Buddhist Dota Demon King

I read the first ten chapters, mainly because I didn't know much about the game, and I was a little confused. The combination of Chinese and English made me, an English learner, a little confused 😰😰😰😰 Sorry, sorry, it's embarrassing, it's embarrassing😥😥😥My humble opinion, Wan Wang Haihan😊😊😊 First: The emojis made me a little confused, and the first-person sense of substitution was not strong in some places. Second: If you want to write a conversation between two people, you can divide it into sections. Otherwise, if you put them together, it will read a bit abruptly. Third: I have never played this game, so I don't understand it very well, but the description of the game scenes is very graphic, and I can imagine the fierce fighting between the two sides. Overall, it is a well-structured novel that makes me miss my obsession with playing games. I'm here first, I will continue to pay attention, and I will comment after I finish reading it. Come on! 🌹🌹🌹

I think this book has a strong professional feel and may only be understood by insiders, so the audience will be relatively small. It is recommended that you put more effort into your writing, which will make your work more attractive. Seeing that you have achieved so many milestones, the quality of your work must be guaranteed. Finally, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Return visit, written in front of the book. Looking at the cover, I felt it was a little dark, but after looking at the introduction and title page, I thought it was a fresh article. This makes me very curious and want to know what kind of work this is. The title of the book is very novel and aroused my curiosity. I have never seen anything similar before, and now I am bold enough to try a new style. I look forward to the author bringing me a different story. Write and comment at the same time, so as to encourage each other.

Basically I have never written a long review. After all, it is my favorite game and I will just say a few sentences. After watching the beginning, I haven't had time to read it yet, but I feel that the protagonist is not very strong. Anyone on the school network can kill the protagonist alone. This is the advantage of Du Long against Shadow Demon. Du Long used to have multiple lane dominance, let alone dota. In Dota, the gap in basic skills is very fatal in the laning period. If you can't keep up with basic skills, you will be snowballed (in the past, long-range It seems that the experience of taking denies is only 50%. It is very common to be directly bombed during the laning period, and it is also difficult to recover). When the level is about the same, Poison Dragon basically beats SF, especially the passive blood to suppress SF (a poisonous dragon who knows how to play can make the life of SF unable to take care of itself). In this case, I can still be killed alone. I really don't know whether the protagonist is weak or a passerby is stronger.

It turns out that I also wrote about Dota, but I didn't sign a contract and gave up on it after 130,000 words. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง and support the dream of thousands of fans.

After reading Chapter 47, I realized that something was wrong, so I wanted to express some opinions. I don't know how the author arranged the characters to appear. He only briefly described the wife in his previous life, and later mentioned that he would go back to marry her. Then the first female character he focused on was Jiugongge, and he didn't mention that she was not the wife. It just made me mistakenly think that this was the protagonist's wife, or the protagonist's first woman. But suddenly a bar friend came out later and was officially appointed? (I specifically quit to see the relationship between characters and business cards) It feels as disgusting to me as giving up my wife to my brother. Maybe the author made it very clear in his arrangement that he was to be portrayed as the brother's wife and teammate, but in the eyes of readers like me, the first woman with a very profound description and a full image is generally understood to be the protagonist's wife. I can't accept this inexplicable ntr plot. If you want to portray the protagonist's wife in his previous life, at least establish her image first. The first female image you carefully created, with various hints related to the protagonist, was suddenly assigned to a supporting role that was only half-appeared? (For me, I have only read Chapter 47. This is a passer-by who has just appeared and has not yet established his character) Sorry for typing so many words and wasting reading time. I really can't accept it and I won't be happy if I don't vomit. There is a long way to go in the rivers and lakes, but we are destined to meet again. 🤝

The author writes well, with sophisticated style and novel direction. It's just that I really don't understand the game, so I can't understand many related things... To put it bluntly, I just can't understand it (°ー°). However, I also hope that the author will work hard and not give up or give up. The road to writing is long, and I hope we can work together. Let's encourage each other.

The purpose of writing this article is to describe the beauty of Dota, the youth of Dotaer, and to make more people fall in love with Dota. I don't expect it to be a big hit, as it is an unpopular subject after all, but I also hope that more people will see it. Your support, collection, recommendation, and sharing are my biggest motivation. Thank you everyone!

I read a few chapters and came back for a special visit. I think your novel tends to be light-hearted, with psychological descriptions and narratives going back and forth a bit quickly, and there are quite a lot of emojis... Perhaps it is to take care of non-Dota readers, as there are also a lot of explanatory texts, so it seems tiring... But I still feel good after reading your novel, and I am very happy.

It's okay. It's pretty good to write from d1 to d2. It brought back my memories. I just don't understand why I wrote so much about the character conti. Is it to introduce a wife to an old friend?

I can't wait to read the chapter of the dormitory versus the gang. It's so exciting. It has opened up a big picture and introduced a pit.

Come on 🤝🤝🤝

I played Dota more than ten years ago, and I have always been very bad at it. I can only abuse the simplest computer. Haha, it is full of memories...

I just read three chapters and was persuaded to quit by the first person. It's not a bad thing, it's just that I didn't feel comfortable with it.

Well, because I have to go to school, I can't continue to vote, and I may not be able to touch my mobile phone during the holidays... It's bad, you should understand 😓, no need to vote, sorry (can be deleted)

After reading eight chapters, generally speaking, there is nothing wrong with the writing. There is just one thing that needs attention. Try not to appear a word twice in a paragraph. I found that you have many problems like this. In addition. The word bla has no meaning. You can use ellipses instead, but try not to write this, as it will make readers think that you are cheating on the word count. What I admire about this book is that the book is filled with an atmosphere of memories, similar to the feeling that hope at dusk brings me. This won't happen among newcomers, come on. In addition, try to arrange a small event in the early stage to break the atmosphere. After all, you can't make a book look like this.

Check in first. By the way, what number has been called now? How many people are there in line ahead?

Here I come~ Although I don't know much about DOTA, I know lol. The writing style is very good, there is a touch of memories, and the passion of the game description is vivid~

Went back to the pit and played a few games. . . . Woc maybe I can't keep up with the times.

The community came to read the novel, it's so exciting, the best Dota novel currently! Must order when it's on sale!

Although I don't know much about Dota, I can feel the author's love and affection for this game between the lines. I also admire the author's enthusiasm as I have similar feelings about other games. At the same time, the author also writes vividly about all kinds of living beings in the real world. Each character has a vivid and lifelike image, and the detailed description and cultural characteristics are also very authentic. Come on! At the same time, reading these wonderful contents also made me have a strong interest in this game (it's just the computer at home... Let's put it this way, it's been that monitor for as long as I can remember hahaha, it's not that I'm poor, it's just that my family doesn't approve of me playing computers). After the college entrance examination, I want to buy a machine to experience it. If I don't understand something, I will have to ask you for advice 😁

Hahaha, I collected it when you first read Chapter 4. I once wondered if it was you who wrote the book. As expected, it was amazing, my brother. DOTA is rising.

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The existing chapters are wiped out in one wave, and the overall pace is very brisk. It's just the first person perspective and the desire to survive that pops up from time to time. I look forward to the real Internet cafe battle later.

I saw a book on Dota while passing by, so I came in to take a look. Dota is so cool right now, but it's actually quite popular. I read the battle situation in Chapter 3, and it was pretty good. Only people who know Dota can understand it. Others are just afraid that they will be confused. Now I still play Dota when I have time, but I can no longer find the feeling I had back then. Anyway, come on!

Give some suggestions. The first is not to use emojis, the second is not to use three or four periods in a row, the third is to separate large paragraphs, and finally it is recommended not to use the first person. However, the issue of personal pronouns is a matter of different opinions, so it's up to you. I have a lot of favorites, even though I have never played Dota.

The emojis, Chinese and English, and the first person are all minor issues. Although there are tens of millions of Dota players, I would like to add more appropriate explanations when writing this for readers. For people who don't play games, it will seem confusing.

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I have finished reading the first volume of the campus chapter. In fact, I have already entered this world. I have also ordered all the chapters on the shelves. This is not out of friendship, but a true recognition of the novel. This is one of the few novels that I can read. It is very interesting and passionate. The slight drawback is that... It's not completely satisfying, and the climax part doesn't seem to be satisfying enough. Because recently I just happened to flip through an entertainment article and after reading a few chapters, I actually had this feeling. If you think about it carefully, its plot is really not that good, even quite bloody, but it stimulates the secretion of dopamine and makes people want to follow it. Perhaps what the author still needs to improve is to try to elevate the reading experience to a higher level on the basis of maintaining the spiritual core of the work. This should be technical and detailed. I don't know how to do it specifically. But no matter what, this is one of my favorite novels. I will continue to read it and support it, and I will also recommend it to my friends. I hope brother Xiao will work hard and write better and better.

When I first started watching it, I felt that the timeline was a bit early, and I didn't know how to deal with so many TIs (it was so frustrating after TI6, can the protagonist survive for that long)?