What's the Point Now?

Come on, author, your writing is good.

Good books, good books, I still don't have enough writing skills for details like this, so I'll add a bookshelf! Study and study, let's chat when you have time⊙∀⊙!

Come on, author, I am silently supporting you behind your back. The author's book is really like "the sound of great music sweeping away the shadows", like "pushing away the clouds and mist to see the blue sky", which makes us book friends see hope and the future! Bolt from the blue and enlightenment may not be enough to describe the author's writing; the clouds in Wushan and the flowing water in the Yangtze River are even more difficult to compare with the author's literary talent! Huang Zhongda Lu is inspiring! Your candle illuminates the world, and you can see thousands of miles clearly; the rain and dew bring benefits to all directions! Through your profound words, I seem to see your majestic and heroic demeanor; I seem to see your wise demeanor with a pen as big as a rafter, writing articles all over the world; I seem to see your heroic spirit with your sword in hand, looking around and pointing out the country! After reading this book word for word, my heart couldn't calm down for a long time, it was so shocking! Why are there such good books! I have been in the Internet literary world for so many years, and I thought that no other Internet article could impress me. I didn't expect to see such a wonderful article today! Author, it is you who made me deeply understand the saying "There are people outside the world, and there is a sky outside the world". Thank you! After reading this book, I did not reply immediately because I was afraid that my vulgar reply would tarnish this rare book on the Internet. But I still replied, because I felt that if I couldn't leave my own praise behind such a wonderful book, then I would never die in peace! How proud it is to be able to leave your own praise behind such a wonderful book! Author, please forgive my selfishness! I know that no matter how gorgeous the words are to describe the brilliance of your post, it is not enough and is hypocritical, so I just want to say: your book is so beautiful! I am willing to watch it for the rest of my life! This book has a novel concept, unique subject matter, clear paragraphs, strange plot, ups and downs, clear main line, fascinating, and shows extraordinary literary skills in the ordinary. It can be said that every word is precious, every sentence is a classic, and it is a model that our generation should learn from. As the saying goes: "A galloping horse, a shooting vulture and a bow, the heaven and the earth are in my heart!" The author is truly worthy of being the founder of the new generation of Wuli World! Originally, I was already disappointed with the starting point, feeling that this had no future, and my heart was filled with sadness. But reading your book gave me hope for a starting point. It is you who rekindles the fire of hope in my heart, it is you who revives my heart, and it is you who saves my heart from its coldness! Originally I decided not to post any book reviews on Qidian, but after reading your book, I told myself that this book review must be posted! This is a rare book in a century! The sky has eyes, allowing me to read such a wonderful book in my lifetime!

It's okay to write, but I don't know if it will die young.

Already read the first three chapters. I think you made the same mistake as I did with my first book (if everyone came here to sign the contract), that is, the first three chapters were not outstanding. It's not that your writing is not good, it's really good, but I read your first three chapters for the first time (skipping ten lines at a glance) and I don't know what the protagonist is going to do? What is the ultimate goal? Because there was nothing in the whole article that caught my eye and made me interested enough to read it carefully. It wasn't until I read your first three chapters for the second time, forcing myself to read them line by line. But many readers who open your book for the first time will not read it word for word. Therefore, the first three chapters lack the ability to retain people. I will mainly talk about the first chapter. The order of the first few paragraphs of the first chapter can be changed, which is my personal feeling. Put "Oh, why do I have such a stupid apprentice" at the beginning, mislead readers about his stupidity in a hundred or two hundred words, and make the conflict more intense! There's something going on at the beginning of the first chapter. Wait until the reader really starts reading, then give a brief explanation and then lay out your world view. After all, we are newbies, not tricksters. No one will read our book for its writing, and no one will read a novel with only 20,000 words, which ends up not developing much of the main plot, 10,000 words of detailed description, and 10,000 words of character description. What I said may be a bit extreme, and it is purely a personal opinion, so please consider it carefully. In addition, my book is "The Super God Summoner of the Canyon", yes, I have abandoned writing.

Thank you very much for everyone's support, especially the few readers who still vote for me every day even when I am so serious about updating. Thank you. I am almost busy with work, and will start to update steadily. Not to mention, there will be one chapter a day. If there is an outbreak, I will notify you in advance. By the way, I have remembered the number of chapters I owe you now, and I will make up for it in one go before the Spring Festival!

Come on DDD

The writing is okay, the protagonist is not outstanding, and the main line is unclear. Come on.

The writing, the writing is really good. But after all, this is not writing. In Shuangwen, flow and plot are the most important, even though I am also a newbie. As a reader, I may praise you for your good writing and writing skills, but it is difficult to attract me to read further. Hope it helps you

It was actually quite well written, but it's a pity that it died young.

Where can the author read the follow-up?

It's very beautiful. I came here from Dongdong.

Should be a eunuch