Pluto Pursues His Wife, Reborn, Counterattacks and Is Taken Away

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A good book, I hope others can read it

It feels a bit messy, but the writing is good

The writing style is okay, but needs to be improved. The sense of substitution is average, the emotional description is not delicate enough, the pace of the story is a little fast, and the number of words in each chapter is a bit short, it seems that it is only 2,000 words at most. It can be seen from between the lines that the author is a really cute new author, and the author is probably a bit young, probably not very old. The narrative is simple, many of which are written in one stroke, mixed with some styles of fantasy novels. The author's character creation of the heroine should be based on herself, but the creation of other supporting characters is not enough. From the beginning of the novel to the latest chapter, I found that the style of this book is indifferent and has a relaxed and lively rhythm. This style can be traced back to the characteristics of the female channel novels on Tencent in Chuangshi Bookstore three years ago. If my prediction is correct, the author's mind is still simple and he has not been affected by too many social influences. I hope the author will write better and better, and don't forget his original intention. I hope that the style of the subsequent stories will be maintained. It is recommended that the author practice his writing more, and at the same time reflect on why other people's novels are popular? And the shaping of plot and story development. I also hope that the author will read novels of the same type and learn from them. Of course, I also hope that the author will write more and more exciting stories in the future.

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~