Douluo Heaven Lottery System

I've read Chapter 50, but I really can't stand it anymore. The poisonous parts are okay, so I can just endure it and get over it. The key is that there is really nothing new, and the writing is as boring as water. Following the plot, there is no innovation or magic modification, and it feels like reading the original work again. Maybe a novice can read it, but a bookworm like me who has been reading for more than ten years really can't. I wish the author gets rich and happy reading, book lovers.

This kind of article by the author can't even match the context. Write it today and forget it tomorrow. After all, San'er publishes a new book and then eats the old book. Are you writing a new chapter and eating the previous one? The writing is inconsistent, the characters are tangled and contradictory, and the plot has little original content. I still recommend this and don't be impulsive. Which editor asked you to do this and blacklisted the matter. Let's start with quality assurance. Making readers comfortable is the first priority. I hope you can figure out whether it is worth more than a thousand chapters of garbage or six or seven hundred chapters of fine works.

Can anyone tell me, if you abuse your master, you should not abuse your master? Cuckold or not? First time at starting point

There is no big difference from the original work, except that an extra person was added, which is really boring.

After reading a few chapters, either this person was shocked or that person was shocked, nothing else...

I particularly hate the role of Master, for no other reason than that his water figures are top-notch. 🤭🤭 Just kidding, don't mind.

Don't bring your personal emotions into the novel. What happened to Xue Beng? He was flexible and flexible. He knew that he was surrounded by people from the Wuhun Palace. He didn't know how he died, even if he died. After making the staff, he sent troops to the Wuhun Palace. He didn't want to surrender and become a free king. He can be called a tycoon and buy women. Isn't it normal for slaves? Everyone in Douluo Continent has some ability. There are only a few female slaves there. If there were not many female slaves, the people around me would think that Long Yang is good. He just criticizes others when they are unhappy. He sentenced others to death after just 3 rings. The character of the protagonist is so rubbish.

How can I put it, after going through Douluo World to Dou Po, I feel that there is no climax after that. I am also following it now. After seeing Chapter 728, I feel that I should end this world quickly and go to other places, such as the advanced prehistoric world, etc. After all, Bai Ge's strength is almost at its peak. I now support the author. Come on, I feel that this book can be continued.

It's rubbish because the author copied too much and didn't spell it out properly. Chapter 48 talks about upgrading the Dragon and Elephant Prajna Kung Fu learned to the Ten Dragons and Ten Elephants Kung Fu and the Golden Bell Cover of Tiger Roaring and Dragon Roaring. By 81, it had regressed and turned into the Dragon Elephant Prajna Gong and the Thirteen Taibo Golden Bell, and the Eye of Insight also turned into the Purple Demon Eye. In addition, Mingyu Gongxuantian Gong changes from time to time.

The Star Casting Dragon King's martial spirit is a bit awesome, it's so powerful even without the addition of a spirit ring, and it can probably reach the god level when it becomes a titled Douluo.

Although it is a very old-fashioned Shrek route, I thought it was okay at the beginning. I thought it was a single female protagonist and kept following it. Later, it changed to a harem. To be honest, it was a bit disturbing, but I just made do with it. It can be seen that the author has been concentrating on writing and does not want to make the protagonist invincible all at once. However, the protagonist does not encounter any setbacks from the beginning to the end of the book, and there are too many confusing techniques. Why do you still want to steal Tang San's opportunity when there are already cheats? To be honest, it seems a bit poisonous. If you are a grassroots protagonist who steals opportunities, forget it. You have a system and you still want to steal this thing. System release tasks are somewhat redundant. In short, the author should still have great potential, so please continue to work hard in the future.

There is no useless martial spirit, only useless soul masters are the result of poisonous chicken soup.

I really don't like The Master, because it's true that a useless martial soul is a useless martial soul. After watching the two movies, it seems that none of the useless martial souls achieved titles.

Licking Tang San and worshiping the master? If you don't like it and don't want to watch it, why should you become a disciple of the master? He is just a useless person. He does not have a useless martial spirit, but only a useless soul master. So, may I ask, master, why haven't you reached level 30? Are you just a waste? Do you have resources to follow the master? Fart's resources, his resources are as much as those of Wuhun Palace? There are Bibi Dong, Qian Renxue, and Hu Liena in the Wuhun Palace, and they have accepted mother and daughter, as well as master and disciple. Isn't he sweet?

If you don't like harem stories, persuade them to quit.

Some of the current Douluo fans who lick Tang San and worship the master can survive. The author should give up as soon as possible and don't waste time.

I think the biggest drawback of this novel is that the protagonist has too many abilities. It feels like the author is trying to create a perfect protagonist. All abilities are covered. On the contrary, Shenwu Hunque ignored the most important thing. Anyway, it gave me the feeling that the protagonist's god-level martial spirit didn't reflect how awesome it was.

When I was short of books, I randomly looked for it and clicked in. After reading the introduction, I thought I could resist poison, so I clicked to read, but it jumped directly to Chapter 8. This proves that I read this book at first, but I was persuaded to give up after resisting until Chapter 8 ಥ_ಥ This time I don't believe in evil and will start over again to see if my poison resistance has increased after many years🤣

Hey, I still can't stand it anymore. I still like the protagonist's character. But I really can't stand this ability. In the original work, Mo Yunteng's most awesome ability is to possess his body and turn it into an armor that protects against the heavens. With this armor, the protagonist also needs a damn castle fruit. Make yourself look like a monster. All other dazzling abilities are actually completely unnecessary. There are also various martial arts secrets that you can practice without fear of going crazy. People can practice one skill in a lifetime. You are practicing a lot at once. The most speechless thing is that the protagonist has to compete with the powerful soul master when fighting. Compared with the power attack system. Compared with defense system. As if not doing so would not reflect his awesomeness. He seemed to know that he was the protagonist and would not die no matter how he pretended to be.

I don't want to watch it even if I haven't watched it yet. The protagonist is considered a useless martial soul even though he is already born with full soul power. Tang San is a useless martial soul because his first martial soul is Blue Silver Grass, the most visible garbage grass in Douluo Continent. And the male protagonist just awakens an earthworm that they don't recognize. However, just the element of innate full soul power can be classified as a genius. Do you think that innate full soul power can be found everywhere?

The Shame of the Time Traveler, for this kind of protagonist, I can step on 5 million people to death, and fart to death 3,000 people. A level 30 great soul master, such a useless person, with 300 kilograms of strength, I can carry 500 kilograms on the back of anyone on the street! In this Douluo Continent, as long as I find Zuo Lengchan, I can destroy the world.

The Wuhun Palace is really miserable. They spare no effort to train low-level soul masters, provide Wuhun enlightenment, and provide gold coin subsidies. As a result, a group of white-eyed wolves were cultivated. The Wuhun Palace has merits, not to mention that humans and soul beasts are the essential difference between hunters and prey. If Tang San is not the protagonist, first he is a vegetative, and his descendants are half-orcs, Zizi, your family is really messed up, you know how to play.

The first thing I wrote is okay, but I don't want to read too much in the second part. The main thing is this reading software. You have to pay for it. If you don't pay, you won't be allowed to read it. What kind of software? Leave a negative review

I feel so persuaded to quit, and with the protagonist, hey, leaving, I can't stand it

Does the author really know how to write a climax? The part about the Green Mianniao was almost a sadistic one, and the protagonist was at a loss!

The main character of Douluo Dou Po is too divided. It feels like you don't need a full-level 100 large account. You have to open a small account with dozens of levels. You have to open a small account. The large account doesn't even have a small account. The further you go, the more boring it becomes.

It's not interesting. I've been subscribing for a while. In the early days, the single female protagonist Ning Rongrong was pretty good. Later, I gave it to Meng Yiran. Judging from the posture, there should be more in the future. Goodbye if the values ​​​​discord.

Who is the heroine in this? Are there multiple heroines?

It looks very awkward, and the setting is inconsistent. Forget it, the scene where the protagonist meets Ning Fengzhi is so awkward. He didn't take the initiative or express his position at the beginning, but later his father-in-law came out.

Please wear "Long Live the Summon" in the next world, please