Saint Knight Douluo

What the hell are you writing? The first three pictures are completely unclear. What are you writing? The introduction and content are completely unclear. I don't know anything. The first three pictures are very important. Are you good at writing them? It directly affects whether your back looks good or not.

There are too many complaints, which seriously affects the reading experience.

Very beautiful! I want more, so I registered specifically to post this comment.

The idea is very good but there are too many poisonous points. One is that there are too many complaints (in the first few chapters), and some of them are even irrelevant to the plot. . The second is that the protagonist is not an ordinary person 🐴 He started to be unserious right after his death. Will you die if you write a sad part? And he kneels down when he sees people. . . Isn't Gou like this? I thought it was the main character who was friends with Tang San and the others, and it didn't necessarily have to be the strongest, but it had to look like a person at least, right? First time seeing Tang San, kneeling and kowtowing X3 First time seeing the master, kneeling and kowtowing X3 First time seeing Xiao Wu, kneeling and kowtowing I have seen so much. Brothers who want to read more should consider it carefully

Pig's Foot awakened his martial soul at the age of five, and practiced peerless martial arts. At level 20, he absorbed the soul rings and soul bones sacrificed for 100,000 years. At the age of 12, he was only at level 28. Is he really awesome? The author is really good at writing! Just write it down and include private goods, it's all nonsense, farewell 😰😰

In Chapter 3, Mother Fox died, and the death of a character who was not well-characterized in the first place was not very touching. But your front foot is dead🐴 and your back foot is Chapter 4: The murderer who complained about you🐴 was not good at trapping you???? The fox who has raised you for so many years is just a tool? Is it used to deliver milk, sister, and soul ring? Not to mention the bitterness and hatred, at least don't mindlessly complain about your enemies, right?

He knelt down inexplicably, first for Tang San, then after a few chapters he knelt for Xiao Wu, md, is there any need to be so humble? It's really disgusting, why don't you take your seat? Are you losing all human dignity? Not to mention the future, in terms of plug-ins, they are not weaker than them, even in the beginning, who is afraid of whom?

When I saw the author saying that the first novel he followed was "Douluo Dalu", I remembered that the first novel I read was "Warcraft Sword Master: Another World" written by Tiancan Tudou, and I read the book version, which was full of memories. 👍

What are the fan fiction novels now? Sole Wuhun, Pan Wuhun, Keyboard Wuhun, Gourd Wuhun, Pink Eye Wuhun, Cataract Wuhun, Soul Ring Wuhun, Banana Wuhun, Bread Wuhun, Flame Spirit Girl, Kizaru Wuhun, Zuo Zhu Wuhun, Six Paths Wuhun, Weed Wuhun, Inflatable Doll Wuhun, referred to as Douluo Wuhun, the top fifteen hybrid awesome plug-in systems to become a god, only have a chance to become a god. It is only for reference of fellow Taoists, slowly try to figure it out, fellow Taoists, I will go,

What a bunch of stuff, I just didn't want to read it after reading the first chapter. You, a modern person who has traveled through time, know how to do kung fu? Goldfinger didn't even say anything about Beiming Divine Skill.