Canyon Girl Flying Thunder God

I just watched it the day before yesterday. I browsed the comments yesterday and found out that I didn't win the S game... I feel like it's outrageous that you can lose even if you have a system. Go ahead and see if Coach C, who has been leading the top laner for a year, has no skills at all. He temporarily let the top laner take the lead. The protagonist won two games and had to switch back to an operational hero. The BP suddenly pulled away collectively and was very stiff. Losing is not unacceptable. After all, it is not a national team, so Yishou can understand it. But if you want to say that you dare not win because FPX has won the championship in history, then I definitely can't accept it. Then you should slow down your pace. Will the protagonist be the runner-up again after this year's championship? Losing is okay, but the reason must be acceptable to readers. The team can lose, but the protagonist cannot lose. The blame must be passed on, no matter how big or small. You can use ink to foreshadow the teammates' contempt for FPX. The author has given it a brief stroke, and it is not long enough to occasionally show affection. Losing, there is no reason, no one takes the blame, just can't beat, the protagonist can't win the championship after a year of failure, and if it's not a team problem, then whose problem is it? It can only belong to the protagonist, and even the system cannot pull it. What would you say if you win next year? V3 should be the upper limit, biscuits are also high-level stimulants, and the scoring system is also a hexagonal warrior (you can be caught to death even if you are here, and a perfect score should at least not be noticed by the opponent). The protagonist's room for improvement can be said to be blocked in this chapter, of course. It's not that it really can't be improved, but that subsequent improvements will break this scoring system, which makes this rating unreliable, dispensable, and rubbish.) How to improve the system's support next year? I guess it's about improving teammates, so that everyone can win like a dragon. But doesn't this still show the importance of teammates? Isn't it still necessary to shirk the blame this season? If you don't shirk the blame, you won't win this year but you will win next year. Do you think you rely on your teammates? Of course in team games, everyone has to eat their teammates, but you are a system host and you need your teammates to be stronger than the opponent to win. Isn't it very weak? Faker doesn't have a system to win a Triple Crown. If you have a system, you can't win four. It definitely won't work. It's very important to throw the blame away. If you don't throw the blame away, that's your problem. As for the author who said it was a brushstroke and not a brushstroke, the readers will only be more confused. You lost the World Championship finals in a brushstroke. Are you going crazy?

To be honest, I don't know why you stopped updating. I never play League of Legends, and I don't care which team is good. I just came here because of your book and writing style. Is this lol really as smooth as what you wrote? No. At this point, is it time to write your own path, or would you not be able to write without a schedule?

Personally, I feel that skipping the plot and directly writing about LCK and SKT is driving yourself to a dead end. Author, why don't you consider that if you can't write about the event, there is nothing to write about daily life in the live broadcast room, and the whole life? I found that after writing about the game, I entered a weird circle. The idiots were downplayed and the system did not have any new functions. The spring game was acceptable. Writing about the return of the Galaxy Team was really pushing myself to death. If possible, the author should greatly change the outline of the following lck. Most people who read novels like to read the whole story, not the text. It represents a competition, and people who read LOL novels basically pay attention to LOL. If it deviates too much from reality, it is really easy to lose readers. I have not subscribed to the last few chapters of lck because I have no taste. I sincerely hope that the author can consider it. Readers will not want the book they read to be so unfinished 🤤

The author obviously wrote a good article, but it's almost 300 chapters, and it's actually broken. An enjoyable article should always be enjoyable, and that's not how an abusive article is written. Even if a champion is added later, it will become nondescript. Xiao Beng is known to all the fans who have acted hooliganly in the past. Chapter 300 is a great novel, but you still add drama to the opposite side and the protagonist. No matter how you add drama, the novel will collapse once the protagonist loses in Chapter 300. The author must be a novice, right? To be honest, this novel is not well written. The whole novel is either playing a game or on the road to playing a game. The only bright spot is the fun. But the fun was gone later. I suggest the author to read "LOL Top Lane Witch", although the writing is not very good. But it's much better than you, and the overall framework is much better than yours.

This is not a cool article, and it is not recommended for those who like cool articles. What a waste of my starting point.

Today's chapter is indeed very well written, especially the part describing Xiaotian's psychology. The technique is indescribable🐮🍺. It's hard to say where the writing is good, but I just think it's very strong In short, it's pretty good, and I don't have much to say →These are two monthly passes for encouragement

Starting from "Poisonous Tongue", here I am. You're done. "Young Demon", I'm here again. You are a eunuch. "Literary Man", here I am again. You suck. "High School Student", I'm here again. You are a eunuch. "Stars", I come again and again. You are a eunuch. "Monster", I come again and again. You are a eunuch. "Canyon", I come again and again. What are you going to do this time? ……………………

There aren't many people anyway, I like women's clothing! ! ! Hahaha no one saw it! Cool!

No more pretending, I am a big boss in women's clothing, I show my hand

How can I not be a prisoner and not be a mess? Please do it okayヽ(￣д￣;)ノ

I remember a line from Mo Tong: Prejudices in people's hearts are like a big mountain I hope everyone will look at it rationally. If you are willing to keep it, please continue to read it. If you are not willing to read it, why did you come so quickly when Songzi opened a new book?

To sum up the plot, my bottom lane was blown up, my bottom lane was blown up again, my bottom lane finally turned around and then was blown up, bottom lane is too difficult

I think of a sports show I watched before. The protagonist was invincible in the early stage with the system plug-in. Then in the 2008 Olympics, he had to perform a series of tricks. He won 100 meters and 400 meters. In the 200 meters, he had to make a breakthrough in strength. Then his reaction ability was too strong and the machine judged him to be a false start and was immediately sent off. Although we all know that it is difficult to write after the protagonist wins a lot of championships, but if you force the loss, it will only make people give up. In the book in 2008, you had to compete in front of your own house.

Let's pay homage to my father-in-law who said "the ending is much more important than the process" and decisively cut off the unfinished book 🙂

"Okay, we can see that today the Royal Family also sent out their new AD player, the young player Uzi, who is currently the king of Ionia" "He still alive !" "Team-breaking maniac, family slave with four surnames" "Jian proudly holds the cup!" "That smile, smile to S9" "Uzi, forever awesome~" Goodbye, Jane proudly

After quitting for two months, people still gave me likes. The more I think about it, the angrier I am. I chased the finals for more than a month. In the end, I was fed by the runner-up passionately in the middle of the night. I was even able to lick my face and reply to lpl. It was really just the master's order.

Okay, eunuch, I suddenly remembered this book and came back to take a look and finally died. Why bother?

Congratulations to Songzi for being ranked among the top 20 poisonous authors in the voting of several large groups of the Qidian Mine Clearance Group. 😥😥

Well written, come on author Ji! I want the essence, hehe.

It's finally over. The days of gossiping in the comment section are over. It's been taken off the shelves and the author has been directly blocked 🙂🙂🙂

My wife is a dull-haired girl. What you wrote is a dull-haired girl. Is there anything wrong with rounding it up and adding it to me?

Alas, I originally thought that the author would have something to say when he lost the game, but I didn't expect that the new chapter would just show the video to wash his mind. Is this kind of cerebral palsy plot really just to force the plot to win the LPL championship? It's really sad, not only for the interesting plots the author wrote before, but also for the excitement, sadness, and happy feelings I wasted on this book. It's really sad. I said I abandoned the book in the comment area, but I couldn't help but click in. But as expected, I killed the plot for the sake of plot, washed it for the sake of whitewashing, and felt for the sake of feelings. There is no logic and no rationality. Every step of the plot development is expected by the comments in the comment area. The whole book is heading in the direction of derailment and will not look back. . . To actually say such irresponsible words that if you don't read the comment section, it will not affect your mentality. Including me and all the book friends who have subscribed, doesn't the author need to be responsible for these people? Isn't the proportion of readers important among the four elements of literary works? Xiao Dongzao is the eternal god, the puppet system, and the flying thunder god. These have no effect when the big dragon upgrades and the three-sword critical strike is lucky. Is this the protagonist's bad luck, or is the author's double standard, setting up Phoenix? Can the author ask himself this question? The whitewashing operation of the new chapter is simply a classic routine in the fandom. The classic video is played to whitewash the title. The protagonist is like a lost dog. He was sprayed and returned to LPL in despair before even winning the championship. Those who knew it knew that the author forcibly arranged for the protagonist to return to China. Those who did not know thought that fandom fans were invading the e-sports circle. Finally, I want to say something: I have never played LoL. I mainly play CSGO, GTA and console games, but this book once brought me a lot of happiness. It made me understand some e-sports knowledge. I was also excited for Xiao Dongzao to win the championship. But these are all based on a reasonable plot arrangement. This is my first long review, which brings me a book that once gave me happiness. Now, in my heart, this book is finished. Thank you for accompanying me. In addition, I heard that the author is a habitual offender, and I will not click on any of his books in the future.

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Because someone liked it, I came back to take a look, and took a vomit before leaving.

I was passing by and offered some incense. All I can say is, it's so good.

It's actually limited and exempt. I feel like I've lost 100 million. I can't soothe my heartache without giving me some sperm 😢

👍 From Songzi's first novel to now, I finally decided to write my first book review I don't need to ask the people who read this novel to know about the old two-dimensional world. It's a pity that Yanyun Songzi is no longer there. I miss her so much This should be the first game article Songzi has tried to write. If so, I think he is super talented. , You can continue to persevere. The character interactions written by Songzi are still so interesting. They are half-hearted but not HS, and the humor and scale are grasped at the same time. This is one of the highlights of Songzi's novels. Always seeing awsl in this chapter shows that the author's cuteness is not hidden I have been praising it for a long time, let's do some analysis The characters are very interesting, and they are reincarnated in time. Beautiful girl (this time it's a little lolita). This can be regarded as a reform of Matsuko, because all the previous ones have a characteristic that Nako is very big (this is a major characteristic of Matsuko). The character's character is still chaotic and kind, with a hint of cuteness. From the huge conflict between the character's heart and appearance, the author's inner interesting soul is written, and a beautiful dream is also depicted. There is a strong sense of immersion, and the superfluous characters are handled very well. The protagonist's father and daughter's mother are transportation tools that make it easier for the two of them to walk together in a legitimate way. It is a rare advantage to not write superfluous words. After all, some novels nowadays often feature passerby villains with unnatural backgrounds. Matt is an unexpectedly talented mid laner, but he is still happily sent away. Plot, to be honest, the plot in the game article is about some non-text content caused by the changes in the emotions of the people around him. Songzi controlled this perfectly, and controlled the text content and character interaction very well. The two did not conflict with each other. When it came to writing game articles, I wrote about games without deviating from the theme. The plot was highly controlled, and lightheartedness and comedy were always the mainstay, making the tense world competition full of fun. The logic is clear, without any ambiguities or problems. It never forces extra scenes, never adds too many strange settings to one character, and has never dug a big hole so far. When Matt appeared, I thought he was going to fly a plane, but Songzi still gave a satisfactory answer. This should be the best game article I have read so far. Update issues should be a commonplace among Songzi fans. After all, we owe so many updates, and sometimes it's a bit uncomfortable when there are no updates for no reason. I hope that the old pigeon can evolve into a second-update beast. It is highly recommended to enter the trap, join the Aunt Xiao family, and start the journey of tax evasion in the two-dimensional novel 😂

I'm thinking, if I can use 2 monthly passes, I can use 7 too.

12 Monthly tickets for a wife or add some essence Don't add some essence for me, I want some sugar

2023 I just recently read the author's book, From the Poisonous Girl to the God of Thunder in the Canyon. It's actually a pity that the unfinished eunuch of "Flying Thunder God in the Canyon" may be due to too much negative emotions in the comment area that caused the author's mentality to collapse🌚 Here I want to say something to the author, hoping to comfort the author's broken heart. The author's book "Flying Thunder God in the Canyon" is actually very good. As for the points in the comment section that I hate, I actually don't feel much about it. Maybe it's because I have an old mentality and don't pay much attention to this kind of winning or losing situation. What I value more is the author's shaping of the characters. Of course, in the finals, I think it can be handled better. After all, the protagonist Dongzao is not a god. The author can actually make the protagonist more miserable. For example, in the finals, it is directly written that Dongzao was overburdened mentally and physically due to multi-threading and vomited three liters of blood and was sent to the hospital. The protagonist is only a teenage girl who has not yet reached adulthood. No one will think that Dongzao is a god. 🌚 Writing this way may be better Young people are always young and energetic, and cool articles do not have to be invincible, they can also fall into the dust.