I Decide Your Attributes

A person who can heal anything can be expelled just because he offended a wealthy family member. He was previously said to be an indispensable talent in the war. Haha →_→ Bye

Whether it's the plot of being forced to leave by Na Luo Lao or the loss of the city, changing the map is quite awkward. I want to quickly upgrade the whole Xiang Xue's death in my arms. I'm really speechless.

To be honest, the author's writing is not bad, but it's a pity that the strength is chaotic. The protagonist's star disciples will kill the star sect from time to time. Even the martial arts data are not the same as Chi Guoguo's. The data is there, but the author does not describe the strength corresponding to each data. Also, the author's fighting scenes are poorly written, but the author's style is so comfortable that people can see that the author is serious about writing, come on! 😡😡

First, it's a good book. I wish it would be great to have this system.

Please, next time this kind of plot should be a bit more complex, don't label it as an invincible flow. Thank you, it disgusts me. No matter the protagonist or the supporting characters in this book, even the high-level people in certain aspects are all as if they are mentally retarded. The biggest poisonous point 1: The novice author also made a first-time suppression and then a positive one, and wrote the male protagonist's third wife (who really loved the protagonist, the first two were here to cuckold the protagonist) to death in front of the protagonist, and then the male protagonist started to make a fuss. If you are a great master and can make your writing smoother, then it won't matter. Who hasn't watched the drama "Bitterness and Enmity" yet? You made it so blunt. You didn't mention that the protagonist could improve her strength, but the heroine died in front of me. Ah~~~I want to become stronger! Seriously, I had goosebumps all over the place when I watched it, I was so embarrassed. Another thing is, at the beginning, the protagonist treated so many high-level officials, but in the end, what group wanted to recruit the protagonist, and actually took people away directly from the First Wuhan University? ? ? What the hell, you didn't write down where in the outline, did you? Not to mention the people who were rescued, but with the talent of the protagonist, I felt like I saw a certain group go to Tsinghua University and take away a special admissions student! Does the president of Tsinghua University know? National Deputy Minister, even if you want to do this, you can't do it, let alone the War College in the war years. Are you thinking about eating peaches? Other so-called poisonous points are just floating clouds. Except for the brain circuit of the people in the book, these two are the only ones that disgusted me.

From a general idea, there is no doubt that the author is a novice. The author emphasizes the portrayal of emotions and human nature in the apocalypse (wonderful), but ignores that this is not what is taken for granted in the real world. In the real world, in an environment where the outside world is full of dangers and human beings rely on martial arts to guard the city to survive, there is no doubt that no matter who rules these cities, from the people's point of view, it is survival. What they rely on to survive depends on martial arts and strength. The ability to build skills can easily attract the attention of other forces, but here's the problem. When the poisonous point comes, no official force appears. The protagonist is expelled and then goes through life and death several times (this city is ruined, this book is ruined). The jumps in these scenes are too stiff. If it were left to the hands of a master, these plots would be at least hundreds of chapters long and still keep you reading with gusto.

After reading Chapter 41, I was poisoned and died. The national treasure-level talent, bug healing ability, solved the disease that could not be cured before, but no one protected him, and he was kidnapped by a garbage terrorist organization. The latter part is even more outrageous. You said that human beings will be squeezed by the star beasts to the point where they have no room for survival and are about to be exterminated. You even engage in academic monopoly. A textbook writer actually forced a national treasure-level genius away casually. If this were the case, humans would have become extinct long ago. Stop, slip away, write a creative and refreshing article like this

After the end of Chapter 257, in the third volume, will you become an immortal? Was it unfinished before? Before 257, it was a version similar to Doomsday. This is a bit of a big leap.

Everyone, I am here to send you a wife again

At present, I have seen several logical confusions in Chapter 40 1. The talent is so awesome and has been proven in practice. Why is there no protection from the school and the military does not send someone to contact the protection in time? 2. In the top domestic schools, why can non-school personnel come and go at will, and can kill people and kidnap? 3. It is clearly stated that procreation is encouraged, why can't men enter the girls' dormitory? How did the mothers in the dormitory give birth to those babies? 4. The person who wrote the teaching materials has never practiced cultivation himself, and he is still so authoritative that others can only act like a licker? 5. Domestic first-class schools can be threatened by a director's daughter to expel national treasure students at will and quickly 6. Why are schools controlled by capital?