The Most Powerful System Immortal Emperor

In fact, I have been following the update of [The Strongest System Immortal Emperor] for so long, and I admire the author's great imagination. Most fantasy novels are full of fantasy, and the novel "The Strongest System Immortal Emperor" includes a lot of fighting scenes, and also accommodates many anime fans, giving me a crossover feeling of entering martial arts and entering the second dimension. But in terms of language, the author's writing skills seem to be slightly lacking. For example, in the picture above, this should be a very burning scene, a very passionate shot. However, the author greatly used more strokes for action description, while neglecting to highlight the character settings. In terms of highlighting the scenes, the author mostly uses a single lens, which results in the lack of some atmosphere overlay and progressive layering. The narrator's perspective is not very effective in advancing things, making many fighting scenes difficult to visualize. From other aspects, it can be seen that the author has a very good martial arts background, and the fantasy martial arts setting is also quite interesting. But in terms of setbacks and shaping, there are still some scratches and a sense of fatigue. Fantasy martial arts may be deep, mysterious, majestic and magnificent, but the novel "The Strongest System Immortal Emperor" is more prominent in the youthful feeling of hot comics, while neglecting the profile of the heroes and ambitions of the children of the world. I am very optimistic about the author Da Da, come on!

In fact, I have been reading this novel for a long time. Let me briefly talk about my impressions . The opening content of this novel is very cliche. I have to say that if I only read the first five chapters, I can directly classify it into the same level as the strongest anti-routine. But after reading more than a dozen chapters patiently, I can clearly see the originality of the novel. The author's skills in these chapters were actually very average, but with the mentality of continuing to read after reading it, I read on. After reading the first thirty chapters, it is about a sect martial arts competition, the story of the protagonist group and various supporting characters constantly fighting in the ring. There is nothing too new. After reading this, I can't stand it anymore. But I am glad that I continued reading. At the beginning of chapter 30, the pace of the plot suddenly accelerated. Until the forties and fifties, forces emerged one after another, fighting on this continent for their own purposes. The plot is very compact, the content is interlocking, and every sentence reveals details. Chapter 35, the long fights cover 90% of the novel, but the compact battles that follow can be watched with gusto. It can be seen that starting from chapter 35, the writing style of this article has been greatly improved compared to the previous one, and many well-known film and television animation characters are interspersed, but the description is still a lot less. This work does not devote a lot of space to the protagonist. Instead, it writes a lot of battles between supporting characters. I think the author wants to tell everyone that there is no protagonist in this world, or everyone is a protagonist However, the shortcomings are minor. The biggest shortcoming of this book is that the update is too slow. In such a compact plot, such slow updates and the author's fragmented chapters at the end are really unbearable. Finally, four words of evaluation: open low and go high!

In fact, the story is very simple. It tells the story of the protagonist avenging his adoptive father's family, but his Dantian was destroyed. Fortunately, with the blessing of the system, he also encountered a mysterious big chicken time machine. The skills improved step by step, and I met some like-minded friends... Objectively speaking, I feel that the author of this book did not want to sign the contract at all, he just wanted to tell the story in his heart. To be objective, the author writes very casually, focusing on the system at the beginning and weakening the plot. The subsequent scene changes are abrupt and unclear at first glance. Moreover, this book already has 250,000 words, and at least 200,000 words describe fighting. Although web articles do not pay much attention to logic, the story itself that is ignored in this way will never return on the road of fighting and killing. However, Internet texts are inherently diverse, each with its own merits. The fighting scenes in this book are relatively detailed and exciting. The author created a lot of onomatopoeia, especially for the poems and sword battles. The author worked hard and painstakingly created the poems and sword battles, which enriched the artistic conception of the fighting. And the fighting is not static. After the sixty-five chapter, it seems to be integrated into the martial arts realm of ancient martial arts and heavy skills. The impact is explosive and there are all kinds of moves. It can be seen that the author's writing style is a little immature at the beginning, but in the later period, the writing style gradually matures, the sense of layering increases, and the progress is obvious. Although it is a fantasy genre, the book also presents martial arts, animation, two-dimensional and other elements, which shows that the author has good intentions. Leaving aside the story itself, the author's imagination is worthy of praise. Because Internet writing requires imagination. I hope the author will pay more attention to logic, the connection of various scenes, and the story itself in the future. Come on!

The two Thunderbolts and Fire are not too strong compared to Dugu Guyue, and with the blessing of cleverness, their speed is not much different. Vanguard and Thunderbolt used wheel fighting and temporarily broke through the realm of artistic conception, but fortunately Dugu Guyue was strong enough. The showdown between Liu Sheng and Yukimura is also in full swing. The two people were of equal strength. With both of them consuming a lot of spiritual power, their eyes met, as if they were waiting for the opportunity! Yukimura admired the young master, and Sanada also expressed surprise at Liu Sheng's performance and felt that he had grown a lot! Only when you are strong can you be recognized by others! Liu Zheng taught Liu Sheng that when the world is in chaos, both culture, Taoism and military strategy are indispensable. There is still a long way to go, so we should not be too hasty. During the battle, Liu Sheng thought about the blast swordsmanship and merged the blast swordsmanship with the biblical swordsmanship to show a more powerful deterrent. The battle did not result in a winner, but both sides knew each other's strength. In fact, fighting is not the goal, but a means of convincing people and a means of growth. The battle on Dugu Guyue's side has never stopped, and the battle situation next to it is also very anxious. On the plains, the momentum of the three-legged confrontation has been established. What will the future be like? Heroes will emerge from the chaos!

As the author said, the first 6 chapters of this book have a different style than the whole book. It was very common at the beginning that the family was wiped out, and the protagonist escaped from the family. The deep hatred and hatred supported the protagonist's early development. To my surprise, the protagonist was not a time traveler or a young master, but the servant. The reaction of the servant as a native who got the system is quite interesting. But the power system is a bit messy. The fighting scenes are really well written, I think it can be counted among the top ten books I have read so far. In addition, this author's update is a bit touching. But the plot progresses quite quickly, and revenge is very refreshing. What is the background of this world, with all kinds of strange characters and skills. I don't watch much anime, so I'm a bit confused. Sanada and Yukimura checked it out and found that the summoned killer tennis ball could be fine. Asuna and Kirito came out from behind, and Bongu seemed to be One Punch Man. The author seems to be focusing on group portraits later on, but the background should be more descriptive. There is not enough description of the background, making it a bit tiring to read. Although the fighting scenes like this look really exciting, the lack of description of the characters and environment made me feel a little uncomfortable. Without the previous foil, it was difficult for me to get excited. It's really rare for an author not to know the word count. To sum up, this is a very good book, as the author said, the ultimate fighting style. Plus a lot of anime and TV series mixed in? If you have watched both of the plots, I think you will be very comfortable watching it, just like we often think about who is stronger between two favorite protagonists. After Wang Dadong finished fighting, I really couldn't guess the direction of the plot, but I was quite looking forward to its development.

You need to pay attention to strategy when fighting. Vanguard and Thunderbolt used wheel battles. While fighting, they also had a chance to breathe and rest. Use this method to consume the opponent. This method is very effective when one's own side is weaker than the other side. It was precisely because of the use of wheels that I was able to fight with Dugu Guyue for so long just now. If it weren't for the instant improvement through my own understanding in the later period, I'm afraid Dugu Guyue would have won long ago! The two methods of Gale Swordsmanship and Bible Swordsmanship do not exist independently. They have been integrated to a certain extent in Liu Sheng's hands. Fighting does not require rigid execution of established moves, otherwise familiar people will feel the flaws. It requires constant observation, continuous learning, comprehensive understanding, and flexible use. Liu Sheng has begun to skillfully use various techniques to implement his theories and conjectures during battles, thereby improving himself even more. In books like this, many characters improve themselves during the battle, which makes people feel that they can still persevere in the face of crisis.

Wang Dadong, known as the strongest senior brother in history, has a dominant position as the ruler of the Liushui Sect. From the martial arts battle between Wang Dadong and Chu Liujue of the Sanfang Sect, we can see Wang Dadong's impulsive personality. Although he is reckless, he is also very simple and righteous. In the martial arts fight, Wang Dadong's performance can be described as humorous, but he is a practitioner with absolute appeal and has a characteristic constitution that makes him strong when he is strong and weak when he is weak. It is precisely because of this that the fighting scenes between Wang Dadong and Chu Liujue are very interesting. Secondly, Wang Dadong's intuition is accurate, and his usual weapon is the dragon pattern sword. In the fight with Chu Liujue, this weapon was defeated by Chu Liujue's sword. At such a critical moment, Wang Dadong was able to remain calm and achieve an evenly matched result with Chu Liujue. This not only shows that Wang Dadong's intuition is accurate, but also shows that this person is brave and resourceful. Wang Dadong regards fighting as his bounden duty and relies on righteousness. He is full of passion and impulse and has the same perseverance as a diamond. In general, Wang Dadong's character is very skinny, so please go for it!

Why is the battle between Lonely Guyue and Vanguard not over yet? But with this posture, Lonely Guyue will probably win the final victory. Oh, you always give me a chance to guess the result. Also, Liu Sheng and Xing Xing, who have been looking forward to it for a long time, finally fight against each other again. Compared with last time, it was indeed a lot more exciting. But in this fight, we didn't see the growth of their respective strengths, such as their fighting experience. Could it be that they were all brutal fights? Is there no combat analysis or anything like that? Every time it's a situation where you attack and I defend, and I defend and you attack. Is this mirage a new way to survive? It seems that no survivor has ever used this trick before. Did the author leave suspense? The origin of this move must not be explained after surviving the battle with Liu Sheng. Although Liu Sheng used the dragon-slaying secret - the Red Lotus Exploding Flame Blade, looking at the result, it seems that he survived. It's just that this competition is not over yet, and the content of this chapter is a bit lacking, which is bad. Every time it breaks at a critical moment. Sit back and wait for updates.

In this book, the duel between Liu Sheng and Yukimura is of common concern to everyone. In front of everyone, this is a duel between two strong men, but only they know that they sympathize with each other and can communicate with each other. And during the duel, the aura covered him, and the auras of different colors seemed to highlight the character's personality. Dugu Guyue is silver-white, Lou Wanshui is sky-blue... During the struggle, Liu Sheng attacked one after another, not giving the opponent a chance to breathe. Because they all know that as long as there is a moment, the situation of a battle may be reversed. That kind of urgent atmosphere made us all feel so much like ourselves across the screen. When reading this book, we will be attracted by his fighting literature and the simplicity of his names. Lou Wanshui, Lou Qianshan, as soon as you hear the names, you know that there must be a connection between the two people. If you ask who is more powerful between two people, just think about it and you will know that the unit of Wan is greater than Qian, so Wan Shui is more powerful. In this book, we can see the excitement of fighting and feel the fun of naming. This is a happy reading process.

Liu Sheng finally fought against the survivors again. The five senses of separation in it were really exquisite, thanks to the author's imagination. There was also a wave of memories interspersed during the fight, which was great. Liu Sheng's tears also represent his longing for his adoptive father and the Liu family. When I saw Liu Sheng relieved of his five senses, I was so moved that I almost cried. Liu Sheng finally grew up again. Reading this book so far, I would like to call Chapter 54 the ceiling of the whole book. Not only are the fighting scenes described vividly, but the layout of the article is also exquisite, including the memories of killing, and Liu Sheng's finishing touch with tears. The key is that the title of this chapter is great. It is a simple description in the tone of a third person. The few words are sonorous and powerful. It not only hints at the intensity of today's battle, but also contains the affirmation of Liu Sheng's performance today. In the end, what Sanada said to Liu Sheng was a little bit gratifying, "The child has finally grown up and has a future." This can't be my imagination, I really think this chapter is very well written.

In that place in Chapter 56, "The next moment, the sparks generated by the friction between the two sword blades were sucked into Liu Sheng's mouth, restoring Liu Sheng's physical strength." When I read novels, I like to imagine some interesting scenes. When I saw this, I almost laughed. Oh my god, haha. Although it is strange to inhale sparks to restore physical strength, it is indeed the first time that I can restore physical strength. The author's imagination is very powerful. Not bad, not bad. But I didn't understand the content behind it. The lost future. . . I don't quite understand, so I won't comment for now. The battlefield will change later, which is bad. Chu Liujue's fighting can be summed up in this paragraph. Unfortunately, I lost a little happiness. Fortunately, the fight between Vanguard and Lou Qianxue was very good, and the battle between Tiger King and Dugu Guyue was also okay. The two major battlefields are opened at the same time, and the author is amazing. The Tiger King was as expected, haha, it was a miserable loss. It is said that my level of knowledge has improved. After fighting for so long, I was originally expecting the author to end it, but it was an omission that made people think. . .

Hahaha, I was suddenly fascinated by the name Kenichiro Sanada, mainly because it is a Japanese name, which seems quite abrupt in this training article. I noticed Sanada Genichiro in Chapter 20. That chapter was the competition between Sanada Genichiro and Li Wenhao. He made rapid progress (this man must be very diligent). Then in Chapter 23, he competed with Hei Xiaohu again and won again. I felt that he was very confident and calm. I was wondering if this character was very important and would compete with the protagonist. Then I saw him again in Chapter 30, and he lost. He has admitted defeat, and here I feel that he is very humble. I haven't finished watching it yet. I will continue to watch it later.

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After rummaging around in Qidian, I finally found a fantasy novel with a title that appealed to me. The title was really good. The content of the first few chapters was okay, but the descriptions didn't describe the tragic situation of genocide, and I couldn't feel the sadness of the protagonist. Or maybe the protagonist cheered up too quickly, which was very different from my expectations. Maybe it's because most other novels follow this routine, so the author wants to change it, or maybe this is the author's writing style. Maybe I still don't have an appetite for it, but it's okay. I can still study the author's work when I have nothing to do. The writing at the end is actually quite good. It's quite good to skip the middle and take a look at the competition at the end. The scene of the competition is well described. I'll have time to think about the middle part again. Looking forward to updates.

Dugu Guyue shouted "Eight Fans" with such momentum that one could feel the intensity of the battle from his voice. In this book, many skills have their own names, which allows people to better distinguish different offensives. As a fighting book, it is full of fantasy. There are many people fighting in this book, and their fighting not only involves a competition of spiritual power, but also a strategy to create momentum by making some sounds. Although Liu Sheng is the protagonist in this book, it is not entirely written about him. Instead, many supporting characters and companions are written about. In helping each other, we can see that the protagonist's growth is not just his own strength. From being weak at the beginning to growing up step by step, I have experienced a lot, met a lot of people, and gained rich and colorful experiences. There is a lot of truth in this book, which is worth reading.

In fact, I have been reading this book for half an hour. During this half hour, the protagonist suffered a genocide, the protagonist got the system, and the protagonist began to cheer up. I feel that the tragedy of the protagonist was written too quickly. There should be more details about the tragedy of the protagonist's genocide and the injuries suffered by the protagonist. I think the author's fighting is very good, and the onomatopoeia is very detailed, making people sink into it. Especially in the fourth picture, where the protagonist confronts the wild boar, the action is really detailed. This is what a slap-in-the-face counterattack is like, with ups and downs in the plot. The protagonist becomes stronger, grows, defeats those who humiliate him, and then further grows into a big shot. I really like reading this kind of article. I will continue to follow the author's articles in the future. I look forward to the author's follow-up. Come on and update more. The author is rushing.

The novel is well written, rich in content and full of emotions. It has the character of the Han and Tang Dynasties and the legacy of the Song and Ming Dynasties. It describes the joys and sorrows of a little person. And his fear and resistance to fate. What a great spirit this is, this is the dissatisfaction of us ordinary people with their fate. This sentence is a bumpy resistance. Simply put, this is a masterpiece that must be said. The update speed is amazingly fast...

This book is pretty well written, I hope I don't give up on it.

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I have a brain disease, I get hairy every day, pure white writing

This is my first time coming across this type of novel, very martial arts and very loyal! It's a ping-ping, bang-bang fight, which is quite enjoyable! The author confessed that the opening chapter was not ideal, but admitted that he worked harder and the more he wrote, the better it looked! Not bad, the author didn't break his promise! The storyline is indeed becoming more and more exciting, but it doesn't seem to involve much deeper content. It is mostly about grievances, factional battles, and door-to-door revenge... I have only read about half of the update, and I am eager to express my opinions. I will continue to read. If there is anything inappropriate, please forgive me! In other words, readers grow with the author, and the author also needs the encouragement of readers, right...

Looking at the comment area,,, I fell into deep thought-_-||

I was introduced to it by a friend and have been using it for nearly 3 years. I admire the author's perseverance. I read a single chapter in the book, and I also know that the author is not prepared to sign the contract to finish the book. So I think this book can be used as a practice book to improve writing skills, exercise plot structure skills, add some new ideas, and use it freely. After all, if there are new books and new works in the future, it will be difficult to have the opportunity to practice. Another point is the golden opening. Not only the three chapters are eye-catching, but the first 10 chapters should also be extraordinary (after all, everything is too long now, and if you want to make it popular, you have to use strong medicine). In this part, you need to learn from the operations of certain authors, such as innovating in terms of world view, combat system, golden fingers, and protagonist characterization.

Haha, no wonder it's called a "fighting style" novel! The fighting part is very exciting, the kind where you can be immersed in it! Even the special effects and sound effects are lifelike. Sometimes a fight spans chapters or even multiple chapters. Every fighting scene is refined, detailed, and even in slow motion... Of course, there are also fight scenes where you come and go and fight quickly! "Fu", "hu", "zi", "ceng", "step", "bang", "kuang", "king", "whoosh"... The sounds of various fighting are endless! In the early stage, the author may not have integrated the situation well, and the characters communicated less, but in the later stage, it became more and more perfect, and the story and characters became fuller in many aspects! For authors in the growth stage, there is still something to look forward to! Recommended! 😊

The writing is so outrageous, it's so normal that you can't pass the contract.

The previous positive reviews for this book were all written by someone. It's at the level of a primary school student, and it's updated every month.

I see you recommending books in the group every day, and this is only a few chapters

There has been a shortage of books these days, so I was looking for books everywhere, and I happened to find this one. Then I took a closer look at the author's update time. It turned out to be a 19-year-old book, which is already a long time ago. It is a bit awesome that it has not been discontinued for so long (although the interval is a bit long), so I will leave some of my opinions. First point, I am not sure what the author's purpose is in writing the book, but if the author wants better results, the stability of updates is the foundation of the foundation. Even if you are a master or even platinum, there is a high probability that you will not get any results. Of course, if you, the author, just want to write or practice writing, just pretend that I didn't say anything about this. Second point, let me talk about my impressions of reading the book. First of all, the first five chapters. The author also said that the first five chapters and even chapter 20 were a bit cliched and vulgar. I read it with relatively low expectations and did not pay attention to the details. Indeed, the content of the first five chapters is very cliche. When I read it, I felt a lot of déjà vu. The beginning of the chapter directly reminds me of the dream battle, which is quite strong. Another thing is about the setting of the golden finger system, which is a system for natives to obtain in a fantasy world, without time travel, rebirth and the like. This point is contrary to the routine, and it is novel for locals to cheat. Then there is the system hacking that is a bit rough, as if Fairy Tail Natsu's abilities were transplanted and localized, and there were some jokes about Net King and Shi Leng in the middle. At the same time, the local people in the front received golden fingers, and their three views or common sense collided with those of modern people. This situation created some laughter. I am not sure whether the author meant this as the key point of the writing, but I think the idea is okay, but the perception in the article needs to be strengthened. Then we get to Chapter 20. To be fair, there is a lot of progress compared to the previous ones. The writing style still needs to be strengthened, but the plot setting is actually okay. I hope there will be greater progress in the future. Finally, regarding the description of combat, I think it's interesting. Not to mention a lot of images, but there are simulations, which is quite taxing and gives a sense of combat. Regarding this aspect, the author can learn from some authors' creation of combat atmosphere and characterization of scenes, which can greatly improve the character. The many thoughts are gone. What I said may be one-sided. Let the author see if he can gain something. I also wish the author a great sale of his work.

The overall structure is quite rigorous, the content is well connected, and the chapters are smoothly connected, which I think is rare. Because some novels give me the feeling that the chapters are too independent, the connection is not very good, and it always feels a bit far-fetched and abrupt. Among the novels I have followed before, this book feels very smooth to me. Smooth is smooth, it's too smooth and it still highlights the shortcomings of this monotony. I think it would be better if there were some foreshadowing or metaphors between chapters, or even at the beginning of the article and in some places in the text. Maybe it's because I prefer this kind of thing. After all, this kind of fantasy style still gives people a shocking feeling of echoing in front of them. The plot is not like a river flowing down a smooth hillside, smooth and running in one direction. If the author neglected this point when writing, I think it can be slightly improved in subsequent articles. If this is the author's original intention, just treat it as if I didn't say it. Another point worth mentioning is the combat aspect of the article. This is what impressed me the most. The fighting scenes are indeed depicted with a sense of déjà vu. The addition of onomatopoeia and most of the action descriptions give a sense of spectacle. But the disadvantage is that the fighting links are too simple. From the previous fighting link between Liu Sheng and Sanada to the fighting match between Sanfang Zongchu Liujue and Liusui Zong Wang Dadong in Chapter 44, they are all in the same format. If you watch too much, you will still feel a little bored. The fighting link alone is not innovative. Finally, I will make a simple evaluation through some techniques used in novels. The most indispensable thing in the novels I read is the dialogue between characters. The comparability between them is a color of language. Language is often the most intuitive means to highlight a character's personality. For example, Sedum and Tianpeng, Xuejian and Xiyao in Fairy Sword, the characters' personalities are very distinctive in contrast. But in this novel, although there are many dialogues, I feel that the characters' personalities are not outstanding. Dialogue is too purposeful, and it is dialogue just for the sake of dialogue.

As you walk down, you will always see flowers blooming everywhere. I came across this book by chance. I read the reviews and said that I stuck with it for a long time. I went to look through the catalog, and I really persisted for a long time, but it was intermittent. A book that can last on and off for four years must be of great significance to the author. From the introduction of the novel, we can see that the author is a very lovely person. "The first five chapters are the most rubbish in the whole book" "The first twenty chapters are pretty average" "The best part comes after the twenty chapters". This intermittent update, these top five are the most rubbish, it is a taboo at the starting point. (I also heard this from others) However, as long as you don't care, as long as you persist in updating it, you can always wait for readers who like it. Because the introduction is very attractive. The introduction is very thoughtful. For me, who doesn't often read systems, the first two chapters are a bit boring, and boys will probably like them very much. But the author's words are beautiful. "No signing, no supervision" This is the biggest highlight of this book. Non-professional writers will always have a lot of trivial things in life. If you can persist in writing a book written for the sake of writing in a flashy and irritable life, you have already won half the battle. Just write down the rest. The fighting is indeed well written, very intense and exciting, and very suitable for boys to watch. If you want to watch the emotional drama, you can skip Chapters 2-6. Let's take a look at the end of Chapter 6 and the beginning of Chapter 7. Next is the pre-war training part. Chapter 11 begins to have emotional involvement. Helped a beggar. After Chapter 12, the author is still a student studying art. Art is intertwined, and sketching and kung fu are the foundation for his fighting scenes. As the author said, the first twenty chapters are basically fighting scenes, and the main topic begins in chapter twenty-one. If you like fighting scenes, you can watch it slowly, and if you don't like it, you can start from Chapter 21. The storyline and emotions slowly unfold. A book has its own destiny, and a writer has its own style. The one you like is the best one. Start reading slowly.