The Mountains and Rivers Will Live up to Their Plans

The logic is clear, the writing is smooth, and the big events are well prepared. The writing style is steady and majestic, which fits the story setting very well. The descriptions of objects, scenery and scenes are more effective in rendering, and the psychological description of the characters is revealed naturally, with a strong sense of substitution. It is suggested that the focus should be placed on the description of the spiritual world of the characters, so that psychological description is no longer a means of relying on the plot of the novel to achieve artistic effects. There is still something lacking in the portrayal of the characters. Many details of the expressions and movements are not described in detail. In addition, there seems to be some problems with the use of punctuation marks. These are the flaws. The introduction can be refined and cleared up. Mountains don't shy away from soil, seas don't shy away from water, cheer up💨

Well, I read the author's article, so I looked it up in the dictionary~ There's no other meaning, it's just that the author is really attentive. The heroine Qie Xuan, Xuan, means a kind of jade, and Xuan, means pearl. Is it related to the heroine's status as pearls and jade? Or is it that the heroine is a character with a delicate heart and wisdom? The male protagonist is confused, which means beautiful. Cheng can also be used as "clear", which means clear and thorough, which may also be related to the perfect character of the male protagonist. What surprised me the most was the last names of the male and female protagonists. "" Is the same as "que" in ancient times. The author really meant it. Now, not much to say, come on, author~

Yes, I'm commenting again. Generally speaking, I really like the writing style and writing style of Concubine. It has a majestic, gorgeous and smooth feeling. The individual descriptions are also on point. It fits well with the style of Machiavellian writing. It really has the excitement and thrill of a heart-wrenching game. In particular, let's talk about the heroine's character. I said in my last comment that the words "exquisite heart and wisdom" are vividly explained by Your Majesty. Of course, Your Majesty is also domineering, silent, and stunning at the same time. He has the demeanor of a superior. I believe that this beautiful land will be even better in her hands. Then let's talk about the village owner, regent, and master, well... There's nothing to say. If you don't invite me to tea, everything will be fine. He's still the leading actor, that's it. Finally, I would like to express my gratitude to Your Majesty and the diligent author, please don't begrudge your talent and let the updates come more intensely~

Xì dí chéng (qiè chéng pín) word: (fú) Tai Xingyun (tán dàn yún) Emperor Yanzhao (yǎn zhāo dì) (shēn) subclass (xián) Xiaohuo (liáo)ling Although I understand that making the key character names in a novel so uncommon will certainly dissuade some readers, I picked out every name in this novel one by one by flipping through a dictionary and comparing the ancient and modern meanings. Therefore, no matter how uncommon they are, I cannot make up my mind to change them all, so here I solemnly say sorry to all readers! I'm really sorry for causing trouble to your reading due to my own subjective reasons!

Want to see how the blind queen can dominate the world?

Little sister, little sister, I heard about it from reading 😁 Hehe

It's really great, there's a hint of intrigue in every word

Come on, I really like your profile.

After so long, I finally came across a good article about female supremacy. This is my first time posting, and it's so majestic and heart-wrenching. I have also been writing about the same type of topics recently. You are welcome to take a look at mine when you have time and leave comments! ! Thank you.