Virtual Reality Bloody Harvest

The writing is great, and the game world can be so alluring.

The writing is not bad. It can make the virtual world so vivid. I only play games, but I didn't expect to be able to write and describe it so well. It's amazing.

The author's writing is good and has a sense of involvement. I look forward to the follow-up work.

It's getting more and more interesting. I like this work and cheers for the author (ง •̀_•́)ง

I feel like the background is good, but I don't understand it very well. The narrative jumps around and I can't read it coherently. I should have played a dungeon at the beginning, right? What kind of rewards are there after beating? What abilities does the protagonist have? The back directly turns into a kneeling board. This is too jumpy. It feels like a lot is missing.