The Instructor Started with "I Am a Special Soldier"

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 70. What is it about? When writing about a domestically produced military force, he negotiates conditions with the country. He is not a mercenary. He is completely unorganized and undisciplined. If this is not the case, it is better to just write about fantasy.

The settings are in a mess, the recruits are bargaining with the Chief of Staff, and there is no professional ethics among soldiers. They are plotting with No. 1, And the privates are just joking to discuss the instructor's rights with a major, and all they can do is write nonsense.

I always feel that the author has some misunderstanding about the Chinese army and slipped away🥵🥵

The update is too slow. I hope the author will update it quickly.

Big cheers for the author↖(^ω^)↗ Update soon I hope Zhao Han can form a cp with Huangfuyuan

The army will never accommodate such an independent person. The novel is seriously distorted and is just a witless and entertaining novel.

I didn't want to read it after I reached chapter 1300. Comment, it seems like I first read this article two years ago when System Streaming just came out and it felt very novel. At that time, when I saw chapter 600, I planned to wait until it was finished before reading it. Looking at this article again now, after chapter 1000, I feel a little uncomfortable starting from the confusing plot of Long Xiaoyun's breakthrough to the extraordinary realm. Then there is a large section of chapter repetition in the middle, and finally the term Kaiyuan realm appears inexplicably. Before Chapter 800, I think this book is still okay, because the military theme is still there. Later, it becomes more and more fantasy-like, and the proportion of military themes disappears. After all, this book was written quite early. If I wanted to give it a rating, it would probably be four stars in the early stage and one point and five stars in the later stage.

This is a great book by the author, I like it very much. The settings are still acceptable. And Zhao Han seems to be cold but not cold. On the surface, he seems to keep away from strangers, but in fact he is very gentle and pays attention to the people he cares about. Well, I think it is because of, a "cold". Second, time travel treats everyone as NPC, but in the process of getting along with each other, the ice is melting indirectly. Three, there is no sense of security. Even to this point, it seems that he still has no sense of security. He is constantly thinking of ways to become stronger, the kind who does whatever it takes, (I feel sorry for him) ... Many women care about him now, but I think he is destined to live alone! 🤭I feel like the lesbians appearing now don't quite match his personality! ? I wonder which woman can melt his ice? The above are all my personal thoughts, baby, it's my first time to use Qidian today! Book lovers, don't comment if you don't like it!

Why can't I understand chapters 167 and 168?

Can't smell the alcohol? Does the author think he is awesome? Does this insult the reader's intelligence?

Author, the process of using the experience card in Chapters 1 and 3 seems to be repeated. After an experience card dissipated, it was used again while running, and then dissipated again. I saw it. Check it out.

You are in a world with a special forces background. The experience card actually has myth, eternity, and world-destroying levels. It's so nonsense. What a mess of settings.

There's something wrong with the first chapter. Not that I'm nitpicking. But which ordinary person can do a thousand standard push-ups. . . . .

When I look at the rankings, I see that they all started with special forces. Do you now have a studio for writing articles?

As someone who has served as a special forces soldier, what you wrote makes me feel like you are performing a skit, which is just a joke! Fan Tianlei also said: You know a lot? Haha, I will let you know the consequences of leaking the secret in minutes!

Hello, author, I suggest you write a sports novel about military talent. You don't fight or kill people when you are a soldier. Instead, you do exercises every day, compete, or just study. Is this what a soldier is? Especially the special forces you wrote about, and the pig's trotters you wrote, I feel there is a problem. The pig's trotters you wrote are just two words of awesome, you don't need to take anyone seriously, but the result is that he has been led by the military region from the beginning to the end. . . . . . . . .

The author writes too much about himself. The protagonist's character is anti-national and anti-order. Don't take order seriously. You have to write your own rules. The protagonist's character and behavior are completely villainous. Is the author writing about a villain? The protagonist looks like this in reality. It was definitely a direct hit. The idea promoted by the author is divorced from society and display.

Chapter 5: Dead, a modern special forces TV series, seems to be a fantasy, with "a sense of crisis surrounding you all the time". I can accept a plug-in, after all, adding plug-ins is very interesting in ordinary military dramas, but if it turns to fantasy, I can't accept it. . . .

Author, the protagonist you set should be a killer. This kind of behavior and thinking is not even qualified for mercenaries, let alone national soldiers.

It's so poisonous that I really can't stand it anymore. Be a little rational, okay? You are in the army, and it is the Chinese army

I haven't read the novel yet, but after reading about 30 chapters in the table of contents, I started charging, and I was speechless.

😓, The protagonist is so powerful, he can control thunder and lightning, shadow clones, wood escape, life energy, resurrection from the dead, light speed attack, spiritual attack, but there are many people who can compete with the protagonist. Anyway, no matter how awesome you are, someone will come out. I was also drunk, and I became an immortal very quickly, but it turns out that there are so many immortals on the earth.

I really can't stand it anymore, tell me why! First, the three views are incorrect! It's okay as mentioned above. The pig's trotters are not just a matter of wrong outlook, and there is nothing wrong with them in order to complete the task. However, going to Raiden and starting to make staff-style incorrect views is really speechless. In the army, the big fist has the final say? Why don't you treat the village chief as a cadre? Second, perfunctory writing! I just don't understand what the effect of Haruno Sakura's experience card is? What is the power of evolution? Chakra? I still have to call Haruno Sakura the strongest grandmaster. Is this name the strongest? In addition, if you write about military themes, you should watch the TV series several times even if you don't check other information. Don't you even know some basic terms and basic rules? When you write experience cards, you should also respect the original characters, right? As a result, you didn't say it was a character card magic modification, but directly said where it came from, and the result was completely different! Third, force your wits down! Fan Tianlei, Master Kong and other characters seem smart, and they seem to be able to tell that pig's feet are not simple. But! ! ! Are you going too far? People only look at the results and not the process? Do you have to base your guess on Xia Ji's guess based only on the so-called results? The so-called reasoning, doesn't inference require a process? Fourth, there are too many typos! I won't say much more about this, it purely affects the reading experience!

This book is written around the protagonist. Others, whether they are enemies or friends, will become brainless and outwitted.

If you dare to say that this place is under my control if you defeat Lei Zhan, why don't you just defeat He Zhijun? How could Gao Shiwei still let him go and beat him down? Highly toxic.

I just want to say, shoot your sister's fighting skills!

I've read hundreds of chapters! Like asking, is the protagonist a robot? You can kill everyone in the world, and you can let the fire phoenixes you train die? The female soldiers of Fire Phoenix regard you as their backer and trust you infinitely, yet you can even issue a fatal mission for them to die? Just for the merit of the system!

What nonsense, a one-year soldier can take over the special team? The army is not what you want to be. If you do this, you will be directly sanctioned.

Are you trying to make money by repeating chapters? I have endured this for a long time. Is this interesting?

I really write wherever I think of it. The author doesn't even know what he wants to write. The logic is confusing and there are always some inexplicable things. What a king of soldiers, what a sharpshooter, what a wily strategist. What a waste of these words, you really interpret what these words represent in a storyline! Inexplicably enjoying myself. From beginning to end, it's poison. Especially the main line driven by the golden finger, it can't be more stiff. Also breaks the boundaries of time and space. Is this still a military novel? The motivation description, character selection, and even the story line are all a mess.