My Junior Fellow Disciple Is Extremely Cautious

You are copying senior brother Jianjian next door.

What should I say? Does it feel like the author was so criticized that he wrote a new book?

The so-called prudence should not mean having endless cards, being thoughtful and redundant in everything, turning into Sherlock Holmes whenever there is a problem, and going all out when encountering an enemy. I haven't read the book, but after reading the introduction, I want to say something, you are so cautious, but you still use 20% of your strength when fighting others to the death? When someone else uses their ultimate move, you only use 20%? Can you write? If not, watch the anime Cautious Brave before talking about it. Kill the crappiest slime, and kill the others instantly with a flat A. People are cautious enough to directly use their ultimate move and fire map cannons. Use a skill that can destroy a city or area to kill! I've seen enough of the introduction. I stopped reading the book. Bye-Bye!

Gou Dao has been booming recently, but what comes in the wind is not necessarily eagles, but also flies.

It's too deliberate and blunt. A quasi-saint is inexplicably backstabbing. Don't use it as a shield. This reason is too far-fetched. The arrangement is too obvious and unreasonable. Now comes Bai Ruhua. What kind of Hua Zheng is found in the protagonist's tomb? Fortunately, Bai Ruhua needs the main medicine for alchemy, but the holy land happens to be out of stock 😅😅😅 The author has to check whether it is a bit too blunt. Too many "coincidences" would be too deliberate.

Not to mention being angry, is this Bai Ruyue? Is it the heroine? Why does it feel like the protagonist is like a dog next to her? She looked for elixirs and inspiration. The protagonist's senior sister was also brought in. Being brave enough depends on whether you are capable enough. If you are not capable, just talk about it? So powerful.

There are typos in the introduction, I really can't bear it 😂 Also, the article written by Zhetian Fan started out really well, but when it came to swallowing weapon pills, it was nonsense, and then after swallowing a heart, it was really, really disgusting. A good setting was turned into a disgusting YY article. .

I think the author should read it again after he finishes writing. The first few chapters were okay, but once the surname Baibai appeared, it felt like writing under a different zz. What I wrote was completely thoughtless.

It was really good-looking at first, but then it turned into a poisonous book after Bai Ruhua came out. The protagonist was not cautious at all, but was obsessed with it!

Come on, author, please update more. The plot is okay, but some sentences are not smooth. After the author has finished writing, he can read it a little and change the word order. The punctuation marks are a bit uncomfortable to use in some places. You can read more and change them.