The Last Calamity

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Well done to the author! I've read ten chapters and left a review. Please forgive me if I'm wrong. I'm a newbie too. Let's make progress together. 1. Let's talk about the overall framework and theme first. After the death of the strong woman Yang Qingqing, she traveled to a certain ancient dynasty and was reborn. Unlike other rebirth stories where she was reborn into a certain host, Yang Qingqing was directly reborn. The story begins when Yang Qingqing was born from her mother's womb. Yang Qingqing's Golden Finger carries the memory of her previous life and the magical pastoral space in her mind. Judging from the plot we have seen so far, the following story should be the story of Yang Qingqing (called Yang Qingqing after rebirth) who rose up in ancient times to start a business and fall in love with her strong and capable woman and the pastoral space. Basically, the plot of this framework is not complicated and very complete. Nowadays, heroine novels are still very popular. The author's thinking is very clear. I really hope to see Qingqing meet the gods and kill the gods and meet the Buddha and kill the Buddha soon. However, I think the author is a bit anxious to kill readers. When I read Chapter 5, Qingqing was still a little baby, and the focus of the story was still on Qingqing's cheap parents, telling the story of his father's generation. It feels like some readers who were drawn in by the introduction might want to read the heroine's story more quickly. In the first five chapters, if you don't read the introduction, you might even suspect that Zhang is the heroine. 2. Following the previous point, let's talk about the three golden chapters. Because I have just talked about the first five chapters, the story still feels like a "prologue" (the same as me... Some bosses said that my prologue was too long). Three golden chapters are not inevitable. After all, many good books get better as they go on. For example, in this one, when I read the tenth chapter, I felt that the whole story flow was smoother and the heroine began to shine. But the three golden chapters do have value. After all, newcomers like us often have to rely on the opening to attract readers to follow. 3. Highlights: Contradiction setting with Chinese characteristics. Did the three golden chapters of this book not create conflicts to attract readers' interest? Of course not. Even though the story hasn't reached the heroine yet, the battle between Zhang and her mother-in-law is so exciting—and so real. This tense, sometimes tense, and sometimes slow-down struggle between mother-in-law and daughter-in-law is very Chinese. I especially want to praise the author for describing the dialogue very well. The personality characteristics of different people can be felt from the dialogue. I feel that the author is someone who knows very well about rural life. His rural details are very delicate, and he may have been influenced by the rural novels of some famous writers who are now famous. When I read the first chapter, I was in a daze, feeling that I could vaguely see the forbearance and spirit rooted in the Chinese countryside in Bi Feiyu's "Corn", Yu Hua's "Alive", and Chen Zhongshi's "White Deer Plain". Of course, there is a little drama in this, and as you read it, you will forget that you are reading a time-travel novel in ancient times. 4. Give me some suggestions. There were some minor issues with punctuation and paragraphing in the first one or two chapters. Someone must have raised them, and they were improved after reading a few more chapters. I still hope that the author can advance the plot faster. Like Chapter 6, where time flies, this type of chapters without actual conflicting plots can be shortened. Write so much first. Keep up the good work, author!

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The heroine's grandparents and grandmother are so good, why do you still help them? Hey, I can't be that holy, so I don't have a golden finger, right?🤫

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