Long Sigh

[Vicious Tongue Book Review] I am an unusually poisonous tongue, so please be prepared. 1. First impression The title and cover of the book are not interesting, so just skip it. 2. Introduction When I saw this introduction, I wanted to ask the author why he couldn't think of writing such an introduction! What was the purpose of writing this long paragraph emmm. Introduction Introduction, a brief introduction to Ning's writing. Who is Ning writing this long article for? The key is that Ning's long speech has no substance at all. I can say that Ning's introduction is enough to dissuade 90% of readers. I have reviewed several books today, and Ning is the first one who did not deduct points from me in the first impression. It is not easy for readers to survive the first impression and click on the article, but Ning made such a point in the introduction. I saw that Ning also made a note in PS that he would not change the introduction. Ning... Ning's introduction can really be said to be too long and smelly. Although Ning pointed out how tragic the life experience of the male and female protagonist was, he did not throw out enough tragic stories to attract people's attention, and he made a long speech. I won't provide suggestions on what type of introduction to change, but there must be something wrong with Ning's introduction. 3. The first three chapters Let's talk about the wedge first. I have always felt that a well-written wedge can arouse readers' interest much more easily than the three golden chapters. Ning's wedge is still okay in terms of suspense setting, but Ning writes a lot of description at the beginning, which I don't recommend. As I said above, one of the functions of the wedge is to set up suspense and attract readers. Wedges do not unfold the plot more slowly than the main text and cannot speed up the pace. Wedges are a good opportunity to attract readers. The large amount of description at the beginning of the wedge will make readers feel tired. I know that the author may be trying to exaggerate the atmosphere, or he may be trying to attract readers with his writing style, but Ning is not a famous author, and readers will not wait for Ning to let go. I appreciate that Ning knows how to exaggerate the atmosphere, but long descriptions will be detrimental to Ning, so it can be shortened appropriately. As the saying goes, "all scenery language is love language", Ning knows how to render the environment, which is much better than many authors. However, I hope that Ning can make the scenery no longer an isolated scenery, but let the scenery become the external expression of the protagonist's emotion. This is the blending of scenes. In addition, I also found a very serious low-level mistake. This error can be found in more than 80% of the authors' articles, but I can hardly stand it. I can't tell the difference between "the", "de" and "". For example, the seventh paragraph in the wedge: These huts are very close to each other It should be "got" instead of "". There are similar questions below, so I won't give examples one by one. Ning is still making mistakes when writing essays that should be learned in elementary school. This makes me feel that I am not up to standard. I hope Ning will seriously learn how to use the three. 4. Writing The author's writing style is the best I have read since I started trying drugs. However, as mentioned above, I hope that the writing should not be self-indulgent, but should be described appropriately, and the description should be combined with the emotions of the characters. Taking it all together, apart from the introduction and the three unbearable features, this article actually doesn't have many flaws. Having said so much, I hope the author will stay calm and not hit me. The overall reading experience is good, go for it. ——Cheng Yici

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It is better to open it for reading You have read the wedge when updating this book review Personal opinion 😃 (does not represent objective facts) The description technique in the wedge is very good, and it has an immersive feeling. It is highly recommended! Recommendations 😊 The wedges were good, nothing to suggest. Words to the author😁 As a mystery writer, I actually like this work a little bit, and I will continue to write book reviews!

I'm a little panicked now. I'm writing a non-romantic brother-sister story, a drama-oriented story, with the main plot. Will anyone read it? If you have any suggestions, please mention them in the comments.

I discovered that I am a fool 🙂, and now I know that authors can post messages in the comment area.

Come on! Once you have more words, everything will be fine.

Subscribed! ! Please be more precise and more explosive! ! !

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The author must insist on finishing the writing 🤫

The title of the book has the flavor of ancient romance~ The text is very beautiful~ The writing is very smooth, and I read it very smoothly! The plot is also written very smoothly and fluently, without any abruptness! It's just that the previous text is a little wordy, which makes the plot a bit slow... But come on! ! !

The article is good and worth saving. Cheers to the author!