Because That's How the Script Is Written

Come on, come on, I think the author wants to be a eunuch, come here and be active. To be honest, I haven't seen such a novel book for a long time. The author should persist. After all, the further the book goes, the more readers it will have. Your book has a lot People are reading, and there are a lot of potential readers, but according to my guess, the reasons for the low number of subscriptions are: 1. The title of the book is very attractive, but the first ten chapters are too poisonous after entering, which leads to a huge gap. I was poisoned to death, and I died before I could wait for the fairy grass. Solution: The author can make appropriate changes, or pin a few more book reviews to let readers who don't know the situation understand the reason. 2. Many readers have a habit of keeping books. Although they often die if they keep reading, they still enjoy it @_@, author, keep at it. Such a refreshing style is not easy to see. 470,000 Words have been written. If you don't stick to it, all the previous efforts will be in vain. 3. Among the readers, there are many students who are relatively poor, and some are in semi-closed schools. They go home and play with their mobile phones every few weeks. It is not easy to read a novel. If the results are not very good, you should not abandon them directly, but should look for solutions to them - Lu Xun The longer you persist, the more people will read this book^V^ I have already pinned your book to the top {"NickName":"Oh Lei Wa Gang Damuda","UserId":210672515}

It's a really good book. The first twenty chapters are a bit frustrating, but it's not unacceptable... Anyway, it's not cheating, and thirty years in Hedong and thirty years in Hexi are there not enough books? Come on, author, monthly tickets are offered

Damn, I'm going to be poisoned by the comments. I can't turn my mind to the comments and think about it. I feel like I'm being fed shi now. Also, why doesn't the protagonist know that he is not the protagonist? Does he know the name of Tang Wutian? As mentioned in previous chapters, he only discovered his name later. The chapters before and after are like him reminiscing, written by the author to make readers understand. . Really, he said he didn't know he was not the protagonist, so what did he know? I only know the names of a few people, two people, one senior sister and one senior brother Zuo. You can't turn off comments yet. I know what the comments are about when I go to a place and don't click on them. I'm simply being poisoned by you.

Spoilers for the newcomers. Tell me your thoughts. Have read dozens of chapters. Tell me your thoughts. I thought I would understand after fifteen chapters, but I didn't expect that I was still too young. In other words, Tang Haotian is like a max-level boss. The protagonist is an ordinary player. He can only hit someone a little bit of blood through a bunch of operations each time. Once the player replies, the blood will be full So, the protagonist has been defeated for dozens of chapters and there is no turning point in sight. I thought that the protagonist will make a comeback in the part of accepting apprentices, but I didn't expect that after a retrospective and correction, both of them have become the disciples of the Ninth Elder 🙂🙂 Good! The author is great. I really didn't expect that the author really followed his setting and did not change it. He created an extremely powerful world correction ability that left the protagonist completely helpless. The author actually followed this setting and made the protagonist suffer at every turn. It made me feel angry. The author successfully managed not to be affected by others. Amazing! ! ! Insert a side note here. The follow-up plot has been completed by hxd. Please come here and tell me how the protagonist came back. I am very curious about how he defeated Tang Haotian under the influence of forced control, retrospection and correction.

After reading the first dozen or so pictures, I didn't make much evaluation. I only had one sentence for the author: the upper limit of a story is determined by the villain in the story, and the lower limit of a story is determined by the protagonist of the story. I hope the author will reflect on himself from time to time

Haotian is not really going to be a girl, right?🤐🤐

Ah, the time traveler is too poisonous. Everyone, I can't hold on anymore. Goodbye.

. . . . After reading the first few chapters, I found it a bit toxic. Maybe the style is not my favorite, but please don't believe me too much. Take a look for yourself. Everyone has their own preferences. For the author, if someone agrees with it, it is a kind of support.

This book, I think, will be difficult to finish. If I take a sip of milk, the author will finish the book. I guess so?

It's a pretty good novel, maybe a little awkward at the beginning, but it doesn't hurt. But is the author a pigeon? Does anyone know?

Originally, Li Ye was worried that Tang Haotian would cuckold him, but now the senior sister has to worry about being cuckolded, hehehe (showing a crazy smile) I wish this book will get better and better PS: In fact, I feel that if the author hadn't been so sadistic in the first twenty chapters, there would have been many more people, but if the previous chapter hadn't been so sadistic, the following chapters wouldn't have been so enjoyable. Really, just survive Chapter 20 😜

The book is quite innovative, but the amount of information is too little and too wordy. 1/3 Of each chapter is about the plot before Che Zulu, and all kinds of analysis are clear at a glance. The protagonist is set to be an aboriginal senior brother, but his original character is like a modern person traveling through time, which is a bit weird.

The book is so brutal at the beginning that you can't stand it, but the wonderful content at the end makes you want to put it down. It's a pity, I suggest the author rewrite it earlier.

I have to say that the author chose the subject matter very well, but there are too many plot points in the early stage that normal people can't stand. We don't get to the main point until chapter 20. The early stages are all foreshadowing and there is no characterization at all. The plot jumps too slowly and has too many poisonous points. In short, what the author wanted to express was beautiful, but the plot was really unsatisfactory.

Good book, this book tells the story of a tool man who goes against the will of heaven! 🤫🤫🤫

I am a shameless person who reads pirated copies. I found this on a pirated novel website, and I appreciate it, gentlemen. I have no choice but to be a poor student and am used to reading pirated versions. Except for a few novels that I really like, I rarely spend money to read genuine ones. However, this novel really gave me a big surprise. I like to browse the comment area before reading a book, and then I found that the comment area was bleak (the comment area of ​​pirated novel software). And I was born to be a swordsman. To be honest, I don't believe in evil love and being mean, so I started reading it from the first chapter. It made my heart explode. It was even more uncomfortable than Xiang Xiang, but I am a bitch! I wanted to see how long I could last. Finally, around chapter 25, the feeling of tightness in my chest disappeared. The feeling of seeing the light through the thick fog was very refreshing. It can be said that it was as refreshing as putting on a new gun on the morning of the New Year. Due to the influence of the comment section (piracy), I am afraid that the genuine version will also suffer injustice, so I came here to support it, but it seems that I can rest assured. Come on, author! Awesome! 🤭🤭🤭

Fighting the streets or becoming a god depends on the control in the later stage. If you survive the early stage, you will get the fairy grass (fortunately, I have high poison resistance and survived Chapter 15). Keep the claws. The author NB finally hinted that the essence is fine.

No matter whose idea of ​​​​the opening is borrowed from, this beginning is still very novel in the novel. It's a pity that the protagonist was tortured to death in the first 20 chapters of a novel that everyone could guess. No matter how good the idea is, it is boring... I still hope that the author will achieve results and not be a casual eunuch, come on

The biggest flaw of this book is that there is a chapter that says that a group of elementary school readers cheated this book 😭

In the early stage of the book, the character design completely collapsed Protagonist: In the early stage, he endured humiliation and endured all kinds of hardships in order to survive, but later on, when his life was not in danger, he actually grabbed Tang's opportunities and weapons? The key is that Tang Ye has never harmed him, and even regards him as the person he trusts the most. How do you treat him like this? What follows is even more outrageous: he actually rapes someone to save his life, then turns into a harem, and a passionate novel turns into a cool novel? A hot-blooded and unyielding man turns into a stallion with a smart brain? Tang Haotian: He has the aura of the protagonist, no scheming, he is polite and not arrogant, but his intelligence is too serious later. He actually regarded Ye, who had harmed him many times, as his benefactor? Who has the halo of the protagonist? The most outrageous thing is that I heard that she turned into a woman later? Senior sister: At first, she said that the senior sister was gentle and good-looking, but she turned into a yandere after having a relationship with the protagonist. However, she did not break out when the protagonist had a harem and instead helped the protagonist to have a harem. Apart from her scary expression, she did not do anything yandere-y. Could this still be a pseudo-yandere? Then what do you mean when you described the senior sister's eyes as scary dozens of times before? Not to mention other things, after seeing Yun being raped, she promised to marry him if he won the fight in a year, and then she gave up.

The turning point won't be until the wedding at the end of the year in the plot. According to the general plot, the elder sister will definitely fall in love with Tang Haotian, and then Tang Haotian will come to steal the marriage. . . This plot is so frustrating to watch

I suddenly had a magical idea. This book should be called "On how local natives can play a supporting role after they feel self-awareness and become a yellow hair while whitewashing"

Such a free start. I guess I won't be able to write for long after I hit the street... I hope there will be a turning point, the writing level is still there...

Suddenly, I felt that when the protagonist was still a supporting character, he was ridiculed in various ways; but when the supporting character took away the protagonist's opportunities step by step, what he did was not as good as the original protagonist.

I saw that the protagonist of Shippuden is not Hayate. The full name of Shippuden is Celebrity Shippuden. There is a Shippuden in the celebrity corner of Douda. It seems that it is also a celebrity protagonist. Dororo is indeed an exception, but Dororo is also the heroine. Please list the titles of books with supporting characters in the true sense 🤫

Give future readers a vaccination The protagonist is a villain-type supporting character. This is defined by the writer who is the creator of the world in the book before awakening. Moreover, the protagonist cannot control what he says and does during the plot. He can only influence the character's attitude towards the protagonist of the original book and the protagonist of this book through off-site side effects. Generally speaking, the first hundred chapters are about the protagonist changing his original way and time of death through side influence and secret hands. But in the end, he was killed by his wife and had no chance of rebirth. Regarding Qiang Shangyun, Master Uncle didn't really understand why. It's better to read it yourself. Once you understand this book, it will basically not be difficult for you to interpret.                              (＠￣ー￣＠) Water word water experience (* ￣ー￣)

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Why do you think the front is poisonous? I think it's quite interesting. It's obviously the author's complaint about other brainless articles. How interesting. Why do you have to say it's a poisonous point? I just read Chapter 17. The author's idea is really good and not bad.