Fighting to Break the Sphere Derivative Fanfic

Hahaha, my family burst out laughing. During the fighter stage, I said that I felt his surging fighting spirit and wanted to use the Heavenly Creation Palm. Hahahaha, I laughed to death. Why are you not afraid of beating him into adulthood all at once?

Well, I think this book is good. It was poisonous in the early stage, but gradually got better at the end. It can be seen that the author's writing style has improved. It is worth reading.

This is the real ascetic, nothing else! The road to finding the path is long

I think this book is better than Dou Po. The anonymity and low-key cultivation is not as powerful as Xiao Yan, who is famous all over the world, but I think it is more reasonable. What should I say? Xiao Yan was a Douzun seventh-level alchemist in his twenties. He is considered the world's number one genius. Without the aura of pig's feet, he would have been dead for hundreds of years. The Soul Clan can't all be fools, right? The Xiao Clan has been wiped out before and a super genius has emerged. Aren't they worried? No one will send someone to kill someone, right? It must be a one-hit kill. Is an ancient Dou Zun clan worthy of falling out and maybe still happy? How about all the way from Dou Zong to Dou Sheng's brain? So I think this book is more reasonable. Xiaoyan, with the name of Xiao clan, does not bring much benefit. Instead, he is hunted everywhere. If the halo is not strong, it will fade away! ! ! ! ! ! !

The female pig's feet are all gone, so it's such a lonely journey through time.

I couldn't stand it after reading the first chapter. Although it seems exaggerated that a fighter can practice heaven-level skills, it is not impossible. But it is too unreasonable for a fighter with such talent to start practicing heaven-level fighting skills 😅 No matter how powerful his soul power is, the main thing he relies on to practice fighting skills is fighting spirit. Even Xiao Yan only dares to start from the Xuan level. After reading the comments, I thought it was not the kind of Su Shuang novel that I would read, but I didn't expect that I was persuaded to quit after the first chapter. I don't know if the author will explain it later, so I'll just express my thoughts on the first chapter. Maybe this book is not suitable for me to read 😥

What is this thing? Fighters can practice heaven-level fighting skills. Are fighting skills the same as Neng Kung Fu? Isn't there a ratio of how much fighting spirit a fighter has? What kind of fighting spirit is needed to release sky-high price fighting skills? You don't know? You haven't watched the original version of Fighting to Break the Sky?

Although it is good to cultivate in secret and keep a low profile, it is too low-key. In the later stage, you have already become a one-star Dou Sage. You have to pretend to be a one-star Dou Emperor in front of Xuan Kongzi, a nine-star Dou Zun. Do you like to be a junior? In the fantasy world, the strong is respected. You have grown up, so you have to pretend to be a grandson. As a Dou Sage, compete with those Dou Emperors. Isn't it embarrassing? It doesn't look like this. It's like something is missing

The only ones left are the Ancient Bodhi Tree, Pure Lotus Demon Fire, and the Medicine Clan Pharmacopoeia. After these plots are over, it's time for the Soul Clan to show off their various rivalries and accept the inheritance of Tuoshe Ancient Emperor. Come on, four chapters a day, it's fun for you and it's fun for us too. It's really fun when everyone is happy

The author should be locked in a small dark room and not allowed to eat until he updates ten chapters.

If I continue to write a few more chapters, I will only write fanfics similar to that one. It may not be very good-looking. If anyone wants to read it, just leave a message on this post. After all, if there are too few people, it will be meaningless to write. You can't let me enjoy myself alone 🐷

The levels of people other than the protagonists of this book have been cut too hard.

The biggest failure is the wrong name. How many times can Xiao Ping be written as Xiao Yan? I have only read more than 40 chapters, and it has been more than 10 times 🙂

In this difficult time, I think you should update more. After all, everyone is staying at home. Come on, ten pictures a day is not too much, five pictures is just right🤓

This is the best Dou Po fan I've ever seen

You kept the original work down so low. During the period when you went to the Ancient Clan, those people should have been at the Dou Zun level, and you suppressed the people from the Ancient Clan to the Dou Emperor level. You probably didn't read the original work. At that time, the geniuses of the individual clans were all Dou Zun or above. Even if you want to set off, there is no need to write like this. You also ruined the original work and wrote those people with low strength, like the part about Han Yue. Han Yue was already a high-level Dou Ling when she came to fight the inflammation. She was already a Dou Wang sister at the Dou Huang level when she was forced to marry, but you just wrote her to the Great Dou Master 😅, and in the Sifang Pavilion section, the people who basically participated were at least Dou Huang. You also wrote about other people's Dou Ling 😅. It gets more and more outrageous later on and I have no comment.

What status, what rights, what kind of woman? In a world where strength is respected, you are nothing without strength. As long as you are strong, you will have nothing. This novel is so well written, I have worked hard all the way. Thank you to the author for staying with me for two days. I finally finished reading it, but I felt it was not enough. I really hope that the author can write a sequel. What happens after being promoted to Dou Emperor. Hahaha... I feel like I have to say it to the whole continent at the end. I have been promoted to Dou Emperor. From now on, my Xiao clan will be respected in Dou Qi Continent. The humiliation of thousands of years will never happen again.

Are you reading fan fiction and writing fan fiction? What the hell? ? ? ?

In the early stage, the writing was very good, but in the later stage, it was a bit bad.

The realm of the soul is not only improved by alchemists. The remnant soul of the Underworld Demon Saint in Dou Po said that the Underworld Demon Saint is an emperor-level soul. Anyway, I don't think the Underworld Demon Saint is an alchemist.

If you have such ability after traveling through time, you still need to grab the opportunity to be the protagonist. I don't believe that Dou Po Continent only has those opportunities. It's understandable that you grab some of them, but you can say goodbye to them all.

The writing is really beautiful, and it is a rare masterpiece among Dou Po fan fiction. I hope the author can write better novels. Come on＾0＾~

I don't recommend watching it, it's ridiculous, not to mention that it's a bit of a super model, but in the beginning, where did a little fighter get the fighting spirit to support the output of heaven-level fighting skills? ? It's really an invincible article In addition, you are so stupid and still follow Xiao Yan's path, you really have no creativity at all Book friends who like fandoms should be careful.

In fact, I don't understand why you write a novel, you write it, why do you still mock anti-inflammatory? You have a heart-burning heart, and you want to say that I really don't understand Yulexuan this time. This is nonsense, author, you don't need to write it, you know? Or you can thank me. Xiao Yan, if you write about him, you will offend some people, you know? You just need to write your story, you have to ridicule anti-inflammatory

I am Shennong, I have finished reading, em, this. Although the author suppressed the level, it is still understandable that the author made typos.

The Emperor System of Fighting Through the Sky, read it on QQ. I hope you can support it.

For cheating web articles, please do not compare them with the original works. There is no comparability. Besides, it's all free. Why are you complaining? Just read it. How come there are so many requirements? The author may have had a flash of inspiration and wrote it.

It took me an hour to read the entire book, but I just followed the plot without any new ideas. I struggled all the way to the top, and it didn't make me feel any better. I worked really hard to find something fun. I'm sorry, brothers, I tried my best.

The author's writing is good. I would like to recommend the book he wrote. Friends who are book-hungry can take a look. Just click on the avatar. It is non-toxic.

"Spirit Fire of Ten Thousand Beasts" is not "Spiritual Flame of Ten Thousand Beasts"