A Sleeve of Chrysanthemum Fragrance

Ahem, I have a question. What does the protagonist's voice sound like? Has his voice changed since he changed from female to male?

It feels like the chapters in the whole book are not coherent, and there are gaps between each chapter. The time points of the previous and following chapters are not very accurate. The time of the next chapter occurs before the previous chapter. It is more like a supplementary explanation that suddenly came to mind. Every time I finish reading a chapter, I am still a little confused. I still need to recall the previous chapters, and even have to wait until the next chapter to get the result. , It feels like this is not like a novel, there is not much correlation between the top and bottom. Each chapter is more like a relatively independent composition. The beginning of each chapter is a new beginning. Instead of starting with the end of the previous chapter, readers will feel confused when reading {"NickName":"Author","UserId":90646}

It's only Chapter 40, am I really too greedy? I really hope this book will keep improving.

I think there is no problem with the smoothness of the writing. Even when I read a novice, I don't read every line at a glance. If I read it carefully, I won't miss the explanations and foreshadowings. Of course, I am not good at writing, so if there are subtle contradictions, I have to rely on other book friends to correct them. (As for the bug settings, if you think twice, just pass the blame to others 😜)

The author actually got carsick hahahahaha, it seemed like he was having a lot of fun

It would be great if I could get recommended

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง