Cultivation Starts from Never Peeing on the Bed

I didn't expect that I was the first person. I applaud you first 👏. The writing is very brisk and the plot is attractive. I was addicted to it without knowing it. Although there are some small details that cannot withstand scrutiny, such as age, but overall, it is really good, maybe it can really become a god! The story structure is mature, the world view is perfect, and the plot is also innovative. There is no separation between scene changes, and the rhythm is relatively accurate. It is very exciting to watch! Very enjoyable! Thank you for letting me test the poison. It has been collected. Congratulations on getting a little fangirl~ Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

In the following article, I voted for support, author, cheers >3<

After reading the ten chapters, let's give a brief review. The settings of characters and systems are very interesting. Grandpa Refrigerator's ability is to keep out the cold, but his personality is like fire. I laughed out loud at the scene about the leader of the Weeping Blood Hall. I thought those who vomited blood were all delicate and fresh-faced people like Lin Daiyu, but it turned out to be a wild and strong man! Puff! And Xiaobai's system is actually... Hahaha, I won't spoil it. (I'm afraid I won't be able to get past the jokes about characters such as the light-emitting right foot, the refrigerator grandfather, and the blood-weeping martial artist.) It's not deliberately funny, but it always reveals the humor invisibly, making people smile knowingly when reading it. The writing style of the work is lively, the story is concise, and the characters are interesting. Quite good, suitable for entry. The system settings are also very novel. I think it is more like a road sign than a golden finger. Each of its annoying tasks helps Xiaobai recall his childhood memories and face up to his past failures, which is equivalent to giving him a chance to start over again. Only after completing the tasks will his abilities improve. I wish that one day Xiaobai can complete these strange tasks and truly grow up. I have read very few male videos and have limited comments on this work. I can only give support. Come on, author, the setting and plot are very good.

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Someone will come when the update is released. Please put it on the shelf. I'm waiting for the first order and rewards.

You need to promote it! ! Otherwise you will die here, hang out more and find more people to comment on

I have read ten chapters so far. The writing is good and gives a sense of immersion. The system upgrade conditions are also very imaginative. Personally, I think what needs to be improved is that some scenes are described in too much detail, which makes the story seem slow and slow. Another thing is that the tone of voice of these children always feels a bit strange. Maybe it's because I don't read enough. Overall it's still very good, keep up the good work

After reading it, I feel that your imagination is really big.

The plot is well written and the content is rich. I look forward to the update of your book. I have already collected it. Please visit again.

I laughed so hard at the title of the book 🤭

Auspicious Year of the Rat! I wish all the jade "rats" come to the wind and have endless happiness. ⊙▽⊙

Grinding a needle, just grinding a needle, thinking too much 😁