Almighty Striker

I read all the first thirty chapters and skipped through the later chapters. I felt that the NBA in the author's eyes was very different from what I understood. The first point is the size of the contract. A 2+2 second-round rookie contract worth tens of millions was impossible in 2008 (I also commented on it in the article). Generally, it is about 2 million for 2+1 or about 1.5 Million for 1+1. There is also a sneaker contract. The average rookie contract is at least 2 million per year. You are going against the sky. Do you want to know the contract extension provided by Nike to Curry? 2.5 Million per year, that's someone who has scored 54 points. This is also the reason why Curry jumped to UA. Even if you have a Chinese status bonus, you, a second-round pick, can't get this contract, and most second-round picks get contracts of 50,000-500,000 per year. If you are given 2 million, what should you do if others also need big contracts to renew? Work is hard to do! The second point is the understanding of physical fitness. If you don't cheat, you can barely resist James in 2008. That is the Cavaliers' peak version 1.0 Body. The only people in the league who can barely do it are Pierce, Ci Shiping, and a few first brothers. Your physical fitness in your rookie year is as good as others who have been honing it for several years and ten years in the most professional league. What is this called? This is called overflowing with talent, and you are also skilled in dribbling, accurate shooting, and qualified defense. With this, you may fall into the second round? This is a strong contender for the No. 1 Pick, at least a lock for the top five! The third point is the description of hanging. The author's description of this point is extremely vague. For example, if you increase physical strength, endurance, and physical strength, when you say increase it to the peak, what kind of peak is it? Take physical strength as an example. Are you talking about the peak of O'Neal or James? Or is it the same as Duncan before he was seriously injured? The peak of endurance and physical strength is that of Kojo or Hamilton? If you don't write these things clearly, it will make people feel uninvolved and confused. You said I should include all the top ones, but it doesn't look like what you described later, which will make people confused. You need to have a template after cheating, so that people have something to refer to, so that what we watch will not be confusing! A few thoughts in my heart are relatively straightforward. I hope the author will not be angry.

They were persuaded to quit at the beginning, and 211 people imitated Curry's shooting. It's outrageous. As a third-year student, in middle school, no matter how tall or thin you were, the court was all about post-up singles. In high school, the court was all about holding the ball with one hand and rushing in with the other hand separated from your life. In college, the Warriors had just won the championship in 2015, and in 2016 there were a lot of push shooters on the court. Just me, from middle school to work, it was all mid-range jump shots + occasionally a few crotch breakthroughs, or running to catch the ball. I feel that your playing style should be based on your physical condition and talent as a reference. A Durant template does not rely on death jumpers and does not rely on height and wingspan. At the beginning, he shot very quickly, like Curry. It's almost the same as the trendy gangsters I used to have when I was a student.

It's really strange. Usually Chinese people are reserved, but when it comes to relationships between men and women, they have to be like Americans. It seems that if you don't indulge like Americans, you will be ridiculed. Are you a different kind of Muyang dog?

No passion, worse than a running account. At least the running account still has data.

It's so awesome 🍺, 780,000 words and 780 recommendation votes. You will be the first to suffer at seven o'clock.

Back then, there was no solution for the driver's attack. I didn't see the league changing the rules, but when it came to the protagonist, they changed the rules. It felt very poisonous. Maybe I read too many novels.

The description of the stadium lacks passion and looks like a text live broadcast, not like a novel, so it looks a bit bland, and the description of the protagonist's emotions has no sense of substitution. After reading more than 100 chapters, I have no feeling at all, hey. There is also very little dialogue and interaction, and sometimes there is no dialogue at all in one chapter.

I highly recommend the author to look back at the beginning. I really feel like there is no beginning or end. Why did the Olympics suddenly become the top 4? What is the function of the system? Only one experience card was given. The rest are not clean. There is no training. At least you took it with you. You went back to the United States directly. Rating 80+. Part of it 90. You are almost an All-Star. What are the functions of the system? How often can it be improved? You can't see it at all. Have your short arms grown again? After all, the protagonist is only 18 years old and in the developmental stage

Author, Pig's Feet needs to train other players! (Systematic, omnipotent) Pigfoot wants to create a sports group, including sports goods companies: sports clothing, sneakers, sports equipment, sports food and beverages, etc.; Sports clubs: including basketball teams or other ball games, not only in China, but also in other European countries (European leagues: basketball and football, etc.) And the United States; economic man companies, and other companies, and finally become a sports giant. Through various selections, young players who are no more than 18 years old (preferably 15 or 16 years old) are selected to sign contracts. The higher the contract period, the better, which is no less than 15 years, and the liquidated damages are extremely high (at least 100 million U. S. Dollars). The longer the signing period and the higher the liquidated damages, the better the talent provided. Of course, wages and various guarantees are provided before starting a career, and a personal growth path is designed. Of course, there is a system to improve the loyalty of signed players.

The author has done a good job and has a few suggestions: 1. Write more character-building content, such as Dayao, Kobe, and Arab. Write them as living people. Don't just show their names without leaving any impression on the readers. He is 2.209Cm tall but only has a wingspan of 212cm. He is easily intercepted and his ability to hold the ball is limited. If he just uses the system to increase his offensive ability with the ball without modifying his static talent of wingspan, it will be very unconvincing. He also lacks height when playing inside, which affects his upper limit. Since we are all given a height of 209, why not follow Giannis Antetokounmpo's template? He is 210 cm tall, has a wingspan of 230 cm, and has Durant's shooting. Wouldn't it be beautiful?

It's great to be like Harden, who is free and can change every day. Other basketball novels all write that the protagonist is a good kid! He is a traditional man👨I don't go to nightclubs with my teammates! But what about reality? I don't believe that people who have a system to go to nightclubs without affecting their performance can't go back to nightclubs! NBA nightclub culture is such that the last way for people who want to be leaders to have a good relationship with their teammates is to go to nightclubs. It's almost 2020. Are you talking about a traditional man? Now even traditional women are gone! The author writes very well according to your ideas.

I can't stand it anymore. There are a lot of typos. The plot is a mess. I can't read Chapter 20.

I made it to the semi-finals of the Olympics inexplicably. There was no introduction to the system that suddenly appeared. I played the games without counting, and there was no sense of immersion at all.

The writing is dull and lackluster, the dialogue between the characters is too written, and the dialogue between the national team is even in a non-Chinese context.

It's a very hard battle. Without data, it's meaningless.

The article has no beginning or end, and the content is mostly perfunctory.

What a crappy timeline it was written. It jumped around. There was a trial training, a domestic training camp, a draft, and then directly playing the US team. What about the group stage? I just skipped over without mentioning a single word, which was so uncomfortable to watch.

After reading more than 30 chapters of the novel, I feel that it lacks passion and is more like a text live broadcast. The author's writing style may not be suitable for sports writing

What's written? I've read a few chapters. It's too bland.

Retelling the game? No data yet, I'm drunk

The reporter was reborn and added the system. He was admitted to university at the age of 14 and had an IQ. Becoming a god by playing basketball and building a business empire is not the same as just playing. There are also authors who write competitive novels and include the protagonist's data! How can you become a god without data or comparison?

Ten chapters for a season? Damn it, the playoffs need to be written in great detail.

Come on, it's a dry read, and the sense of immersion is a bit lacking.

This height sometimes goes from 206 to 209, which gives me a headache.

This book is the most trashy basketball novel I have ever read

It feels like prose, not coherent, and lacks passion on the court.

I don't understand, what the hell are you writing?

For the author's description of competitions, you can read Yang Zongde. His novels about competitions are really good.

What about game data? You should always write down how many points you got.

It's well written, but it's a bit messy and the key points are not highlighted.