers' tolerance for your book, so that readers who have poisonous points in the future will be able to tolerate it. (The above are purely personal feelings and opinions)

I see many people saying that the company's distribution method is inhumane, and I would like to say a few words. One, receive nine out of ten ordinary cards. It seems very unkind, but you have to know that the background of this is similar to Diablo III. Will Torment 13 be able to be shipped if you play it? Aren't the big writers working night after night, and are they happy enough to just produce a handful of graduation outfits in one day? Basically, it's like picking up gold from a mountain of garbage. You are asked to pick up ten pieces of garbage, keep the most expensive garbage among them, and then hand in the rest. Is there any problem? Besides, new people are taken care of by old people. If there are no old people to take care of them, how can new people survive? 1. There must be an attack card in the initial card, and the level cannot be low. 2. The first field you encounter can only be micro, and even small ones cannot be defeated. 3. You, a whiteboard person living in a peaceful era, cannot shake your hands, otherwise you will not be able to kill monsters, and if your legs cannot shake, you will not be able to run away and be killed. 4. Don't encounter other old Lingka masters with malicious intentions. You have to do all of the above to survive. But as long as you are willing to hand over nine of your ten pieces of garbage, you will have someone to guide you, someone to guide you, and someone to protect you. Why is it not a good deal? Two, hand over all the natural spirit cards. If you insist on taking them, hand over all the cards in the next three fields. About this, many people cannot accept it. For example, when a male supporting actor gets a natural spirit card from a large field and then hands it in, many people are unhappy. They think I got it, so why should I hand it over. I want to say one thing, you are a newcomer and have no company to control the situation. If you don't expose you, if you dare to take this card, you will die. No one is a virgin. And the male supporting actor was just lucky enough to pick up the card! The boss must be killed by the protagonist! The previous output is from the company! The boss attributes are tested by the company! The place to fight the boss was cleared by the company! How supercilious do you have to be to feel that this card is yours if you get it? Returning to the general situation, the natural spirit card is not a cabbage. It can let you be discovered by a new person every time. The natural spirit card is not necessarily very good. If it is very good, you can also choose to give up the garbage income from the next three fields and three garbage mountains in exchange for the natural spirit card. Third, let me make it clear that the people who thought the company was too shady and asked the protagonist to quit the group have basically forgotten how the protagonist obtained the first dungeon and how the people in the company helped the protagonist. If you don't repay the kindness of a drop of water, what about the grace of saving your life? Where is the grace that guides the way? You said the company was too shady and turned around and left? Awesome.

Don't look at it, don't look at it. It poisoned the Virgin to death and licked the dog The protagonist was walking on the road and was chosen by chance. An uncle came up and said that this is an opportunity for my daughter. You must compensate me or I will kill you. This opportunity is meant for those who are destined to get it. Why did it become yours before your uncle got it? The protagonist agreed and still called him uncle and father-in-law? Disgusting 🤢

I always feel that the author writes Zhang Yuxiang in a way that is too European and imperial. Whether it is a spiritual card or an emotional aspect, he is a bit too dominant. I always feel that he is the protagonist.

After reading more than 50 chapters, I have given up. This book is full of all kinds of contradictions. It says that the spirit card world is cruel but in fact it is all kinds of harmony. It does not show the difference between spirit card masters and ordinary people. Moreover, the company's setting is even more poisonous. It is worse than a black-hearted company. I have never seen any benefits of joining a company. You work hard to get a 91% share? The protagonist himself joined because of the spirit card key, but he also brought his good brother in. He is really a good brother, haha. As a semi-official organization, can the company take a commission like this if it only provides information on the formation of the field? Are you afraid that people who join the company will be treated as fools? I don't believe that the outside world doesn't have the means to detect it. I haven't seen new people join the company and be trained. What benefits does the boss of the company bring to the dungeon besides having an extra safety net? Upgrading depends entirely on training and clearing dungeons. If you can beat it with no one, you will gain something. If you can't beat it with the help of a big boss, you still won't gain anything. So what's the point of bringing it?

Is the supporting character named Zhang here to persuade him to quit?

I feel that according to the setting of this book, all spirit card masters should have a national background, otherwise they will not survive for more than a few episodes and will either be incorporated or killed.

Did you forcibly arrange it for your best friend? In just a few chapters, I became a spiritual card master

The setting of this book is very novel, and it does have a lot of poisonous points.

It's nice, but it'll be over in a while. Please give me more