Douluo: the Ups and Downs of Our Lord

There are two main Poisonous Points: Poisonous Point 1: The protagonist has no clear plan for the process of obtaining the soul ring. Not to mention other things, the protagonist has already reached the Lake of Life, but he is still undecided and thinking wildly in his heart; when Tianmeng Ice Silkworm wants to take the initiative to sacrifice, the protagonist is actually "very surprised"... He is really convinced. He is so ambitious to find the million-year soul ring that he has not even planned how to convince others... Poison point 2: Tianmeng Ice Silkworm takes the initiative to sacrifice. Wouldn't it be nice to kill the protagonist after escaping from the trap and go solo? Why sacrifice if there is no benefit? The idea of ​​​​sacrifice to become a wisdom soul ring must have been practiced for ten thousand years. Tianmeng was still a little cute at this period (Fog) Others can be explained by luck and bad luck, but these two points are too poisonous. It's better for you to open a bigger dungeon than to open an IQ dungeon!

Here is a suggestion for the author: The City of Killing should try to reduce the description of bloody scenes as much as possible, so that the description can be less detailed. Be more objective and elliptical. After all, blood makes people uncomfortable. The main attraction of the author's book is the unique and original plot. There are still fewer Douluo colleagues in the Wuhundian camp than in Tang San's camp. And there are many original plots by the author. , The author can use the emotional line between Bibi Dong and the protagonist to develop into a line to unfold daily life, which can be more attractive to watch. It can also expand the audience of your article. After all, there are still many people who like to watch daily life. 🙂

Who is the heroine? Is there a Bibi Dong? 😃

The plot before it was released was a little bit toxic, but the plot after it was released was inexplicable. What the hell is a prison riot? Then how stupid is it to use yourself as a bargaining chip? Shouldn't we decisively give up self-protection in this situation?

The author's logic is very clear! Come on! I hope it won't collapse like other books of the same type!

Full reservation, just don't want eunuchs, by the way, aren't the two female leads in Ah Yin good? Please improve

The protagonist ➕Bibi Dong➕Wulhundian can completely make Wuhundian dominate the world for eternity. Come on, old monster Xingxiu 😏

There are 7 books in my bookshelf, but all the recommendation votes are given to you every day, so let's work harder and add more 😏

These two heroines are just right, no more. You should pay more attention to Bibi Dong. In the original novel, she was supposed to have a good ending, but the result was so tragic. I really like her. In fact, it doesn't matter whether Tang San is in this book or not. By the time Ah Yin reaches adulthood and gives birth to a child, Pig's Foot will have already become a god for many years. After all, Tang Hao was already in his forties when Tang San was born. 😄🤓

Full reservation, recommendation votes are also given, don't be a eunuch, please give me a boost.

The first three chapters are very discouraging. Let me tell you something for newcomers. After awakening the martial spirit at the age of six, the protagonist ran to the Star Dou Forest alone without saying a word. Not to mention that it is so far from your home to the Star Dou Forest. How did you, a six-year-old kid, manage to get there? You, a little kid with some knowledge about the wild, dare to enter a forest? ! ? In reality, if a little kid goes to a forest full of wild animals like this, he will die in a few days, right? What's more, a forest full of spirit beasts? Let me ask you, what strength does a little kid have? Do you have a system or are you born with divine power? It's really poisonous. If you can bear it, try reading it. If you can't bear the fact that I wasted a few minutes on you, you can leave. The author's writing style is not bad, but the characters' IQ and logic are really eye-catching. I suggest you write more novels and think more deeply.

The ten-year soul ring persuades people to quit, the brainless enter the core area to persuade people to quit, the author is too lazy to change the skills to persuade people to quit, God's perspective becomes the bat's perspective to persuade people to quit, the soul impact name persuades people to quit, Shennong is dead, I wish everyone well, anyway, I can't stand it anymore

Well, the author's heroine should be Bibi Dong! In the original work, Qian Xunji had a relationship with Bibi Dong because he didn't agree with Bibi Dong and Yu Xiaogang, that loser, so if the protagonist and Bibi Dong were together, Qian Xunji wouldn't object, so there shouldn't be a relationship between Qian Xunji and Bibi Dong, right?

All nailed, give me a monthly pass, the author you know →_→ fine

Those who do not abandon the book after reading three chapters are all werewolves

It's well written, but too little.

Don't enter if you have poor endurance. The protagonist is someone who is looked down upon by others. The protagonist was arranged by the author in the early stage. He is too weak. Others are okay. What do you think of the ten-year soul ring in the early stage? A hundred years is not enough? The reason why Huo Yuhao is white is because his mental power and strength are too weak. The mental power of a time traveler is so poor, haha, and he was given a martial spirit that others looked down upon. Look who looks down on Tang San's Blue Silver Grass.

The author should also include Ah Yin. How about two female protagonists? ? After watching the anime, apart from Bibi Dong, the one who felt moved was Ah Yin 😁

I have a question, doesn't Tianmeng Iceworm have some dialogue with the protagonist? Just like Huo Yuhao and it, I think its role can be added, and at the same time, the author can also improve the number of words●●

Should the author consider Liu Erlong? There is no need to accept her, as long as she doesn't love Yu Xiaogang. Yu Xiaogang is a scumbag who won't leave any girls for her.

Bibi Dong is very good now 🙂

It has become a habit to read comments first and then read books~

It's so damn toxic, you can't watch it with your IQ in mind

It really doesn't look good, there's nothing interesting about it

Obtaining the soul ring in the early stage is obviously a forced intelligence, and it is not a child who has traveled through time. There are club conflicts when entering the academy. It is quite outrageous. It looks like the style of a novel a few years ago, just like writing about e-sports and playing in campus leagues and Internet cafe leagues.

After all, Tianmeng is not a million years old, it is better to have a soul ring and a soul bone, the soul ring is 990,000 years old, the soul is chaotic and the soul is shocked, the soul bone is 990,000 years old, the skull is, and the spirit detection spirit is shared. If you are not a million years old, you should not write about the same soul ring and four soul skills as Huo Yuhao but no soul bones. It is too poisonous.

Goodbye, me. . . . Poison resistance. . . Ahem, it still doesn't work. . . .

Hey, are you handsome?

When I saw the third picture, I wanted to ask him how he got into the inner circle?

What can I say, I don't know why 😳 I just hate Tianmeng