There Is a Divine Volume in the Book

1. The author's writing style is a bit weak, and it looks like a flowing prose without any depth, lack of character description, and lack of description of the environment. 2. After the heroine travels through time and knows the development of the plot, should she have a tangled feeling in her heart? Should she continue to be a sinister person, or should she start a new development path that is silly and cute? 3. Therefore, after three chapters, after the heroine travels through time, the direction of the main plot of this novel is not determined in the reader's eyes!

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A lot of them are white, and they are like running water. If you mind a little, don't take it to heart.

Front row reminder, Mo is not the male protagonist.

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I have written 60,000 words without comment😭😭😭😭 It's too difficult for me. I happen to have a recommendation ticket, so I'll give it to you.

The book is very beautiful, the description of time travel psychology is in place, the writing is delicate and smooth, and the world view is not abrupt. It is a good book. The character has a distinct personality, and I really like the heroine's character so far. I haven't seen it much so I won't comment too much. The heroine should cultivate herself and have a sweet love!

This writing style, there are lemon fruits on the lemon tree, and I am the only one under the lemon tree. I'd better practice my writing... Try to catch up with Da Da, come on!

4.11 Nine readings, nine comments, three recommendations and nine votes: overall it's very nice, but a bit bland! It is recommended to intensify the conflict with the male and female protagonists, and to conflict and contrast with the plot in the book! Then there is the setting. How can a second female villain in a book break through the book? ? These are all things the author should consider... The setting is good, it has great potential... It's very imaginative! How do the people in the book change the plot of the book? It is recommended to add the main character who loves reading, reading books, etc...

It's very well written, keep up the good work! Received

This is a good-looking orthodox novel about a female protagonist cultivating immortality There is nothing poisonous about it The author's writing skills are very good The content is also very comfortable If you follow the standards of a newcomer This book is definitely three levels higher than the book just written by a newcomer It's good and that's it.

Collected "Getting Fat Slowly" I like to read "Cultivation of Immortals", "Time Travel", "Female Supporting Characters" and "Male Leading Characters". This article matches all of them. I'm really happy. Keep updating.

The writing is very attractive, looking forward to updates🌹🌹

I saw it, it might be better if I change it again.