I Became an Investigator

I am a trumpet author, and I think my writing is pretty good. It's a pity that no one is watching. Hehehe→_→

Protagonist, sequence ten, mental patient,

It's interesting to read the beginning. I'll save it first. Come on.

I'm a little stuck today, but I seem to understand how to write a novel.

Finished reading it in one sitting. Still very interesting. It's a pity the lack of promotion. And I think it's also relatively niche. Not so easy to attract. The author's writing skills are slightly lacking. It became an embarrassing situation of neither getting up nor getting down. While writing about art, I also want to depict Tao. To the point where both sides are displeased. The protagonist's mentality is often portrayed too hard. On the contrary, it is inconsistent with the original character. Like a really calm person. Or for veterans who have experienced the previous worlds. It's impossible to have such a silly conversation where you still have to shout in your heart to calm down. Another example is the section with the white ghost on the train. As soon as the spiritual eyes observe the shape of the white ghost, they should instantly reflect it. This thing harvests souls. Rather than requiring a large section of bloody work later. There is an interesting difference between non-human beings or gods and humans. I am born with knowledge. When I see you, I will understand what kind of state you are in and what kind of abilities you have. Although the protagonist is progressing towards the evolution of an inhuman being, his mentality has always been that of an ordinary person, even that of a weak person. It's inexplicable that people can survive. The part where I was blindfolded and only used my mental power to open my eyes was well written. The car went into reverse again. Do I still need to take off the blindfold? Shouldn't I keep my eyes closed from now on? The protagonist gives the impression that he has taken one step forward and two steps back. There is no real strong heart! Only the weak will repeatedly emphasize that I need to be strong, and only the confused will emphasize that I need to be calm. The protagonist is not even as good as some ordinary bosses in reality who don't change their expressions even when the mountain collapses. How to be considered a strong person. What's more, he is also a strong man who specializes in spiritual power. Mental power is not just a technique studied through mathematics, but also requires a corresponding environment. Not cultivating realms but only cultivating techniques is like the two people in the Buddhist Scripture Pavilion in The Eight Tribes of the Dragon who only practice martial arts and don't read Buddhist scriptures. He will become obsessed with it. I just wrote it casually, I hope it won't disturb the author's writing intention.

After reading the beginning, I feel that it is well written. This virtual game that focuses on reasoning and solving puzzles is a bit like "Thriller Park". Why is it a light novel and not a game? Maybe more people will see it that way

By the way, has this book been signed? If you haven't signed it, why not try changing your name and submitting it to the game category? The style is so serious and completely incompatible with light novels.