Get the Lie and Truth System at the Start

It feels like the protagonist is more in line with the personality of an ordinary person at first, and he is slowly starting to grow through the side effects of the system. Emmmm. . . Become a "social elite"? Entering commercial espionage and underworld too early is a bit toxic. After all, the protagonist has no real strength. (Maybe it's because the system was upgraded as early as possible to arrange the plot, after all, the reward is 10 million) The plot arrangement is too rigid, and it feels like forcibly pushing the protagonist forward. As a kind of refreshing novel, it is better not to use too many rigid plot-promoting methods. I hope that the other information master will remind me of a certain book on Feilu that repeats the same day for a thousand years. Overall, I personally like this book very much. Good job, author!

Damn it lowers your IQ, why is the protagonist a virgin? It's really toxic. The recommendation votes are generated by brushing them up, right?

This book really ruins my outlook. Vulgar language, bad money-first values. I don't want to make any more comments. The author still has a long way to go. If he is still at this level, sooner or later he will be in trouble.

Sorry, I embarrassed everyone. I was poisoned to death before I could survive the third chapter 😰

How to put it, the protagonist is either following the routine or on the way to the routine, but it is full of so-called poisonous points. It will be a bit refreshing for newcomers who have just read the novel. I have read many Shenhao novels. The only bright spot of this novel is Goldfinger. The other content will be known from the beginning. There is nothing novel, the pace is too fast, and there is nothing that can retain old bookworms.

1. The plot is cliché The plot should be the first of the six elements of the novel. The previous plot is quite cliché. It is nothing more than pretending to be 13 → being looked down upon → being slapped in the face. Some faces are slapped on the spot, and some are slapped after a while. And there are some arrangements that insult your IQ, so I won't go into details. 2. Poor character creation Not to mention the protagonist, Dio is a stinky character with a very unpleasant personality. A small person cannot achieve great things if he cannot change his habit of boasting. The author may have set it up like this on purpose, fast-paced, and learning from 🐠, but... The readers of Qidian can't accept it. The same goes for the supporting characters. The people who provide face slaps are basically the same flat characters. Although it is not enough to call it a problem, at least there should be something different for each supporting character, such as bad breath, good yin and yang, eyes higher than the top, etc. 3. The environment settings and details are not in place There are basically no details, and the environment is empty, giving a strong sense of unreality. There is too little foreshadowing and no connecting clues, making the plot development a bit confusing. This is probably the point of persuading people to quit in the first dozen chapters. I heard from the author that he later changed his mind and started a new life. It remains to be seen what will happen after chapter thirty-six.

As an old bookworm, an old reader of high-v for 10+ years with an average of 20 monthly votes, I have a few words to say. The author's selection of materials is very good, and the design ideas of Golden Finger are also very good, but! Yes, but here it comes. But if the author wants to write a pretentious article, you must at least know some basic information about the things used for pretense and have some style. Everyone in the 21st century knows what a wealthy person is. Then the interpersonal relationship and the shocking experience, please say goodbye to the world. Summary about the author: Lack of common sense and low level of education. Still unwilling to do some data collection.

Poison resistance is 20,000. After reading Chapter 13, I really can't stand it anymore! Too retarded

Not vomiting, not happy. Just write well about Shenhao. Isn't it comfortable to spend money to pick up girls? Wouldn't it be nice to buy it when you get a discount and build an artificial intelligence? Is it qualified to engage in intelligence and participate in the battles of other people's big groups and families before they are fully developed? Do you still need ten million to rent out a few houses every day? When you go into a nightclub, you bump into some sleazy people, and you break out in a cold sweat. Is there something wrong with that? You didn't buy fighting, didn't strengthen your physique, and didn't upgrade the system. How dare you be so wasteful? I originally thought that I didn't buy fighting because I didn't have enough money, but it turned out to be because I was stupid. . .

I can't stand it anymore, it's suitable for beginners to watch without thinking, and the various plots and routines are slow to follow. The protagonist is a pure silk man, the protagonist and supporting characters have touching IQs, and the author does not check and write down all kinds of bags, cars, and luxury accessories, just the name of one brand. Hmm, there are too many poisonous points. This novel feels like the author's usual YY stuff. It's hard to read with your brain.

Apart from showing off, just on the way to show off, there is nothing to see.

I originally thought that there would be some flaws in the first ten chapters or so, but then I read chapter 30... I found that I was still like a bird, even the poisonous Shennong couldn't hold it, and I was very curious how I got on the homepage.

I don't know what to say. I read dozens of chapters and I just can't stand it anymore. The protagonist is just a bitch with a brain problem, the various slap-in-the-face plots are extremely blunt, the villain's IQ is not at all online, and all the writing is awkward. Please, please write well. This is the first time I evaluate a book like this. I really can't stand it anymore. I lost it.

Why is it all the same routine lately, where everyone takes a position and then shows off and gets slapped in the face?

I haven't finished the run yet, it looks like I'll have to read a few more chapters.

Especially wonderful. It makes people enjoy watching it. (It's okay, I can still hold on)

This refreshing article is well written. Anyway, refreshing articles generally do not need to be read with the brain. If it is too serious, it will be boring. I support the author and come on (ง •̀_•́)ง. However, there is a flaw, that is, the proportion of the value of the bragging tax is not fully calculated. This is a flaw and has nothing to do with the writing style. There is also the issue of unifying the amount of the bragging tax. It can be changed to the amount of each transaction, and added 1-3 times a day, so that the hole is filled. However, because it is a Shenhao type, the number of times can be increased as you upgrade. Small, after all, you need to accumulate funds in the early stage, and you can slowly make use of the previous funds in the middle and later stages. I hope the author will consider some suggestions. Finally, this is a cool book worth reading for little bookworms. The author's ideas are quite interesting. Old bookworms are benevolent, and they are generous and give the author a way to survive. After all, writing a book is not easy.

It won't work until you reach Chapter 8. Please don't make the protagonist so stupid.

Writing a variety show again? Mr. X? Others are addicted to playing games, but you can't write variety shows and you still write variety shows like crazy?

Repeatedly slapping someone in the face and pretending to be cool, having no goals in life, not knowing what they want, repeating the same routine!

Chapter 491 updated today, author, are you serious? The first 450+ of this routine are all the same, you can't change it. The whole advanced routine is a slap in the face, you have to make others think it's not OK, and then the pig's feet are OK, so you can forcefully pretend.

Bad ending. . . . . . . . End in a hurry! Somehow the finale is over!

To be honest, this book is well written and relatively logical, but it is a pity that it has withered.

The same routine is from a few years ago. Others look down on him and then help him pretend. The content after that is basically the same, a bit poisonous.

I suggest changing bragging to daydreaming. Is one's bragging still bragging?

After reading dozens of chapters, I feel like a normal person shouldn't act like he's never seen a woman before. I also have a system. Are you afraid that no woman will like you? I can't find a woman. It's a bit toxic and I can't stand it anymore. Give up.

I've read almost 300 chapters, and it's quite outrageous that the male protagonist is just a landlord.

The main character is a licking dog, that Chen Anlu, pretending to be her boyfriend and giving away bags, poisoning people to death when they see this

Is this so fucked up? ? ? And you didn't even write a closing speech? ?

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