Department of Life and Entertainment

I don't know what's going on, everything else is fine but this heroine looks so disgusting! And the male protagonist has no backbone and just licks the dog

The protagonist said that he wanted to be a salted fish, and at the same time showed his talent,

Why do you need to add brackets () everywhere? ? ? ? ? ?

Boss, what are you trying to express? Why can't I understand it? 😰

The whole thing is contradictory, and the comparison before and after is a slap in the face. If you follow the trend, you should learn the essence.

If you don't like it at first, I'll withdraw first to respect you.

The front was fine, but suddenly a sharp turn scared a lot of people to death, so we left.

The article is okay, but there are too many typos and additions.

This is a crooked building, right? It's so embarrassing to see in 108 Space.

He is very good at portraying the character's personality from some particularly small details. Come on!ィ————Sんù

The front is fine, but why are there other planes in the back? ? Don't tell the truth

Who are you to be a salted fish? It's so easy to be a busy person. When you're idle, you'll feel cold.

The author, his words are so awkward and incomprehensible

There are some poisonous things in entertainment that you won't lose at all 😴

How can I put it this way? I feel that the reading is not smooth. There is no cause and effect. It jumps too much. I hope it can be changed.

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The first three chapters were quite confusing. . . . . . . .

The story structure is very complete, the plot is rich, and the characters are full. It shows the author's skill. Click on my profile picture and read the introduction. I wish you to become a god quickly┡ē, and give it a good review.