The Sand Tower on the Other Side

It's well written. I suggest you change the introduction. Really.

It's the kind of text that becomes more interesting the more you read it. In addition to the unfolding of the plot, the feeling of lurking crisis and thrilling feeling is more obvious. It is not the feeling of a passionate and refreshing novel, but more undercurrent, and the thoughts are ups and downs like the tide. Appreciate the author's writing style and structure. The immersion in the world is particularly well done. Every line is full of black technology and a sense of the future, and the description of the world of consciousness and psychological categories also looks very professional. I especially like the line of Chi Qian, which has the smooth texture of metal condensation. The beginning is slow, there are many characters, and the narrative perspective keeps changing, which makes it feel a bit complicated. If you feel bored at the beginning, it is recommended to start reading from Chapter 13.

The writing is okay, but there are too many environment descriptions and action descriptions. I also have this problem, but you are more exaggerated than me. It's normal to not sign a contract and not recommend a standalone game. It's too many times to change the introduction.

There are too many characters and their relationships, too many lines, which is troublesome to watch, and too troublesome to remember because of too many characters. The perspective changes frequently, making it difficult to read in depth. But there's nothing poisonous about it. Come on.

It just came out on Daodu. What type of book is it?