I Opened up the Heavens into a Secret Realm

The idea is good, but the writing style doesn't match the style and is extremely uncomfortable. What's more fatal is the plot. The three dungeons mentioned are purely three episodic plots, and the development of each episode is similar. The key is to remove the three fragments, so that there will be no content at the connection point and it will be relatively white.

How can you practice it after looking at the moon and getting the Beginningless Sutra? Don't mess around with me... Is that guy an innate holy body? Have you forgotten this setting?

I'll keep ordering all of them. I don't ask you for more updates. Just finish the book.

It's okay, I think it's a bit interesting, it's pretty good, keep up the good work💪

The book is very nice, but the amount is too small!

Why doesn't the author update? 😢😆😆

It's good to change it so that it doesn't look inconsistent, otherwise the whole thing will have a strange feeling.

The author needs to control the rhythm well from the beginning. The first secret realm radiates to a small area, and then slowly becomes larger. The protagonist himself also explores the secret realm with the indigenous people. It is much better to write it through a kind of boss behind the scenes. I feel that the rhythm must be controlled well. It cannot be too fast at the beginning. Through the protagonist's personal experience, a larger world can be expanded. The secret realm should not be an invincible existence, but should be very random. In this way, the mystery of the secret realm will be interesting to watch. I hope the author will work hard!

This book is about to become a god. Don't collapse. It has just been opened. Be careful. The scene must be grand and the world view must be grand. Geniuses are as numerous as dogs. Saints are everywhere. Be sure to show off.

It's enough to just label fellow Zhetian people. What else can you do to Zhutian? They're really selling sheep over dogs.

They are all other people's plots and characters. . . I hope the authors will write more of their own books. It's boring to just introduce other people's books.

Well written! I'm in a trap. That's it. . . . One update a day is too little 😎😎 At least two updates a day! Can the time be earlier?

The author should modify the inheritance obtained by Wangyuejitian. It is not because of the innate holy body and Taoism that one cannot practice the Wushi Sutra.

Why not build a sky-reaching light pillar? A scene like the birth of a strange treasure? It's really down-to-earth to always have just a few people, just like you spent 10 billion to make a movie and only showed it to a few people? The key is that you still want to make a profit

Well, the more I watch it, the better it gets, but there are some that feel a little bit toxic (probably). If you watch it in one go, it feels pretty good, but if you watch it over several days, it's a little awkward😅. Watching the protagonist create a tourist spot for the aboriginal people is not at all harmonious.

I think it looks pretty good. Come on. It has the potential to become a god in the later stage. I usually don't get it wrong. Don't write bad words. Just write slowly. Don't be anxious, author. Come on.

Brother, the first few paragraphs of your first chapter are too similar to my certain lu. It would be nice to change it a little bit...

Ten updates a day, a ten-day bronze alliance, put it up and let the oranges see it

The author of a book that is not worth even five dollars can sell it to a million dollars. Tell me, why are you a eunuch? You are already very good. Don't think about becoming a god with a book all day long!

The author of this book has too low standards for immortals. He is an immortal at every turn. He can feel the aura of an immortal even during the spirit gathering period. I am really speechless.

It feels pretty good and shows off. I haven't seen this kind of intelligent pretense in years. .... And it's not just the protagonist pretending.

Is there any book similar to this one? ? ? ? ?

You wrote well, author, and I hope you will continue to do so! Come on come on!

If the force is too high at the beginning, it will easily collapse later. At the beginning, if you write some secret realms of powerful gods and give them to some inheritance, systems such as weapon secrets can be given away. Furthermore, the protagonist should show his genius side, enter the big sect and then guide the monks into the secret realm, so that he can have a sense of presence. It was boring to see the protagonist always behind the scenes. The person behind the scenes doesn't necessarily need to hide in a mountain to control everything. The real madman should hide in the crowd and play tricks on everyone. I think it's very good when I look at Emperor Shakti. It gives the impression that you never know what he is going to do. Why!

Overall, a very good novel. There are very few articles like this about the real man behind the scenes. I watched a movie about being the mastermind behind the scenes, but Goose, he did the whole thing by himself, and humans were being massacred, but he actually didn't care, he just focused on making money and upgrading his system, it was really amazing. I wonder if you have any other novels of this type? Let me introduce it. Be the mastermind behind the scenes, don't waste it on your own.

If you had updated a chapter every two days, this book wouldn't have died so miserably.

After reading the comments, it turned out to be a eunuch book 😡😡😡

Let me explain. The author said that he went to look for love. If he succeeded, he came back and continued writing. If he doesn't exceed it, it depends on fate.

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It's been a long time since I've seen a new book with this level of writing and IQ. The rhythm is very good. It makes people want to read on.