Douluo Heavens Upgrade

After reading Douluo, I felt like I ran into Douluo to get a bottle of soy sauce, and then I just abandoned the book and really didn't bother to read it.

I felt a little uncomfortable after the protagonist cut himself off and started over. I felt like I was reading a book again. The key to this book's world was that I was still confused and didn't know anything. I felt uncomfortable.

Emm, this should be my last comment on this book. It is really poisonous. How can I put it? The author may have wanted to write more fighting scenes and be more passionate, but the writing was a bit broken and the protagonist was written like a fool. Now that I have read the Dou Po volume, I can no longer read it. Douluo is okay, but Zhetian is very poisonous. In the realm of dragons, who gave the protagonist the courage to fight against the sky and the earth? To fight against the God King, just run away if you can't beat him. Why resist so hard? After What's more, no matter how serious the injury is, people from the Sendai realm will not be able to find it. For this reason, the bloodline is destroyed, and the protagonist's strength is reduced so that he can fight and defeat him. Later, he just beats people without explanation. He beats everyone when he sees them, which is like a teddy. It is really unbearable. Later I looked at the catalog and it was the same. Pretend, fight, can't beat, run, explode, fight again, get injured, cross the border, and pretend again. The protagonist obviously has such a good system, why not just stay in Zhetian until Ye Fan comes? At that time, the protagonist is already a semi-emperor, killing people and killing Buddhas. This is called cool writing. Now I am not happy whether I am torturing or not. It makes me feel embarrassed and bored. Oh, bye, I really can't stand it anymore. After reading this, those who like this book don't scold me, it's better to give me a thumbs up hehehe

(1) Obtain the system without any backhand, directly upgrade to a hundred years, and put yourself in danger (2) The Soul Saint part, run for revenge, waste a lot of experience, and put yourself in danger (3) 100,000 years of transformation, the brain was kicked by a donkey? Will you die if you take a helicopter for a million years and then wander out? I have to make myself weak and waste a hundred times the experience to upgrade. After reading Chapter 13, I am already poisoned. This IQ is so addicted to death. If it weren't for the protagonist, he would have been so cold. Want to be in a TV series that doesn't even deserve a name and die when he comes out? The kind of person who gets a great opportunity but is crazy about committing suicide and his mind is full of shi?

After reading Chapter 13, are you sure you want to go in like this? It's easy to find out that you are a soul tree, okay? One more thing, when writing Douluo Tongwen, don't lick the original, otherwise wait for the eunuch

After reading dozens of chapters, I went to Shrek and saw that the three female protagonists seemed very interested. Then I wrote it to be the same PC as the novel. So don't write it like this from the beginning. But it seems to be the same later, just like the protagonist's nanny. Why is it written there?

Accepting Flowers and Thousand Bones as Disciple Lu Xueqi

The Douluo part is okay, although it's a bit silly, but it's quite enjoyable. Once you get to Zhetian, it falls apart. It doesn't matter if you don't hook it at the beginning. Even when you get to the ruthless guy, your eyes turn red when you see the ruthless guy getting hurt, and you don't care about anything. It's the first time you meet him, and you haven't even said a few words. You're too fake. Also, your battle description is also a big flaw. I feel like it's just trying to make up the word count. There are too many repeated sentence patterns, which makes it uncomfortable to read. If you still insist on sticking to the Douluo part, you can just improve your cultivation and then go wild. As soon as Zhetian arrived, his personality changed drastically, and he started to fight against the sky and the earth.

The protagonist's combat power is 50/50, and he is evenly matched against everyone. After fighting for a chapter or two, he said: I want to be serious, I want to use my true strength, and then fight evenly for a while, and then win. Then they fight evenly for a few chapters, and then talk nonsense like being serious, and then fight another chapter and win. There are not many other plots in the book, and this kind of fighting method accounts for the majority There is also another reason why the author released it so early, because it was released late, and probably nine out of ten people who read this book will leave. After Douluo, the combat power, fighting, and plot The situation is completely chaotic. I add whatever comes to my mind. I use no brainer and brainless intelligence. There are a lot of fights, and then various protagonist operations, various skills are introduced, and then the enemies are scared and run around in a bunch. The protagonist starts to kill them all. Then in the next plot, the place is changed. The enemies catch up with them again, and are scared to run everywhere, and then... The old one sent a message. After the old one came, he started beating the protagonist mindlessly. The protagonist started to get ruthless, self-destructing this and that. He still didn't understand the protagonist's combat power. He beat everyone in the same way. After fighting for a while, he said a few words about seriousness. You deserve some of my strength. Then he fought for a while. In the end, he won a difficult victory. The enemy still felt that the protagonist was very strong and powerful.

Don't use your brain when reading this book. If you read this book with your brain, you will vomit. You will want to complain anytime and anywhere. ① When going to the far north, the protagonist provoked first, and then deliberately did not emit soul power, deliberately letting other people's soul beasts want to hit him. Then the protagonist became very angry, and even flashed a hint of killing intent, laughing to death ② Didn't Sword Douluo notice it in the cafeteria? It's just because of the protagonist that I didn't see it, but you also wrote a description! ③The protagonist of Zhetian World is an idiot. First, a beautiful woman chases a boy. Then the author describes the protagonist as an idiot. He wants to watch a show on the side, but then slowly walks towards the boy. Then the woman kills the boy with a sword. Then the protagonist gets angry indiscriminately, regardless of whether they have any love or hatred. The reason: Dare to kill people under my nose! Oh, you are really awesome. You are not allowed to do anything when others kill in front of you, but you kill people in front of you, so you have to kill the person who kills in front of you. You are really awesome. Without a system, you are useless. The protagonist also says every day that he has no pride. At first glance, he is an ordinary person swallowed by power. It can be said that his spirit has become a psychosis. He kills and kills at every turn, and gets angry at every turn. The protagonist It is completely pure hard power to crush, otherwise you will probably have to play around with your hands when playing with an old bastard, and this hard power is not born with him, but is given by the system. Without the system, he is a useless person Everyone here, this is the part I have seen so far, and I really can't stand the rest. I say goodbye, I'm afraid I can't bear such poison, and I hope all disciples will read the more than 400 chapters that follow.

The protagonist is a soul beast and the protagonist Wu Diwen takes the script to lick Tang San? I can only say that my brain is flooded. Don't you know that the soul beasts were almost exterminated by Tang San? Still have to lick and cultivate? Running to threaten Bibi Dong in the middle of the night and yelling at Bibi Dong not to deal with Tang San? Tang San is really your biological father, ah bah.

The ending of Bibi Dong is exactly the same as the original work 😭, so I discarded it.

I can read the first 15 chapters, but I feel that the protagonist upgrades a bit too fast. From 15 to 18 chapters, it starts to become dull, the writing style is also weak, and the plot is weak. From chapter 18, it becomes invincible. . . , There is no big problem in transitioning from 18 to 21, but what the hell is Chapter 21? Real elementary school student plot╮（＿）╭. . . It's pointless to show off, and it doesn't feel any better to show off. If you want to tie it into the original work, let's go with it. The protagonist has two lines: one becomes stronger on his own and the other is supposed to continue to show off as a teacher and mix it into the original work. The author is completely confused and has no idea what he wants to write. Looking at the author's writing style in different sections, there is a big difference. Once the content of the original work is written, it is confusing. Judging from the title of the book, I don't know what will happen next, but based on this early development, and based on the author's current writing skills, the future is not worth looking forward to.

To be honest, you have more than 7 billion experience points. Spending 100 million to upgrade is like losing a piece of meat. Isn't it safer to upgrade to a higher level? This is really awesome...

It's so toxic, I couldn't stand it after reading more than forty chapters. The protagonist is so useless. With nine hundred thousand year soul rings and ninety-nine level soul power, it is still so difficult to beat a Sword Douluo.

Why are they all criticizing the author? I can't even talk about it anymore. You have picked out all the faults. What should I do?😳😳😳

I clicked in just to see you and the Soul Beast Body Invincible Douluo Dalu. You turned into a human. Please, nine out of ten Douluo books follow the protagonist. What's so interesting?

Don't be the protagonist's licking dog. It's best not to help anyone, just play your own game, and then mention the original content. Otherwise this book will die quickly

Why do you always lick the protagonist?

I can't stand watching "Zhetian". Who is a ruthless person? She only cares about her brother all the time. In her first life, she devoured people with whatever physiques she saw. Why does the author still write the protagonist to flirt with? ? Hehe

What rubbish is written. Have you read the original work? He doesn't even know that the 100,000-year-old soul ring has two soul skills. What's even more awesome is my god. The soul skills used by the protagonist's 100,000-year soul ring. It was crushed by Tang Hao's hammer, so awesome. Can you write novels? You will only make others feel disgusted.

Damn it, how did you write this book? Why do I feel like the nanny of the protagonist group, who has been titled Douluo. Qian Daoliu can't even fuck the protagonist, but he still licks the Soul Lord hard. Author, you are really a talent. I have seen lickers, but I have never seen anyone who can lick like this. Licking the protagonist group is very poisonous at the same level. You are cheating. You are about to become a god, and you lick the Soul Lord Tang San and the others. This is too poisonous. Shennong's physique may not be able to resist it. I am speechless.

He died speechless, level 96, nine hundred thousand year soul rings, hollow willow bloodline, never defeated Tang Hao? ? ? This soul ring configuration can be used to fight thousands of times There is also a hundred thousand year soul ring with pig's feet, which is useless. Tang Hao can catch it with his physical fitness and random cloak hammering skills? ? Although the subsequent 81 hammers are powerful, the first few hammers can actually receive a hundred thousand year soul ring! !

After reading more than 200 chapters, I really can't stand it anymore.

What, such a great system, so good in the past, why did Mao still ask to join the main line, become the soul beast king and unify the continent, and then go to the academy, the ten Douluo books basically all have the same routine, it is really bearish. It's even more confusing later on, Zhe Tian is pretending to be dead, and Dou Po is also the main plot, which is really boring.

After reading a few chapters, are you the protagonist or is Tang San the protagonist? Then help Tang San? To be honest, your fan writing is not very good. Not as interesting as Emperor Dragon Shocking the World.

Author: I am a dog-licking eunuch and I am proud 🪖

Is this protagonist a hollow willow? Do you have any understanding of the laws of space? Have you used it? In your understanding, is the power of space used for traveling? Will it be used? You get into a fight and get bullied by Haotian Douluo. You are too weak. Where is your spatial suppression and your spatial transfer? Zhao Wuji can suppress and lock everything with gravity, so what are you doing?

In Douluo, the ending is the same with or without the protagonist. It seems to have changed, but in fact nothing has changed. So what is the meaning of writing Douluo?

It felt very good when I just watched it. I don't know if I will lose my level in the future. Many people should not lick the protagonist. I just wanted to talk about how to write a fanfic without licking the main character.