I Spent Three Thousand Years in the World of Cultivation

Let me talk about the advantages first 1: The pattern is relatively large This is not obvious in the first volume, but the author has laid down several foreshadowings for the development of the subsequent pattern. But when the plot advances to the second volume, the pattern unfolds little by little, original and post-modern fantasy, fantasy and reality, the earth and the world of cultivation. Although there is no sense of explosive explosion, there is a sense of murmuring and success. This shows the author's ingenuity. Two: Character Creation The author uses 141 chapters to create some memorable characters. For example, Xianyue was just a pure and lovely natural girl (Wu?) At the beginning, but under Shehui's big dyeing vat (I didn't say Lan Mumu), she became weird (not really), and did some things that made people smile, and these things showed Xianyue's love for the protagonist bit by bit, which was more three-dimensional than the previous journey through the distant void to find the protagonist. But all of this is to pave the way for the subsequent death (if it is not resurrected, it will be a miracle, Blade warns), and then the death of Xianyue will be used to continue to promote the plot. Seriously, this character is really spiritual! Of course, the author has more than one outstanding character, and characters like the Hermit are also unique. The above are the advantages. Next, I will talk about the shortcomings: 1: The plot is fast-paced. The first volume has been written around the protagonist's recovery of strength, which is not a problem in itself. However, at the end of the second volume, it hastily and directly responded to it, even abandoning the two lines of the second Nascent Soul and the origin of the swallowing world. And some other interesting lines have also been abandoned, such as the protagonist's family background (although it is cliché, it is really cool). There is also the fried fish pond in Xinshou Village. This layout is not big, but it is really cool. Two: The second volume has started early. The author was obviously in a hurry when it came to restoring the protagonist's strength. The improvement of the second Yuan Ying was gone, and the world was just the same. Then, the protagonist directly cheated, and what he did before seemed like a useless effort. Then the portrayal of some characters is gone, such as the younger sister, Ikoma, and parents. Once these characters are well portrayed and the plot is well connected, the work can be further sublimated. Three: There are too many pitfalls. This is obvious. As I said before, many branches have been abandoned, which can obviously last hundreds of chapters... Okay, in general, this author's article is definitely above the average, but there are a few flaws.

First of all, to be honest, the first few chapters of this book are really discouraging. Return of the Immortal Emperor, unlimited streaming, system... A lot of settings at the beginning directly reduced the readability of the novel (it was still an old routine that everyone was tired of reading), and it also made me think that my understanding of "light novels" was wrong. And the first world chosen by the author - Iron City, both the setting and the plasticity of the original work determine that it will not have an eye-catching comeback (in other words, Kabane's alchemy is quite creative). But what reassures me is that Su Mo only abducted Ikoma, at least there won't be a crazy harem plot (after all, I am a single-party supporter). What really makes me feel "really good" is the author's excellent writing style (probably an original fantasy writer), which can be said to be outstanding among all the light novels. The pretentious plot and the reactions of all parties also made me feel happy. After finishing the setting, the plot is getting better and better, and with good writing style, it can be said that as long as the author does not waste time, it can be used as food for a long time. Now we might as well look forward to the appearance of "Her Highness" (the heroine?) And the awkward battlefield reunion between the brother and sister (laughs). In short, is it a qualified light novel or fantasy that can be easily read? Or, just call it Qingxuan.

After reading the first three chapters, let me make a short review. The beginning is very good. Maybe if it weren't for the diamond chapter that is required to sign a contract now, I think you should be able to write better, so I have to explain a lot of things clearly. As for the writing, I feel that it is very smooth and the story is well laid out. Maybe there are just some small areas that need to be polished. In conclusion, this is really the first book for a newcomer, so I feel ashamed!

I think I may have some misunderstanding about light novels

It looked good at the beginning, but the further I wrote, the worse it became. It is not recommended for those with a good outlook on life. Especially when the protagonist rejected Xianyue, it felt even more uncomfortable. Even if my father crosses the void and comes to see you, you refuse because you don't want to hang yourself from a tree, haha. You have very little affection for the earth and look at things very ruthlessly, but you can't forget your childhood sweetheart? Three thousand years later, my childhood sweetheart still cares so much about the earth. The old sweetheart who cares deeply about the earth is still having an affair with Xianyue in the world of cultivation and becoming a Taoist couple. Speechless, really speechless. This setting makes me feel sick to my stomach.

Author, I have a suggestion. I feel that your layout is a bit small and you cannot write the feeling of the Immortal Emperor. This should not be considered an invincible flow, but I have read some and feel that it is still a bit too weak. After all, it is still an Immortal Emperor. Even if it is a clone or the memory is lost, it is impossible to play around with some younger brothers.

The writing style is okay, the plot is okay (after all, this routine has been used a lot), but the author's settings are quite satisfactory. The integration of various systems has certain highlights, but the combat power is still an issue.

It looks okay, I hope you can write it down

I am a time traveler who came to the earth and obtained a system that said that through likes and replies, I can improve my strength. Now I am fighting Thanos, and I am almost unable to defeat him. All book friends, please give me a helping hand, give me likes, and reply to me. I will protect the earth!

Thank you "This is a ruthless person" I just finished my liver and received your recommendation vote. But I'd better go to bed early. Staying up late is not good for your health.

I only read Chapter 11, and I stopped reading because I deliberately pretended to be weak and joined someone else's team.

Traveling through 3,000 years and becoming an Immortal Emperor, there is no golden finger, let alone these. Excuse me, the author, in Chapter 7, the protagonist Yuanshen returns to the fairy world. Tens of thousands of years have passed in the fairy world. Tens of thousands of years have passed. Why is there no reshuffle of high-rise buildings and changes in power? Instead, his sect is getting better and better? Moreover, it seems that this sect was built by the protagonist himself. In addition, after tens of thousands of years of growing up without being oppressed by the protagonist, the black dragon raised by the protagonist and His Highness, how come their strength has not caught up with the protagonist? The protagonist can stand up to others for ten days a day? If you feel it is unreasonable, you are welcome to discuss it, and I hope you will not criticize it.

I suddenly discovered a problem. Author, you haven't come to test the waters yet. . . .

My 6,800 anime pictures finally have a use

I would like to suggest a single heroine or a harem, and then handle the emotional line well and don't abuse people, okay?

I wanted to tip 100 yuan to support, but luckily I held back and got a zero off.

Come on, write slowly. The first one may not be ideal, but I hope you can write well and accumulate fans. I have seen many authors with better grades than you give up, but with worse grades than you, they still persist. Even if only a few people read it, these authors still wrote 200W at the end of the article.

Has the author ever read The Order of Time? The ending feels a bit similar (not meant to be plagiarism or anything like that) 🤔