Save You from Worrying

After all, I made some novice mistakes, such as using too complicated sentences and liking to repeat. However, repetition is difficult to use. Then there is the poor description of the characters, which feels lifeless and like puppets. Also, the character settings should not be messy. For example, what kind of person is the protagonist? He is either cold or cheerful. The writing is a bit confusing, and I have no idea what kind of person the protagonist is. (This is a common problem for newcomers. I do it too. Let's work together)

I saw that the cover is very nice and I found that it has been added to the bookshelf. Let's cheer together＾0＾~

Good writing, cheers

Can you pay me a return visit and vote for me?

The language is okay, but the plot is too bland. It would be better if the plot was more vivid.