Starting from the First Movie Theater

After reading it, let me talk about my feelings. It may not be right, it is just my personal opinion. First of all, the emotional line is a bit inexplicable. In just a few hundred thousand words, there are female characters such as childhood sweethearts, ex-girlfriends, twins in a milk tea shop, two little girls taking college entrance exams, a poor girl, a female school host and so on. The description has no obvious focus, leaving the reader at a loss as to which character to focus on. It is recommended to sort out the outline, eliminate unnecessary "beautiful" characters, and focus on the real heroine. Secondly, I feel that the pricing is a failure. It's not that it's expensive per se, it's the sudden price increase. People have inertia, and so do readers. When readers accept that the protagonist's theater relies on high-quality service and low prices to win, you suddenly make a system update, directly increase the ticket price by more than ten times, and change it to a cold route. Changing the course halfway is equivalent to smashing the readers' expectations and speculations about the future plot, and then saying to them: "It's useless no matter what you think, I am the author, I have the final say." (Unknown) You clearly set up a university town and discount promotions, why did you change the routine so abruptly? If you wanted to take the aloof route, why didn't you do it from the beginning?) Thirdly, the system itself may be a serious poison point. Recently, I have seen comments such as "It's a system article again, abandon it" in many system articles recently. Although I personally don't hate the system that much, but it is very powerful, but I really can't accept it. People yearn for freedom and hate constraints. Today, when life is already stressful, many people read novels just to relax. In this case, a system like a "boss" is created, and the protagonist works for the system. If the writing is good, then it is fine. When the writing is average or even not very good, how do you want readers to feel "enjoyed"? Why should I spend money to read novels if I feel unhappy? Is the game not fun or is the fat house water not delicious? Like the dog-adding system in the Great Doctor's book. Although some people always complain that it is a dog-added system, it is really delicious. Finally, I said a lot of nonsense, but I still hope that the author can write better and better. This subject matter is really novel, and judging from the author's words, he has carefully checked the information. Oh, wouldn't it dampen the author's enthusiasm? I suddenly regretted writing this comment, but I felt it was a pity to delete it after typing so many words. If the author has read it, then delete it. I personally hate the kind of guys who point fingers at other people's books, but sometimes I really can't help it. I'm sorry.

I read three chapters, reluctantly, and I really can't figure out what era it is in. The beginning is that my parents are dead. The person who took over the movie theater could have been tricked into buying it, or his parents were not ready to take over the business due to poor management, etc. Do they have to be left behind if the parents left? The current novel is cheerful and funny, and the protagonist still sheds tears and misses his parents at every turn... There is no way to explain... Go and read " "The Best Special Edition Era" and "The Beginning of Losing Money to Be a Richest Man"... Or other popular novels, which started hundreds of years ago, and were immediately passed by readers. The above two books were found by me with investment, and I didn't expect that🔥. I thought they were good at the time...

The subject matter is quite interesting and very attractive, but after reading dozens of chapters, I want to say that I should write less about the trivial things between girls and girls, stop being a dog licker, and write more about the development of theaters. I want to expand the layout and find a better female protagonist. What is this?

Is this the end of the book?

Let me ask, does everyone think movie tickets are too expensive? How about changing it to 100 yuan for 2D movie tickets and 200 yuan for 3D movie tickets? After all, this is an effect experience with system attribute bonus, so it can't be too cheap. . .

Is the author a box office hit player? ? ? ? I feel like I immediately thought of this game after reading the introduction.

Cut? If you say yes, I won't vote.

I am an author, and I have recently discovered that what I wrote earlier was not very good, so in the past few days I will revise the beginning, organize the outline, and set the settings. I started the book in a hurry, and I blame myself for being lazy. Only one update in the past two days. Once I finish the modification, I will resume two updates a day. It is recommended to update three times a day.

This is too expensive. I won't go if it's so expensive.

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Shouldn't the box office be split with the film and television company?

Shouldn't the box office be split with the film and television companies?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Thanks to the author, the return on investment from signing the contract is very generous. I only got 66 starting coins when I just invested.