I Don't Want to Be a Super Guy

The more I look at it, the more embarrassed I become and I die from poison.

Forcing is a failure; Too convoluted is a failure; Restricting the use of golden fingers is a failure; Pulling and pulling Liang's family heirlooms is also a failure... Because these operations make the protagonist feel like a... Dog being led around. A little frustrated. Of course, the logic of the plot is still good, if you can accept the minor problems above.

Today I was browsing a novel at Qidian. I came across it. When I opened it, I realized I had read this book before, but I hadn't read it after reading sixty chapters. I started reading it again from the first chapter, and I didn't feel that the protagonist was a person with an IQ of 180. Even lower than smart people

Not to mention plot and logic, it is a novel after all. But has the author watched Hong Kong dramas or movies? Writing it in the Mainland tone, living habits, and titles is extremely inconsistent. For example, you can call your younger brother Ah X or x boy, but you have to call him x son...

I didn't explain it clearly at the first time. One hundred million US dollars, and an Apple mobile phone, might be modern Hong Kong. After all, 100 million U. S. Dollars can't afford to buy a villa, and that's the current housing price in Hong Kong. 🙂 Are you talking to me about the underworld in modern times?

There is not a single micron sense of immersion.

Male protagonist

No sense of substitution, no logic, unreasonable

Based on the protagonist's academic qualifications and job, wouldn't it be better to go directly to the business investigation class? ? ? Do you have to arrange to be on the front line? ? In addition to boss-level people and those working in logistics, are the front lines also divided into departments? ? ?

The recent chapters are very fucked up. You don't want to die like this. Your IQ is gone all of a sudden. Facing a group of terrorists, without weapons, a person is tied up to rescue them. What is this other than death? Moreover, he was only saving an ordinary subordinate. Can any stranger threaten the protagonist?

See Chapter 6 Abandoned. Let's not talk about the fact that you have to take physical fitness tests before you even get trained, that's the effect of your Super Soldier King experience card. Let's just say that if you had committed such fraud before, why didn't you apply directly for the first line? Then let's talk about the shooting test; the 100-meter target gun can have ten rings. Can you be more realistic about the question? 10-Ring bullets, why are you talking about the steel target gun with 10-ring bullets? Are you kidding me? There aren't many movies like this! Then you have a high IQ and a 20-year-old Ph. D. Give him the quality of a super soldier! If you have the skills of a super soldier, do you think that the United States can let you come back? With this condition, then you are a proper super spy! It's easy to explain that you have a high IQ and are good at studying. For example, the qualities and skills of a super soldier king, can you tell me where and when you learned it and from which institution?

Can't afford a villa in Taipingshan with US$100 million? Housing prices in Hong Kong have skyrocketed.

Was there a novel in the past that also had this setting?

In the novel you wrote, you were very tough at the beginning, but then you acted like a dog and made the protagonist too clumsy. Speechless..., If you write like this, your grades will be good.

Well, the author may have thought it was funny to do the burpee at the beginning, but he was advised to give up. . . . What the hell?

It's hard to say about other aspects. The author has no military knowledge at all. He wants to write a police article with an online IQ, but I'm not optimistic about it.

The protagonist's timing is bad, Hong Kong is in trouble! The background of the second world is completely unfamiliar and there is no sense of immersion! The case described by the third author is extremely boring! There is no sense of immersion! No pleasure! The fourth one has a good-for-nothing brother! The progress of the third plot is extremely slow! A small case has been solved for dozens of chapters, but there is no so-called battle of wits and courage, only boredom! The writing is not good, the plot is boring, and overall it doesn't feel engaging! It is a very purely self-pleasure novel and is not recommended to be read!

The author has a good attitude, but unfortunately the upper limit is there. There is no need for book friends to criticize. Writing is just like writing. Good is good, bad is bad. You can only rely on practice and experience to slowly improve. You can't write better if you kill him.

I have read a similar movie before. The beginning is just a change of background. The same burpee, the same hacking technology, the same safe house modification system, but the background is the military. I read that novel a few months ago. What did the author draw from it? Or plagiarize and change the background 🙂

The first mission is 380 burpees in one minute, and the punishment for failure is being electrocuted. What kind of stupid plot? Do you call Superman or the Flash? Believe it or not, neither the enhanced Captain America nor the enhanced Spider-Man can do it! Some people who don't know Spider-Man just say that Spider-Man can stop a train, but even the enhanced version of Spider-Man can't do that.

I heard from other authors that the author of this book helped her, so I came here specially to visit. Please put on your clothes and come out to pick up the guests.

Everyone who likes this book is welcome to participate. If the supporting roles set by the big guys themselves are praised by most book friends, and after Xiaoyuyu establishes a group, they will set a starting point coin (red envelope) reward. Supporting role (secondary actor): personality, age, personality, etc.

Name: Kasuo (Flying Dragon) Race: Mythical Creature Talent: Adaptable to various environments, super intelligence, can take human form Physique: Immune to all hot weapons Symbol: Plague and Lightning Skills: Venom breath, self-healing, psychic link can connect the human mind to communicate with it, the poison cloud envelopes the flying dragon. The poisonous plague cloud formed by bacteria in the air can sustain a wide range of destructive skills Treasure: Dragon Blood Vase A treasure that strengthens bloodline power and transformation Character: Black-bellied Favorite person: Male protagonist Likes things: Barbecuing, flying, snatching various gold coins and gems Introduction: The mythical creature flying dragon created by paleontologists using the bones of flying dragons from the mythical era, and the genes of lizards and pterodactyls was robbed when it was still an egg Duo was accidentally hatched by the protagonist and became a pet. The picture below is my belief. If you see it, reply to me and I will reward you. Thank you {"NickName":"1","UserId":230984587}

Tucao post, feel free to complain if you are dissatisfied.

I also didn't understand the era the protagonist lived in. From the clues such as Apple's mobile phone, it felt like modern Hong Kong! I was very confused when I watched it. If there are many plots in modern Hong Kong, it doesn't feel right.

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There seems to be a novel called Infinite Return as a Policeman, which is similar to this

I stopped reading when I saw the skipped chapter. It would be better not to talk about it. Once I saw it, I had no motivation to read on...

Even if it sucks, there must be a finale! Don't enter the palace!

Since it is Hong Kong style, can it be written in Cantonese and Hong Kong? Not even the most basic manifestations