Taozu in the Weird World

The setting of the book is okay. It draws on the setting of using ghosts to control ghosts in Terror Resurrection, and adds the golden finger of Taoism. As for the content, I personally couldn't read it after the fifty chapters. The first ten chapters are still attractive, but after that, the family who builds a sect will be slapped in the face. If you don't build a sect quickly or only accept one or two disciples, you can tell the name of the sect. 1. There is no front or side writing about the world's royal family. The intensity of ghosts, 2. The hostile forces reveal their faces too early, and there is no attraction like the tip of the iceberg. 3. Too much pretense is bound to slap in the face, and there is no attractive plot such as pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger. 4. There are no relatively profound characters, no matter whether they are good or bad. It feels like the world revolves around pig's feet. You can write some legends about decent geniuses or masters, and villains are also fine; 5. You can write about the exciting competition between the pros and cons for a certain item in a certain place! Finally, I wish the book will become more exciting as it gets written! ! !

I feel like the author borrowed small settings from several books, but didn't fully integrate them into the plot. It's not a black eye, it's purely a personal feeling.

Wow, is this the legendary method of enlightenment in dreams?

{"NickName":"Chen Xi Yu Qian","UserId":320246920} Please don't write the protagonist in a brainless way. Change it back before it gets out of hand. Moreover, the plot is a bit messy and off-center. Where is the main plot? Author, don't be too lazy

I would like to give you some advice: stay less involved in politics and stop being slapped in the face by family leaders. This is really out of character. And the pace is a little slower. A mysterious organization comes out in 90,000 words, and many people still don't understand it. It's a bit too fast, you can write more branch lines and finally connect them directly to the main line to make it look better 😁😁 This is purely a suggestion.

You can go and see Mysterious Resurrection. Super pretty! ! !

I don't know how long you can write, but for now you can, and the quality is guaranteed. Keep writing and I will order all of them once they are on the shelves.

How to put it this way, it's quite interesting, but what are the limitations of abilities, and why don't you trust the government? Isn't it okay to use the protagonist's ability to send out scriptures? If it's just to show off, or if you want to reach a higher realm, then it's okay It's more refreshing to have all the people practice immortality.

I'm speechless, I can't see it without thinking, the logic and settings are not rigorous, let alone the reincarnation of this powerful person, the leader of a faction. He talks irritably, laughs and laughs, and is startled when he sees a wealthy family. The powerful master of cultivating immortals? After the government discovered the abnormality, he immediately showed off in front of a bunch of classmates he had just met because he was short of money. He also posted in a group chat that each person would be given the exercises if he had 1 million. . . I'm afraid that your every move is being monitored, and even if you are the powerful leader of the fairy world, anyone with any intelligence can tell from the protagonist's words and deeds that the protagonist is just a young boy who has never seen the world, and he has a treasure in him. Big secret. The protagonist has only been practicing for a few days, and it's just Qi Training 2.

The protagonist's stepfather immediately persuaded him to quit... They spent over two million to keep you in a vegetative state for 10 years And you're not even a biological child You refused to call me daddy... Forget it, you just slammed the door and got out of the car, and you still despised him in your heart. What kind of person is this?

Another author who fell to the virus🙂 mourned for the author

The first two points poisoned me. The first was that you acted like a child when you were detected to be abnormal. Knowing the secret of your constitution can save countless people. Secondly, when the test allows others to recite scriptures silently, they choose to conceal it. If this thing can be popularized, it can greatly change the current situation. Think about how much those half-human and half-ghost doctors have paid to fight against ghosts. Think about how many people have sacrificed for this. They chose to hide it because of selfishness and decided to let such a miserable reality continue. They are not sons of men. Finally, regarding his father, people can spend 2.7 Million to maintain the life of a child who has no hope. After you wake up, they just want you to call him father. You don't even call him father, and you don't have the basic gratitude as a human being. You really have wrong views. I don't know whether the author intentionally wrote it to create a selfish and willful protagonist or whether he unconsciously wrote it to have such a three-dimensional view, but it is really poisonous to be so realistic. Either you only have the protagonist who can recite the scripture silently, and others can't understand it if he can't write it out. Then the stepfather himself is a bad person** and the protagonist's mother embezzled 2.7 Million without his knowledge. Or just write it in such a disgusting way that there is no memorial at all, or simply be a selfish, willful person who has no regard for life, repays kindness with enmity, and is greedy for profit. You are tired of writing and writing at the same time. You are also tired of reading.

I just read this introduction. The Tao Te Ching has cultivated great righteousness. Your thoughts are too biased.

It seemed fine before chapter ten, but after chapter ten the world fell apart. After drawing some blood and beating the policeman, the stepfather took out 2.7 Million to renew the protagonist's life. The protagonist swung the car door and drove away, posting secrets in the group. . . .

Why don't you read it yourself after writing it?

In a world of horror, humans are fighting among themselves everywhere. I think the world needs a moon worshipper🤓

Death from poison. The title of the book is Taozu, which relies on Buddhist scriptures to defeat enemies. Jade has aura, how unfair it is to glass. There is no horror atmosphere in supernatural novels at all. No matter what weirdness you have, you will just kill people and explode things when you drive the Wushuang. There is also gambling on stones, which is just like betting on the increase. If you write a good article, where is the good point?

I will never read a book written by this author again, no matter how good the writing is. Who knows one day he will go to the palace in a bad mood, and let us readers do what we want to do. It is too cheating to be neither good nor bad.

It was fine at first, but from chapter 13 it suddenly became toxic. He keeps talking about being in charge and boss, but I think he is really just a 10-year-old kid.

Have you entered the palace? No update for almost a month? I originally thought the author had a good idea, and I am reading it to keep it in my collection. What a pity

The little author, who is not updating the article, holds up his two ears, cuts the arteries and veins, and remains motionless, so cute. The young author, who doesn't update his articles, inserts needles to destroy his brain and hangs him up, and sticks hydrochloric acid on his belly. He crawls and crawls so cutely. The young author, who does not update the article, is locked in a cage, hangs his tail and gives electric shocks. He is so sad and depressed. It is so cute. The young author, who is not updating the article, pinches the left and right breasts, performs a thoracotomy and a laparotomy, and the blood is so cute. The young author, who did not update the article, was injected with anesthesia and tied up, and his cecum was cut and sewn up. His eyes were dull and so cute. The little author, if he doesn't update the article, digs out his eyes and lifts them up, cuts off his bladder and cerebellum, his dying struggle is so cute. The young author, who did not update his articles, tied his hands and feet and hung them up. He used leather whips, candles, and electric batons. He screamed so cutely.

The biggest poisonous point of this book is the protagonist's stepfather. The author brought his own prejudice against the stepfather into the novel. While saying that his mother had been with him for ten years and wanted to repay his kindness, he also felt that the stepfather was not good enough. The stepfather spent two million in ten years on a vegetable. Isn't this a favor? Are you going to say that this was done by the protagonist's mother? If the protagonist's stepfather hadn't acquiesced, would she have had this money? Later, the author probably felt that the stepfather's emotional drama was difficult to write, so he simply wrote the stepfather as a bad guy who changed his name for ten years. May I ask the author, would a bad guy spend two million on a vegetable? A bad guy changed his name for ten years, but the protagonist's mother didn't find any loopholes? I just read the first few chapters and thought the protagonist's outlook on life was upright, but later on it was completely ruined 🙂🙂🙂

Is the author really cool? What a pity for such a good book, insert incense

A fairy-like setting, the protagonist of the Virgin! The childish protagonist's IQ! Second-rate behavior! Without strength, exposing the ability and method to change the world is tantamount to suicide and low IQ for the ghost world without a cultivation system. Unconditionally helping others without guaranteeing one's own safety. For people like me who resist the virgin watch, the fairy grass has become good grass and can only be read once! The idea of ​​catching up is not as urgent as it was after the first three chapters! This is my review!

I thought you started updating, but I didn't expect you to stop updating for another three months. .

After looking at the work 😅, my husband is confused.

My automatic subscription is still on, but you should update it (╯‵□′)╯┻━┻

It's so white, it feels like I'm reading an essay

No update for three months! Can bang

After Chapter 100, the younger brother and sister have disappeared. If the author doesn't want to write about you, it's okay to write that they are dead. But the author just doesn't write, is this disgusting to readers?