A Half-Life in Your Gaze

▲Overall review: From my personal point of view, this book is beautifully written, has clear logic, reasonable narrative structure, and proper foreshadowing of major events. The writing style is biased towards the retro style. Although this has also led to problems such as a weak sense of substitution, overall this is a book with outstanding writing and plot in the ancient Chinese genre. ▲Micro: Advantages 1. Writing style: The writing style of this book is beautiful, with ancient characteristics in terms of words, the description of the environment is clean and tidy, and the rendering of the atmosphere is slightly weak, but the overall style of writing is more ancient, which makes the book have a retro charm between the lines, which effectively makes up for some shortcomings in concrete description, making the writing style of the whole book simple and stable. 2. Narrative: The narrative structure of this book is rigorous, well-prepared, the language is careful and elegant, the plot is reasonable and reasonable, the description of events has no sense of obstruction, and the writing trend is mainly gentle and memorable. 3. Grand View: The protagonist of this book has three correct views, a grand writing style, and no small-mindedness. The paragraphs are reasonably distributed, and the overview does not feel tired. At the same time, it avoids some strange layout problems of newcomers. There are also very few typos, which will not affect the overall reading. Disadvantages 1. Writing style: The advantages and disadvantages derived from the writing style are obvious, and the disadvantages are also obvious. The more ancient style of writing results in a lower sense of character substitution compared with modern ancient poetry books. Some ancient style descriptions are slightly weaker in emotional rendering. 2. Narrative: The opening chapter is not focused enough, the overall situation cannot be summarized, and the small situations are too scattered, failing to grasp the essence of the "Three Golden Chapters". Because of its rebirth setting and lack of creativity, although it is supported by writing, compared with the creative writing of the same period, its future long-term development is still weak. 3. Grand View: This book has a masterly control over the overall view of the chapters, with no obvious shortcomings. However, the length is slightly short, and the broken chapters make the sense of connection weak when reading. ▲Suggestions 1. Writing style: While maintaining the ancient rhyme and writing style, add some humorous terms, which will make the ancient style articles read more easily, harmoniously, and more approachable. 2. Narrative: It is recommended to add some unusual and novel settings. After reaching 300,000, the creative ancient prose will be more popular in the same period of books, and the number of clicks will be obviously high even if there is no recommended position. 3. Grand View: It is recommended to introduce the demining in an introduction, which will allow readers with doubts to enter the book smoothly and increase the number of clicks. At the same time, it is recommended to lengthen the length. However, if it is really more immovable, the key plots that cannot be interrupted can be merged during the overhaul. I hope you can get better and better, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง by: Baidu Tieba. Jing Meng Yuanran

Fingertips matching the rhythm Silent and speechless The ticking of time Drown the dust of the years The appearance is gone Lan Run Tassel Looking up at the ordinary Another summer has arrived The past is like a smile in the mortal world Following the wind without leaving a trace Recalling the affectionate gaze All the poems and songs are engraved between the eyebrows Life is like floating clouds As if we only met for the first time Things and people may not end when things are different Why say goodbye with sentimentality

Infatuated love The fate of gazing at the eyes for half a lifetime has passed, cultivating to cut off the thread of love with tears. A piece of pitiful ice jade, I am only crazy about Pei Xu in this life.

If you don't think about old songs as much as you want, you will search for your close friends in the sea of ​​people. It is rare to get drunk in the village wine, I only blame Pei Xu for hiding his deep love.

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The author writes really well, keep up the good work

It may be a bit trivial at the beginning, but it's a comfortable read and the plot unfolds slowly. It felt a bit like Red Mansions at first, but in fact, Porridge's writing style has become more and more mature in writing. After the 90th chapter, the language that is close to life and close to nature is very life-like. The two-line novel should naturally be discussed separately—— The heroine Wan Zhao (pronounced wanzhao, not yuzhao in the non-listening book) was said by someone in the comment area to be gloomy (the original words are much worse than this), but I think her character is not single. She is gentle and dignified. As the plot develops, you will find her calmness, calmness, wisdom, kindness, perseverance, and even determination. Looking at Zhu Chengbi thinking a lot, looking haggard and fragmented, I remember you. There are no memories of her past life in the first volume. I think that's because she didn't dare. After she experienced the butler and was cursed, she matured and learned to face her past, even if it was painful and unbearable. In this life, I think she will look for the truth that she must know, instead of seeking revenge blindly blinded by hatred. The so-called wisdom is bound to be damaged, and deep love will not last long. This was the source of her pain in her previous life. She had already seen that her family was on the verge of collapse, and she was jealous of the emperor because she was in the middle palace. Wan Zhao lived in such pain, and even had to bear the pain of losing his son, so a good man withered like a flower. It can be seen from her memories with Zhao Rui that she had long seen through the emperor's hypocrisy and ruthlessness, so she angrily chose to break off. [I have to admire the author here for vividly displaying the harsh environment. (Of course I broke the dragon-slaying knife by the way, I hope the porridge will be warm...) Huanwu, Hengyuan, and Yiyuan are three eras (the residences of five generations) Huanwu is not introduced in this book, but I have read the deleted article. It is famous for its extravagance. Heng Garden is introduced in the new chapter and is relatively simple, so Yi Garden is a compromise. What these three places reflect is that the present is not the same as it used to be, as the saying goes, things are different and people are different. The young master said that this book is about the end of the five generations of the Han family. In a book set in the Tang Dynasty, when talking about aristocratic clan groups (the Han family and the Feng family are obviously big landowners and nobles), you will definitely think of the demise of the clan. The Han family, privately thought to be the Duguxin family or the Changsun Wuji family, then you will know the fate of Han Zhen, heading towards destruction. [Under the cover of the nest, there are intact eggs] It is also said that [the centipede insect is dead but not stiff] No matter which one, it will not end well. I particularly like the name of the Han family here, Pei, heavy rain, and more favor than the emperor. Xun, under the guise of Xun, it is true. (pronounced Qi, the pronunciation of Ji is wrong), Jin, Zhang and Xuan all mean beautiful jade (and also allude to the emperor's heart, which shows that Sima Zhao's heart has not changed...) hhh, I have read articles about Han Pei, so I like him the most. His descendants have his shadow, but it is a pity that he cannot restore the glory of that time. The amazing thing about this book is that the characters are fictitious in their dynasties, but they are very sophisticated and describe the fashion of the early Tang Dynasty very well. Hu bed, several tables, several couches... The imperial concubine's crescent eyebrows, the crescent moon on the spring mountain, how beautiful this is. Spring mountains are eyebrows, and the ancients praised eyebrows as spring mountains in the distance. The delicacies refer to the Shaowei Banquet, which restores the grand scene of the Tang Dynasty (actually the transition period from the early Tang Dynasty to the prosperous Tang Dynasty), especially the tea, tea cups, teaspoons, saucers, tea cakes (one is the cake for eating, the other refers to the tea leaves after grinding), and the tea ceremony is written in detail. There is not so much explanation, but it is described very concisely. In addition to the official system, there were three provinces and six ministries in the Tang Dynasty, as well as the military system and the equal land system (this should not appear), but the first two are included. The ancient official group was huge and complex. From the death of Li Shunde, such a small case triggered overt and covert struggles among the three departments. This book is taken from the perspective of the Ministry of Justice, taking into account both Dali Temple and Yushitai. But from the dialogue between Chief Zhang, Mo Chao and others, we can see the contradictions inside. If you sort out the Guo case, you will find that it is a simple scapegoat case. This is one thing, but it can reveal many things. The first is bribery, the second is favoritism, the third is collusion, and the fourth is party-based unity and opposition to differences. Very clear and crisp. He also successfully uncovered the death of King Ze, and thought that this was an out-and-out power struggle, with vested interests playing a game in order to protect themselves. The prince looks decent, but there are countless thoughts hidden inside. The King of Wei was inextricably linked to this case, and the King of Yan was obviously meddling in it. I think this is a trigger, and the fate of many people may change because of it. Let's talk about the male protagonist. There is a ten-year age difference between the male and female protagonists, and this old Pei actually has a dark history. At that time, I was quite annoyed by people who acted according to the changing circumstances. Later, the more I read, the more I felt that his plot was so interesting, down-to-earth, and very relaxing. Pei Xu is down-to-earth and proficient in contingency, big boss! The number one pick is simply awesome! Boss, boss! I'm not even a child, so I can only watch, haha. Pei Xu is selfish and holds grudges, but I think he is a man, and what he has earned is true dignity, which is what Fourth Master said. Hhh Pei Xu is very interesting. There are many girls in Yiyuan, each with their own characteristics. As Porridge said, flowers become more beautiful only when they are in the darkest days. Wan Zhao is a lady of the world, yearning for a sincere and pure world. As can be seen from the atmosphere of Yiyuan, it is a mixed place. There are all those who do evil, those who seek profit, those who steal, and those who are idle, and there are even more simple and friendly women. Du Ruo Liu Yun are all beautiful flowers and plants. Qing Heng, Xianglan is also a bluegrass. Echoing the Yiyuan in Yiyuan. Although these girls are foils to the heroine, they are not eclipsed by their supporting roles. The red flowers and green willows complement each other. Every character here is not written in vain, everyone has their own value of existence. Even if he is in the background and does not appear in the main text, I can still see his style between the lines. Let's talk about the villains. The big villain here must be Mrs. Zhou. But when you see her, you will find that she is just a noble lady who loves her daughter, loves her children, and at the same time takes proper care of her relatives. Everything about her is a profile. People have two sides, and if they are bad for no reason, then they are not human beings. People are complex and they all change. Zhao Rui is a handsome and amiable young man from the beginning, but when Pei Xu talks about sensitive areas, he immediately puts on the air of a prince. The few times he appears, you will find that this person has also changed, becoming more sophisticated and meticulous. No need to put on an expression to make people surrender. There is also a side of private life that yearns for leisure, Finally, to summarize, the best thing about Ning Mou is that it is neat and orderly, and the relationships between the characters are also very neat. It is a good description of Zhuang Li in the magnificent era. In terms of value pursuit, the article describes many people as being dignified and elegant. Yongrong, Yongsu, these words. In ancient times, this was the top among the nine grades. People watching may think that I am a bit traditional, but these are the supreme pursuits and indispensable qualities for self-cultivation. This book naturally has some shortcomings. The timeline—the later timeline, the male and female main lines are different. The plot has a mediocre beginning, (a scumbag who refuses to change after being beaten to death). It is said that it will be changed to a slap in the face, hahaha, I am looking forward to it. The first volume was a bit delayed, but the atmosphere was well created. The second volume is overall more comfortable, as vivid as the title of the volume, Shao Xia. The third volume, Autumn is Bright, is more life-oriented. The language is many and detailed, but the sentences are concise. [Finally: Don't be a scumbag, young master, you must work hard! ! !

The porridge is great! Going to the blue sky hahaha

After reading the first few chapters, I can say that the pace is slow and the story is well told. The atmosphere in the article is like a stream slowly flowing down from the mountains. Although the pace is slow, there is a lot to tell. The writing style can be said to be relatively mature, and the wording is serious and very ancient. However, the sense of immersion is not particularly strong, because the story is very strong, and the beginning is a bit like a "group drama", so the sense of immersion may not be that strong, so it is suitable to sit back and watch it. Looking forward to the author's next articles, don't stop updating! Don't cheat!

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