I Really Haven't Cultivated Immortality

First of all, the author should not write too messily Secondly, give the protagonist so many things in the early stage You may not be able to write it in the later stage I hope you can make changes, I will give you a recommendation vote.

Is the author kidding himself? The various settings are unclear, and often the various settings are gone after half a sentence? What do you think? Especially the career information part, how do other people do it?

Is the author not a newbie? Why are some settings and plots so confusing? You only have a few months to go and start staking your claim? It has been several years since Britain left the European Union. You can take your time and write down some basic elements of the plot, and the description of the battle is really indescribable! If you want to cultivate but not practice, if you want career information but no key information, you will be the master of the small world as soon as you change your job, then you can't be the master of the infinite planes in the future? The eternal and only true supreme master of the world? Good products require craftsmanship and polishing, and if you want your stuff to sell well, it takes even more effort!

It's a mess, with a confused face, and basically no description of the battle. It's unclear what the specific abilities of the various levels are. Just like this, the protagonist A goes up and the battle ends, and I don't know what was written.

There are too many poisonous points. There is basically no career setting, and there is even zero background explanation! Then the characters who appeared were all more awesome than pig's feet! Even the extras are awesome! The pig's feet are nothing but rubbish! The key point is that the pig's feet still have golden fingers, and they still have divine status! As long as something happens, the pig's feet will be beaten severely by the trapper every time! I've never killed a sidekick! It ends amicably every time! Because I can't beat him! This is a big question for the author! Do you like to torture the master? It's been more than forty chapters, and pig's feet are still so rubbish? ! But I think if this continues, the supporting actors will become so powerful! How do pig's feet stand up? ! Died from poison! I can't stand it! Back off, back off!

The protagonist was killed by a wolf, returned to reality, and killed a chicken kobold in a single fight? I am also afraid that the country will know how serious this violence is and how dirty my mentality is?

He's poisoned to death, even if he got the golden finger, he's still a garbage protagonist

The dream world, the spiritual world, and the world of all spirits look familiar. Every time I read the introduction, I will be reminded of the supernatural dawn.

It's really uncomfortable for the protagonist to go out with a knife. He doesn't know what's going on, so he just acts recklessly. It's so embarrassing. Who in the right mind would step forward, because he doesn't want to die quickly enough? The author also said that the protagonist was originally cautious, but his blood boiled when he heard this. I can only say that you are happy.

I read so many novels, and every novel talks about the empire, and every time I have to compromise, I feel disgusted. How powerful the empire is, how powerful it is, can there be a new approach? Not everyone likes to be a dog! Not everyone likes peace . Overall, this book is pretty good, right?

He slipped away after two chapters, too poisonous... It's no problem to be killed by wolves at the beginning, but suddenly he can be killed by kobolds and idiots. It's not logical at all.

The exercises, spells, etc. That are practiced are all incomprehensible. It doesn't feel like writing a novel, it feels like a game. Picked it up. Shouldn't magic be learned? What about fire, earth, and water? There are no moves in fighting, it's all about random beatings. The mage doesn't know magic, so I can't understand what you wrote? It feels like something pieced together in the game. Not systematic.

Still revived? I vomited these four words when I heard them, and I told them to leave when I saw them.

After reading dozens of chapters, I was confused about the strengths and weaknesses of professional players, and the battles were basically brushed off. The battles ended inexplicably without even throwing a fireball. Others could still tell that the protagonist was very strong. I was confused when I saw it. Did the protagonist magnify the sword or kill by leapfrogging? How did you know that the protagonist was very strong? . The setting framework is not done well, and the core of professional combat power is not highlighted. Although the subject matter is there, I have read too many books of this kind. Nine times out of ten, it is eunuch. The most important professional combat power is not well set and planned. The next few hundred thousand words can only be used in daily life. The author has nowhere to write. As for eunuch, I have said this to several novels. Unfortunately, they are all eunuchs.

Why is there information pollution in the protagonist's small world? Why doesn't the protagonist try to see if the golden finger can absorb it? And shouldn't the protagonist deduce the second-level path and then work hard?

I like this subject matter, and I have read everything the author has written, and I quite like it. Generally speaking, it started well, but I feel that the author introduced the world of spirits too early, and then maybe he went too far in writing. Now it seems that he can't take it back, and he can't control the direction. It feels like it is about to collapse. Maybe the author is aware of it, so now he has to give up the plot on earth and start over in the world of spirits. I don't know how the writing will go after that, but I think the author needs to straighten out the outline now and have a rough overall plan. If the writing goes off track again, he probably won't be able to take it back. In fact, I feel a pity about the part about the dream world and the spiritual world. When I was reading the book, I saw that the protagonist has a white mountain world, which is still a small world with potential. I thought that the future development would be that the protagonist takes resources from the dream world and the real world to develop the white mountain world, and then as mentioned in the book Like the setting of the game, it devours other small worlds to grow, turning him into the main character's base, and then uses the information of the small world and the information of the current world to deduce his career path with a golden finger. It is all-encompassing and has endless possibilities, so a Kongmingxian begins to appear to dig holes for the future. Unexpectedly, I wrote about the arrival of a secret realm, and then occupied the secret realm. The dream world and the spiritual world were not written, and then the real world collapsed. The protagonist relied on the resources and information in Jiangcheng to deduce the future path. To compare, it is like a person born after the apocalypse got kindergarten and first and second grade books in elementary school. With a learning machine, he not only completed elementary school, but also deduced all the knowledge in middle and high school. Although the author used the sacrifice from the World of All Souls to forcefully solve the problem, cultivation is like the science of another world. You have to go step by step. If you skip a level, the foundation is not solid, and you will not be able to understand it. Also, those basics are said to be the work of the World of All Souls. There will definitely be missing some key parts. They cannot give too much advanced information, and the earth cannot accept it. It's too advanced, even if the sacrifice speeds up, there must be a process, and the rules of the earth and the world of spirits must be different, and they cannot be completely applicable. The earth also has local myths and so on. The earth has absorbed their world rules and can produce information and resources suitable for our local area. The profession that the protagonist can deduce based on the information of this world is the most suitable for him. The occupations in the world of spirits are mainly based on the information of the creatures in the world of spirits. Our own information is biased towards the earth. If we learn from others, it will definitely not be as perfect. If you are low-level and don't feel that you are high-level, you will definitely not be as good as others. In such a long paragraph, I can write a lot, more secret realms will come to explore, and then the White Mountain Realm will be developed, swallowing up other small worlds and growing, the local myths of the earth will come, and I can also write about the world of all spirits to speed up the integration of the earth. Hundreds of chapters could have been written about Tianjiao using the small world of the spiritual world as his basic plan to go to the world of spirits and fight for it. Now he can only forcefully wash away the immortals in the sky, and then abandon the earth to fight in the world of spirits. He may even bring the Baishan world back, but the situation abroad cannot be covered at all. It is also possible to write about meeting foreigners in the world of spirits, but not on earth. It is really a pity. In short, the author carefully organized the outline and wrote about the world of spirits. I think my idea can be used to write a novel. The author might as well consider rewriting 😁😁😁 as I said (I spent two hours writing this post)

Also, the protagonist has a small world, why not expand it? And, the protagonist's small world should have some output every day, which will be helpful to the protagonist, right?

The background is a bit unclear, the setting is a bit messy, and the plot is not that interesting. Personal feeling.

I laughed at the vagueness of the protagonist's career progression. Toward the end, I feel like I'm not writing about the protagonist anymore.

Chapter 22: How many people ran away when the poison started?

The food is tasteless! Fortunately, the first few chapters are nothing new... Nothing new at all.

The update is not good. It took 4 months to reach 125 chapters. I looked at the table of contents and saw that it's still there. It's a bit slow.

Could you please tell me if this article has a single heroine, no cp, or a harem?

After reading the previous ones, I think the creativity is very good.

Today's book titles are more unique than the last

Chapters jumped around, there were no activities in between, and it still wasn't uploaded.

I skipped a few chapters and found that the setting of Goldfinger seemed to be similar to one I had read, but that one seemed to be based on Western Crusoe elements. Goldfinger can also detect career information, but it seems that Goldfinger has similar settings that add points.

The revival of spiritual energy in modern cities is very difficult to write, and it is easy to be full of loopholes if the setting is not good. In fact, it is easier to write about the revival of spiritual energy in an ancient environment, and there will be less frequent 404s. Wouldn't it be enough to arrange the protagonist to travel through this world where spiritual energy is revived in an ancient environment?

How many heroines? Single girl, multiple girls or no heroine?

It's quite beautiful, but it's a pity that it's a eunuch. The author doesn't know how to give a name. You can call me a mountain god and I want to become an immortal. Isn't that good?