Start by Seeing the Life Value

It's a cool novel for beginners. It's the kind of thing you can read without using your brain. If you read it with your brain, you will find that the logic does not make sense, the IQ of the supporting characters has dropped, the protagonist is in the advanced stage of secondary disease, and you may even want to curse after reading it for a long time.

I don't know if the author who is on the street or is on the way to being on the street is ready to make instant noodles the staple food in the future. This book is so good that I am convinced!

This book failed to grasp the key points from the beginning of the planning and preparation of the institute. It wasted a lot of ink on finding scientists. There were so many inner activities and related explanations that I couldn't tolerate it. I spent more than 1,600 points on various activities. I was still impulsive. I should read more before making a decision. I hope that the author's future works will have more practical content and less water content, and strive to make progress. In addition, I want to complain about a few things I don't like 1. The heroine Jiang Wen's character has no self and is purely a vassal of the male protagonist. However, she is the character with the second most scenes and one of the most poisonous points. 2 Jiang Wen calls the male protagonist "senior, senior" endlessly. The two have never been classmates for a day, so it was okay to tease the male protagonist once or twice when they first met. However, it is really illogical, embarrassing and boring to continue to call the male protagonist this way, which is the second most poisonous point. 3 The showdown of extraordinary powers came too late. To be honest, by the time Tutankhamun's Heart came on stage, my anticipation and excitement for the big scene had been exhausted. The third poisonous point. 4 The villain is completely missing, whether it is the Tang family or the later Bishop Tyronda, as the early villain, his role is like a supporting role, written to death by the author in one stroke, not satisfying at all, the fourth poisonous point. 5 The protagonist Qin Ge is self-contradictory. He repeatedly emphasized that he is a human being, but later he ignored human life and judged life and death based on his personal likes and dislikes. He lived according to his will and died if he hesitated for a moment! It would be fine if Qin Ge was just the kind of self-absorbed super-body from the beginning, but he repeatedly emphasized that he is a human being. Such double standards are really speechless. This is the fifth poisonous point, and it is also the biggest poisonous point. The character of the protagonist collapsed, and it collapsed too early. Unknowingly, after writing so much, I also regretted the subject matter of this book and felt sorry for the author, alas. Finally, I wish you all a happy Spring Festival, a happy family, good health, immunity from all poisons, and good luck.

After staying up late to read I Build the Immortality Club, I felt that the writing style was too different and too toxic 🙂

I have read Chapter 14, and I am really unhappy with some of the things I said 1. The theme is well framed, but the author's writing is too bad 2. The nurse woman appears inexplicably 3. The author's ideas and development of golden fingers can be said to be very good 4. Can the author think more about people in normal society, a person worth ten A billionaire, it's not difficult to check your information. It's not difficult to check your information. Your behavior in the early stage is definitely enough for him to understand your situation. Although it will come back later Five, those three rules are especially free. Either trade everything, or you might as well cooperate with the country to let those national heroes live longer and it will be better for the country The above is my personal opinion.

Ahem, 800,000 words and 10,000 collections. Let's start a new book. I didn't make it to Chapter 15.

This is the same as the "Eternal Life Club"...

I feel like the author didn't have an outline when writing this book. I read about fifty chapters, and I always felt that the process was a bit fast. This is not the kind of invincible novel, so it could be slowed down a little.

I don't think it looks very good. Let's write in another book.

Why don't many death row inmates in prison make deals with some prison guards? The amount of money given to death row inmates to buy their lives should be very small, and the death row inmates are also willing to give the money to their families because they are about to die.

Coming from piracy, in order to comment on the starting point number of registration. . . Although the supporting characters are dull, I really like the setting. It's really good-looking. I didn't expect so many bad comments. . . But this book is really interesting. Good luck to the author! ! !

The author wants to tell you that the subject matter is good. The writing is also okay. But you should start writing without writing an overall outline. Your book has too many inconsistencies, and the protagonist's mentality is too capricious In the beginning, I had the ability to sell my time, so I chose to be cautious. I tried to hold on, but ended up writing on the plane and to Poland. I thought this was something only a madman would do. There was also the need to form an organization at the beginning, but it turned out to be a child's play, just developing two people and running around the world. The same goes for the purchase time, which I briefly brushed off in a hurry. Maybe I wanted to quickly write out the plot that I thought would be more interesting later on, but this time I just brushed it off, leaving me speechless. Because the theme of your novel is time. The protagonist's abilities derived from time are too arbitrary. Has the protagonist himself even thought about how to develop? For an ordinary person who is confused. I think when he made 300 million, the first thing he did was enjoy life. Anyway, there is endless money. As a result, the protagonist wants to study the cultivation of immortality at one time and rule the theological world in Poland at the other. Really, your book is too exaggerated.

I read a short story, and the protagonist was the same. The number he saw was lifespan. If it suddenly became less, it would be dangerous. So he went to the pharmaceutical research laboratory to develop a new injection and hung it on his arm. If the number became smaller, it meant failure and more products were successful. The number of the medicine he studied increased more and more, until one day the number became a lying 8, which is infinity. He injected the injection, and then the zombie virus broke out and the end came.

Is this book based on a movie? It seems to be from Korea, I can't remember it. It's probably about a girl who can see other people's lifespans, and the lifespan is on her ankles.

The author's foreshadowing is a bit too much, and it doesn't give people a bright feeling. It's boring, the heroine feels inexplicable, "If you don't know how to write emotional scenes, don't write it," and it feels a bit forced. However, the follow-up is still refreshing. It's still very good so far. It's worth watching. I must write better in the future so as to attract more people's attention. Come on.

Copying books? 😡

It's a good book with a very novel writing style, but unfortunately, the plot written by the author is too scattered. It would be better if the protagonist's development and growth could be written in more detail.

In the current social climate, the world is angry, who will be the savior in times of crisis? The love between children and daughters cannot be separated, and the separation between life and death is heartbreaking. Leave Germany empty plots, abandon the righteous to conquer, how many times do intrigues and deceptions come true? In the quiet world, the ups and downs of the world, who decides on etiquette, justice and integrity? I just want to talk incessantly, not enough to cover the world of heaven and earth, and talk about my heart, but I can't tell the depth, so I am amusing you and put it into a smile.

A few years ago, I also conceived of a golden finger based on time, or lifespan, because from the perspective of ordinary people, time is a cheap, wasteful, and renewable resource. 6 Billion people (in the eyes of social elites and wealthy people, the vast majority of people in this world are waste, and their contribution to society is dispensable. I believe you and I can feel this malice) multiplied by 50 years It is equivalent to 300 billion years of time. When converted into money, superpowers, etc., It can surpass the abilities of ordinary people. This is the cost of showing off. As long as you calculate the conversion scale yourself (don't make it collapse later), this is the main economy of a book. If this is not messy, the others will not collapse. The difficulty of developing the ability of time must be increased, increased, increased. It is too easy to obtain and it makes people feel unacceptable. , Time itself transcends the universe (representing most matter, matter is expendable in the face of time), and is mysterious. Human beings' observation of it is too poor, which does not mean that time itself is so controllable. The author defines the acquisition of time as autonomous trading, which is very good and controllable. If this evil is not released, others will complain later depending on their mood. 😄😄😄, I have been reading books for more than ten years , the first time I post an opinion, mainly because the discussion circle is full of malice. I think the author feels uncomfortable when he sees it. Even if he is open-minded and laughs it off, it does not mean that he is comfortable in his heart. Not caring is open-minded, but it is not a reason for you to be presumptuous. Do you know that others can do whatever they want without caring? I hope this can cheer up the author and make you feel that someone recognizes you.

It's really poisonous and the logic is confusing. Newbies may still be able to read it, but even those who are a little older may find it hard to swallow.

The author has a lot of poisonous points, especially in terms of pretentiousness and emotions. If you can't write emotions, don't want a female protagonist.

I still think "I Created the Immortality Club" has a strong character. The protagonist of that novel can speed up or slow down the flow of time. When you are in mortal danger, time will give you an early warning, and you will almost never be targeted for assassination! ! ! During the transaction, the protagonist and the trader looked at everyone else almost motionless, and they were immediately stunned. The transaction contract is blessed by the power of time, which is equivalent to a contract that cannot be broken. That protagonist can still travel through time. What a yuppie! ! !

I just read Chapter 27. There are a lot of poisonous points. It feels like the kind of writing that was written five to eight years ago. The illogical pretense is very stiff and embarrassing. It's the author's own work.

It's a pity that such a good setting has a bad author

The author is simply a talent. I have read about ten chapters so far, and he has written all kinds of points that should not be written about the persuasion to quit. It is a talent to be able to write down the points of persuasion so comprehensively. I don't know what will happen next, but I feel that it is either a novice or a noob.

Oh my God, it's too cruel. A female partner will die with the male protagonist once they meet. An evening dress costs 20 million US dollars. Tsk tsk.

It's extremely poisonous. I persisted for 22 chapters. Is there anything more resistant?

How come this novel is exactly the same as the one I Created the Immortality Club? I just added a little bit of my own stuff. It just so happens that these things that are different from that book are all poisonous points. It's awesome.

The protagonist is unlikable and the author's presentation is too weak. It has long been proven that the theory of evolution is wrong. Species can only mutate and not evolve. You can insist on evolution, but it is completely wrong to use something from more than 100 years ago to make an argument. If you insist on finding a monkey as your ancestor, no one will stop you.

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