I Have Fifty-Four Hero Cards

I would like to make some suggestions. The author should change the introduction and filter the cards to be written. The power system is very different, and some characters can basically be played from the beginning to the finale with just one card, such as the Saitama card. The character cards are too complicated, including Chinese, Japanese, ancient and modern, as well as prehistoric comics. If nothing else, I don't know what the use of Sedum and those ancient characters is. The author had better clean it up. Too many character cards will give readers a sense of confusion. It's like a pot of porridge. You can add some red beans and mung beans, but adding dozens of them at once will completely change the taste.

Come on, author. The setting attracts me now. If your plot is less poisonous, I will stay. As long as the poisonous points later are not too serious, I will continue to follow it.

Great writing, please be faster 🙏

Why do you all practice blazing eyes and golden eyes? The blazing eyes and golden eyes are not supernatural powers, they are diseases. When I was in Laojun's furnace, my eyes were damaged by the smoke. A nice name is Fiery Eyes and Golden Eyes.

The writing is very good, the setting is very interesting, keep writing, Jiang Ye is very funny, I can see that the plot is slowly unfolding, take your time, don't rush, just don't collapse, also, I really like the female lead Gu Shishi, I hope there will be a single female lead.

Personally, I think it's enough to have Saitama. The main reason is that Saitama can easily become stronger and there is no upper limit. Other heroes can be written casually.

Looking at the introduction, there are a lot of abilities. In fact, one or two will be enough. Too many will make people feel confused. Like Saitama, it is easy to improve the strength and has a high growth limit. It is completely enough to defeat monsters.

It takes 10 near-deaths to reach 600%. The author is not good at math. Isn't it supposed to be ×1.6 Times after each near-death situation? 10 Times should be 1.6 To the 10th power, right? It should be rounded to 1100%, and the miscellaneous calculation is 600%.

All of them have been subscribed. I hope the author can write soon ╰(‵□′)╯ and all the recommendation votes will be given to you, the author. Come on!

Let me ask a question, the protagonist's physical strength is getting stronger and stronger, and the heroine doesn't practice, how can they have a child?

Saber is just a rank, not a single person😓

The author has a big failure, that is, he revealed all the hero cards at once without adding any restrictions. How to allocate the playing time and positioning of each hero will become very troublesome, especially when describing the strength of the hero. For example: if Saitama is too strong, the work will collapse, if Saitama is too weak, fans will be offended. Each hero is a distinctive character in each anime. How to depict the positioning and uniqueness of different heroes is also the primary issue that the author considers. For example: Saitama's uniqueness is that he can defeat the enemy with one punch every time. Is Saitama without "defeating the enemy with one punch" still the Saitama we imagined? Is it still the One Punch Man? Can we still use Saitama when the enemy is obviously stronger? Or in a certain situation, either the Flash or Saitama can be sent. Readers will ask, why send the Flash? Or why was Saitama sent? At this time, you can see the depth of an author's skills. A good author will think thoroughly in the early stage and will not take the initiative to dig holes for himself. However, the average author has not thought about this problem and sends whichever one they want. This step-by-step writing method can easily blur the focus, resulting in a loose structure of the work and a decrease in the overall readability. In fact, when planning the early writing structure, the author should add some restrictions to the protagonist. For example, although there are 54 hero cards, they cannot be used yet and need to meet specific conditions to unlock them. In this way, readers will not have so many opinions when it comes to "which hero needs to be used." If the author has imposed restrictions, he can also interact with readers in the comment area, for example: "Which hero do you want to unlock next?" In short, I found that I was still too young, and I accidentally ordered them all, forgetting to consider the overall structure and development of the work first. I can only hope that the author will consider it more completely when writing new works, so as to avoid many unnecessary problems. Of course, the author also has some good parts. For example, the author seems to be very good at conveying the emotions of the characters through delicate small movements. This part is quite a bonus. I would like to encourage the author. ----- READER

Full booking plus three recommendation votes, I just ask you to say goodbye to eunuchs, it doesn't matter if you write slowly, hold on! Come on! !

I have deleted the book for a long time. I found that someone liked the chapter I posted before, so I came in to take a look and found that the author came back to write it again. When did he come back? It is currently exempted for a limited time. I will check it out after the limit is over. Since the author has brought his brothers back😏, I will also come back and take a look. Come on, little author☞

All have subscribed, and all the recommendation votes have been given. I hope the author will work hard on writing and pay attention to his health (I want to be more refined) 😁😁

All the suggestions that Linghu Chong hates the most in Jin Yong's books are to get to know Chen Jialuo. There is no scumbag, only more scumbags. Linghu Chong is dwarfed by him.

If I add a monthly pass to the full subscription, can I add more premiums?

The author's writing is quite good. I hope it can continue. It's a very interesting setting and looks very comfortable.

I have fully booked ten tickets for you. Can you add more details?

This is probably the best emotional drama I have seen on Qidian. Com. The heroine is really cute and the development is very smooth. I feel that the relationship just comes naturally and is not abrupt at all.

It's been a while since I've been here, I've updated it again, Chapter 32, Liver

If you read it for free, please give a reward of 500 to support it, which is not much. From the white prostitute monster

Why shouldn't we practice the art of multiple shadow clones?🤭

Full subscription, 10 monthly passes, want some highlights? 😌

I have a question, it's still in the early stages. How did you find out that there is only China in the world and no other countries?

I've read more than 300 chapters. It's quite interesting. I just don't know why so few people have read it. The first book is written like this. It's really good.

Why not update😡😡😡

I really like the paragraph you wrote in Chapter 24. Isn't that what people are like? I hope the author has some self-awareness and stops being a eunuch. I just started watching🤫

The book is quite good, but why are so few people reading it? Maybe the name is a bit too ordinary.

Has the author considered writing romance? Hahaha, the writing is so good