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The writing style of this author is quite good, but the updates are slow 😅😅😅
I didn't understand anything before. When I saw the three characters pdd, I always thought it was the abbreviation of piao duan diao 😂
Book friends who have been persuaded to quit or have any opinions can come in and complain~
I will seriously modify it based on your opinions!
I feel like the settings could be changed. It's okay to invest money from the system. It's a bit hard to earn money yourself. PDD also has its own guild. You think it's funny that he loses money?
How about the Shenhao e-sports stream 🤫🤫🤫
Take the first seat jbg
Come on, author😍
I didn't use the system's money to invest, but the money I made through live streaming was taken away by the system. This operation is true nb. I asked if the previous live broadcast rewards had anything to do with the system🐴? Did the protagonist's live broadcast cost the system's money🐴? Was the protagonist's live broadcast room opened for him by the system? If the protagonist goes back to inherit his father's company, will all his assets be deducted immediately? The poisonous point at the beginning of xswl is too powerful, I will resign first
The writing is quite good and the system flows well, but the number of words is still too few. The author should work hard to update it!
1. What the hell is teaching? It's awkward and long, and gives people a sense of disconnection from the plot. It is recommended to modify it. 2. What the hell are flying knives? It's awkward and abrupt. This kind of slap in the face will not make people happy. The villain is too bad and the method of slap in the face is awkward. It is recommended to use financial/legal methods instead. 3. What the hell is a chef? Is his name godv or white? What we want to see is a group of miscellaneous players being fished out by the protagonist to slap others in the face, and the contrasting laughter of the protagonist losing money and failing. For similar players, you can refer to Jin Gong's player career. [If you feel that your writing skills are not good enough, just write the time a little earlier, after all, ym has been a joke for a long time]
Author, please update it, the word count is still too few.
Not to mention creative plagiarism. . Do you really think pdd lost money?
It is recommended to adjust the update time. Many people look for books in the order of updates. It is recommended to post at lunch and dinner.
Personal Opinion The content of the game can be considered carefully. Anyway, I basically have no interest in the ranked chapters. The part about Brother Ba is okay.
The new ones are okay, they have that flavor. It is recommended to speed up and condense the plot here. Unless you delete and modify some inappropriate plots in the past, the rhythm may be a bit out of balance.