My Powers Will Evolve

I personally really like this book, so I can't help but point out areas where it can be improved. I hope the author can refer to the comments below. The first one is about characterization. Whether it is the protagonist or other characters, the characterization is relatively poor (except for a certain Long Aotian friend of the protagonist, which is okay) What kind of person do you want to portray the protagonist? Is he a scumbag who plays with his emotions at will in order to gain power, or does he care about the other person but has to deceive his feelings for his own power? Judging from the writing of the previous chapters, it should be the former. There is no problem in shaping in this direction, and you can also switch to the latter later. You can feel happy when you should be happy, and you will be worried when you should be worried. If the protagonist of a work is the soul of the work, then this is the way to give the soul. The biggest point in setting the protagonist's abilities is the interaction with the heroine. This is the ultimate key to whether you can have fun. The control of rhythm and character creation are extremely important points. In other words, how to create one or more female characters that everyone likes, or female characters that everyone hates, is a point that needs to be thought about. In terms of rhythm, I personally think that the character charm of the female character should be highlighted. Everyone likes such a girl, but the final result is that she has to reject the male protagonist. Isn't it interesting? But the male protagonist is a scumbag, with a hard heart. As for the side effects of abilities, I personally think the punishment is a bit too severe. It will affect the enjoyment and limit the scope of the work. Instead, the heroine's ability will disappear for a few days to a week when she accepts the confession. Maybe it will bring surprises but not make the readers too unhappy. (A few years is too long, so long that it is completely unequal to the rejected reward, unless the author can give a reasonable explanation logic) In addition to surprises, you can also get the opportunity to depict characters, and the short period when the protagonist's ability disappears is also the clarion call for reversal and counterattack. (The long-lost ability returns with the protagonist's help. During this period, the villain who seized the opportunity and tried to kill the protagonist was suddenly counterattacked. It is also a traditional kingly feeling.)

Another thing is that you want to start having fun quickly. You should brew for a while and don't be too impatient. Chapter ten or so is a good pacing point. Taking about 50 chapters as a story section is also a good rhythm method. In addition, the structure of the worldview is a bit lacking, and I hope it can be improved as soon as possible (the worldview is still very vague after four or five chapters, and it should have been completed within three chapters.) I am optimistic about you, and hope to make more progress. I will collect this book first.

It's pretty good. What's the matter with this superpower? It's said that everyone has different superpowers, but I don't feel that they are any different. It's like they just practice.

First of all, I would like to thank my book friends for their several long reviews, which I have refined. Let's talk about the creation of characters. Regarding the creation of characters, I disagree with you. I think I did a pretty good job. At least I expressed what I wanted to express. Everyone is complex, and there are only a few main roles that must be focused on shaping, not to mention so many supporting roles. The book has only been updated with 80,000 words, and there are only so many opportunities to appear. If only Braille is enough, all the supporting characters can be transformed into flesh-and-blood living people that you will never forget through one conversation or one conflict. Sorry, I am limited by my writing skills and cannot do it. Let's talk about the protagonist next. In fact, I have thought about the character of the protagonist early on, but I hope it can be expressed from the side through dialogue actions. And there are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand readers. What kind of person the readers think the protagonist is, that is what he is, whether he is a scumbag or a peerless good man. Why does it have to be me who says who he is and who he is? I repeat once again that people are complicated and their personalities are slowly understood. It is impossible to become fat in one bite. Next is the heroine. Why do you think the heroine has already appeared? Or why do you think this book has a female protagonist? In order to improve his abilities, the protagonist confesses his love to several girls. I will naturally focus on the description in the following plot. It is impossible for them to just be A, B, C and D who will be offline after rejecting the protagonist. And the title of the book already says that the protagonist's powers will evolve. When did I say that the protagonist can only improve by confessing and being rejected. Maybe in the future there will be a male protagonist confessing to a male supporting character, or even a male supporting character confessing to the male protagonist? The same is true for side effects. Why do you think side effects will never change? So, read on patiently, the story has just begun. Thanks again for the long review and support.

After reading a few chapters, the subject matter is very good, and I will definitely be able to sign a contract, but the control and subject matter are not very good. After reading a few chapters, I found that you threw away a lot of things that had room for development, so there wasn't even any foreshadowing. Ma Chunmei is the first female character to appear in this article, and she is still the female character to appear subsequently. Should there be more description and development of the story line?

🤫 The effect of persuading people to quit is particularly effective

Did the author come up with this idea because he was rejected by girls a lot?

If I were the protagonist, I would choose to have the supporting characters cross out their names, and challenge them one by one at the school gate after they lose the competition to prove their strength. At the same time, when the school leaders ask, I will tell them that I also signed up, but somehow it disappeared, exposing the other party's conspiracy.

The book is okay, but the superpowers are too rubbish and the error tolerance rate is too low. If there is a slight mistake, it will disappear for a few years and some problems will arise. I guess the next time it comes out, the protagonist will be in his thirties or forties and he will still be messing around? It only takes a few days for it to expire. If you encounter a mind-reader or something and know your huge weakness, the protagonist will be finished in minutes~

I don't know what to complain about, but the pig-footed character is a genius boy, the kind that defies heaven. As a result, he was treated as a joke because of his superpowers? What about technology? Is technology useless? If you learn mathematics, physics and chemistry well, you won't be afraid of traveling all over the world! As far as the character Pig Knuckle is concerned, it would be considered lazy if he didn't advance the world's technology by 500 years in high school 😅

Please write with the purpose of making me laugh to death, come on, hohohoho

The sacrifices and rewards of superpowers are not proportional at all. The more I look at them, the more frustrated I become.

Although I have just read the previous chapter, I still couldn't help but post it first: I thought it was just a rejection, but I didn't expect the restrictions to be so big, and it's a time traveler. To be honest, I just watched it not long ago, but the restrictions for the protagonist are really too great. Not only can I confess my love to be my girlfriend, but I also have to meet the intimacy level. If the confession fails, the restrictions will be accumulated and doubled, and I will slowly rise from the fall of the prodigy? It's okay that Goldfinger has restrictions, and I understand if it fails, but I feel like it's a bit abusive to the master, and I haven't seen much of it at all. I don't know what everyone thinks, and I don't know what will happen in the future. I hope there will be changes in the awakening and upgrade, otherwise I really can't watch it.

Can't you just find a tsundere and keep brushing your skills 😰 Watson! I seem to have discovered a blind spot

I relied on the protagonist's prodigy aura to be surrounded by beautiful women, but he turned out to be a weakling with a weak heart, and also borrowed the character of Charlotte's troubles and the protagonist's personality.

Whether it's a super-powerful thing or an incredibly weak one, as long as you think it's fun, interesting and innovative, you can leave a message. Don't just mention the name, it's best to leave the specific method of using the power and its effect.

I was attracted by the cover 😏😏😏 Can you post a picture of this cover? I can use it as an emoticon. You can delete it after saving it.

Did the author Ji or the author Jun come up with the idea of ​​writing this book after being rejected a lot?😰😰😰😰

My second reward is given to you, you have to work hard 🤓

There shouldn't be a female protagonist with this kind of superpower, right?

Yeah, yeah, I've opened a new book, let's have some tea.

This is another new author, so I don't dare to hold out hope. What are you afraid of, alas...

Come on ah ah ah ah, very good seedlings

I'm chasing you, don't wait until it's on the shelves

I would like to ask, does the protagonist become stronger after being rejected, or does he become stronger only when he confesses his love and is rejected by a girl?

I think that if this is an era where maids are allowed, we can strictly prohibit the young master from falling in love with the maid, and then gain a good impression and express his love 🤓🤓