The Strongest System Immortal Emperor

In fact, I have been following the update of [The Strongest System Immortal Emperor] for so long, and I admire the author's great imagination. Most fantasy novels are full of fantasy, and the novel "The Strongest System Immortal Emperor" includes a lot of fighting scenes, and also accommodates many anime fans, giving me a crossover feeling of entering martial arts and entering the second dimension. But in terms of language, the author's writing skills seem to be slightly lacking. For example, in the picture above, this should be a very burning scene, a very passionate shot. However, the author greatly used more strokes for action description, while neglecting to highlight the character settings. In terms of highlighting the scenes, the author mostly uses a single lens, which results in the lack of some atmosphere overlay and progressive layering. The narrator's perspective is not very effective in advancing things, making many fighting scenes difficult to visualize. From other aspects, it can be seen that the author has a very good martial arts background, and the fantasy martial arts setting is also quite interesting. But in terms of setbacks and shaping, there are still some scratches and a sense of fatigue. Fantasy martial arts may be deep, mysterious, majestic and magnificent, but the novel "The Strongest System Immortal Emperor" is more prominent in the youthful feeling of hot comics, while neglecting the profile of the heroes and ambitions of the children of the world. I am very optimistic about the author Da Da, come on!

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This book is pretty well written, I hope I don't give up on it.

I have a brain disease, I get hairy every day, pure white writing

This is my first time coming across this type of novel, very martial arts and very loyal! It's a ping-ping, bang-bang fight, which is quite enjoyable! The author confessed that the opening chapter was not ideal, but admitted that he worked harder and the more he wrote, the better it looked! Not bad, the author didn't break his promise! The storyline is indeed becoming more and more exciting, but it doesn't seem to involve much deeper content. It is mostly about grievances, factional battles, and door-to-door revenge... I have only read about half of the update, and I am eager to express my opinions. I will continue to read. If there is anything inappropriate, please forgive me! In other words, readers grow with the author, and the author also needs the encouragement of readers, right...

The writing is so outrageous, it's so normal that you can't pass the contract.

The previous positive reviews for this book were all written by someone. It's at the level of a primary school student, and it's updated every month.

Looking at the comment area,,, I fell into deep thought-_-||

I see you recommending books in the group every day, and this is only a few chapters

In fact, I have been reading this novel for a long time. Let me briefly talk about my impressions . The opening content of this novel is very cliche. I have to say that if I only read the first five chapters, I can directly classify it into the same level as the strongest anti-routine. But after reading more than a dozen chapters patiently, I can clearly see the originality of the novel. The author's skills in these chapters were actually very average, but with the mentality of continuing to read after reading it, I read on. After reading the first thirty chapters, it is about a sect martial arts competition, the story of the protagonist group and various supporting characters constantly fighting in the ring. There is nothing too new. After reading this, I can't stand it anymore. But I am glad that I continued reading. At the beginning of chapter 30, the pace of the plot suddenly accelerated. Until the forties and fifties, forces emerged one after another, fighting on this continent for their own purposes. The plot is very compact, the content is interlocking, and every sentence reveals details. Chapter 35, the long fights cover 90% of the novel, but the compact battles that follow can be watched with gusto. It can be seen that starting from chapter 35, the writing style of this article has been greatly improved compared to the previous one, and many well-known film and television animation characters are interspersed, but the description is still a lot less. This work does not devote a lot of space to the protagonist. Instead, it writes a lot of battles between supporting characters. I think the author wants to tell everyone that there is no protagonist in this world, or everyone is a protagonist However, the shortcomings are minor. The biggest shortcoming of this book is that the update is too slow. In such a compact plot, such slow updates and the author's fragmented chapters at the end are really unbearable. Finally, four words of evaluation: open low and go high!