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Emm.... It looks so messy! I don't know what the author is writing about! Not clear enough! Besides. . . The author has a big golden finger, but he doesn't know how to use it, and it's always unclear.

Chapter 1: Persuading people to quit. No matter how incompetent the elders are, it is not the younger generation's turn to ridicule them, so they take action.

Congratulations to the author, the first chapter successfully persuaded most people to quit.

Brother, my sect, my nephew is doing something to his uncle in public? ? ? ? The author's IQ is not suitable for writing a book. Really The foundation of the existence of sects lies in "rules", just like Shaolin, Wudang, Emei, all the sects handed down from generation to generation. In which one of the sects have disciples who attack uncles, elders, and the public, and they are not finished? ? ? ? It's really a chapter to persuade people to quit, no brainwashing

I know writing a book is very hard, I hope you will continue to update it, and don't give up! I will support you and will always follow your books. Come on, come on, come on 😡😡😡

I'm trying to persuade you to quit at the beginning. There's a reason why you have so few recommendation votes. Please revise it while there are still few chapters.

I always feel like this protagonist is the kind of villain who dies because he talks too much.

Wow, I posted a v, and I support the first subscription!

The plot is really terrible,,,,, speechless

After reading thirty chapters, I'm totally confused and don't know what's going on.

I couldn't stand watching the first chapter. The younger generation actually dared to take action against the elders. Isn't this treasonous?

Damn, here I come! I am coming! I'm finally here! I didn't expect to find such a free and unrestrained book in the vast sea of ​​books. It's really a masterpiece! Well done! I have read so many books in the past few days, and your fairy tale novel is the most powerful, with special words and sentences. I like it so much, and the writing is super stable! There is one small drawback. The scene transition is not clear. It is recommended to separate it with symbols. Everything else is good! ! Dear, I have accepted and voted, you have to work hard (ง •̀_•́)ง(ง •̀_•́)ง(ง •̀_•́)ง You must survive the loneliness of newcomers, just like me, you must keep writing! I'm still watching~

Sorry, once I saw Sun Wukong in the introduction, I wasn't interested - there are too many books about Sun Wukong.

If you, the author, are going to make a living, you should polish the outline, think about the plot, and handle the characters of the book well. Now, 2020 is not the era of pioneering online articles. Who will read the things you write? Of course, if you are working part-time to earn some money for cigarettes or facial masks, just pretend that I didn't say anything. After all, it is not easy for everyone these days.

I read Chapter 40, but I don't understand the realm system, world background, and location map of this book.

I'll tell you to quit after just a few chapters, so don't waste your time.

Beeping beeping all day long, you have no skills, you are a waste of money, you would have died if it wasn't for the pig's trotters to force your life to continue.

So fucking ugly.

As for novels, you can have a good time without brains, like the Wudi style, or you can be more logical, and the most important thing is to abuse the main text. Now almost no one reads it, except for novices.

After reading forty-one chapters, the more I read, the more bored I become.

Just like the old down-and-out young master who was bullied by his slaves, this sect's junior beat up his uncle...