The Apocalypse Only I Can See

The atmosphere is particularly well written, and the description of humanity is also great. But when I read the whole article in one breath, I felt very irritable, irritable and irritable, as if it contained a scream that kept screaming, but it was so beautiful that I didn't want to throw it away. Maybe it's because the people in the article are always yelling and screaming and having various mental breakdowns, or maybe it's because there are too many indescribable whispers in the fog that make people laugh. It's good, but it's also often fed up, making it difficult to choose.

I have only read the first twenty chapters, but the author's novel ideas still attracted me. In Starting Point, few people would write like this, and it also reflects our real society. Human nature is so fragile in suffering. Whether they can strengthen their true heart in such an environment, but even this will be eroded over time. In addition, the author's control over human nature is so great that it gives people a strong sense of involvement. I hope the author can continue to maintain your creative style and not be a eunuch 😆 I think highly of you.

The author is so scary 😱, the psychological description is detailed and sharp, I think it is quite exciting. It's quite hard-core. The disadvantage is that it's very brain-consuming and intense to write like this. Author, hold on! There is also the fear that younger people may not be able to understand such complex content, and it will become a niche reading material. No matter what, the quality is the quality, please come on author^0^~😆

I think it's really good-looking and exciting. It has a good grasp of human nature, with darkness and tenderness. Come on!

It's really good-looking. If the author doesn't write online articles but horror novels, I believe it will have good results. This type of novel is not my favorite, but this book is my favorite. Come on, author!

It seems reasonable, but it is actually torture for the sake of torture 🙂 Farewell, your book should be submitted to a physical magazine of youth literature, and it should not be a starting point. The online article should be easy to understand, or the text should be beautiful and fascinating, rather than this kind of situation where you need to calm down and follow the author to experience the sadness of the protagonist many times.

The plot is very well written, and the description of people's struggle between life and death is even better. The responsibility of the head of the family is written from the perspective of a middle-aged man, which is even more sad to watch. But the protagonist is really weak

In the story, when the protagonist does not have the means to deal with the danger, the danger comes again, such as the kind of explosion, someone coming to save, and other things that can deal with the danger. The readers must know, that is, you must write it out. The protagonist has some way to deal with the crisis. Even if the protagonist does not know it, the reader must know. If it is not written, the protagonist must die. If the protagonist does not die, then the author forcibly cheats, which is false. , Destroying the rationality of the story Just like a level 1 character in the game falls into a level 1000 monster area, and the monsters are actively attacking. This character is bound to die. In reality, he may not die, but the story cannot write coincidences. There are no coincidences in the story. If you write this in the story, he will die, so the endings of those Cthulhu stories are mostly annihilation Written by you This, the protagonist is in great danger, and the protagonist himself has no measures to deal with it. The protagonist is bound to die. The protagonist is in danger and has no means. Suddenly someone comes, or the protagonist explodes. Writing like this destroys the rationality of the story. This is completely arranged by the author. The author uses this method to manipulate the plot, which is called explosion. Normally when writing explosion, the protagonist should know that he can Explode, and then the protagonist gambles on life or death, and then the protagonist explodes and survives. The abnormal thing is that the protagonist doesn't know, and then explodes at the last moment. This is completely manipulating the plot. If you don't explode early, you won't explode later. It just happens to be at this time. That's okay. The protagonist can just fight the boss. What level should I upgrade to? There is an author behind the scenes anyway. If you can't win, you will explode. What a great ending.

Hi guys. With everyone's support, this book has reached nearly 200,000 words. I am very grateful to everyone for accompanying me all the way, and thank you all for your discussions and complaints about the plot. The plot will become more and more exciting in the future, please wait and see, let us explore the true appearance of the world together.

Was the protagonist affected after returning to reality? The feeling of losing one's mind is concentrated in one place, and that is the section after taking Shen Bing's roommate home: Firstly, the protagonist suddenly describes the dark side of the world to her, which can be said to be explained by the protagonist's mood being too depressed; Secondly, this woman just revealed to the protagonist that she knows people in the mental hospital and what the protagonist said is the same, which is a bit of a deliberate arrangement of the plot. The strange thing is that the protagonist believed her story without any doubt. This kind of unprovoked coincidence will actually be suspicious if you think about it carefully. This doesn't quite fit the character of the protagonist. Then the protagonist goes to talk to his friend. The protagonist clearly knows that his friend is a psychiatrist, and without any evidence to prove his own experience, he tells his friend everything. An elite lawyer should not do such a nonsense. Then it gets even weirder. The protagonist obviously has a better way to get in touch with the mental patient, but he chooses the worst way: pretending to be a mental patient and going in. This not only forces a label of delusion on himself, but also isolates himself in the mental hospital. And before entering, a friend revealed information that a mass suicide case had occurred in this mental hospital (it was strange that the protagonist wanted to go in, but he did not investigate the situation in the hospital). When the protagonist got this information, he could not have imagined that the hospital was obviously weird and even extremely dangerous, but he went in anyway, alas. The biggest black hand in the world is not nameless at all, but the author! I only saw what was said above. If the author adds a setting and says: the protagonist's sanity has been reduced, he is incapable of thinking, he has been arranged, and everything he does is normal, then just think of me as farting!