Douluo: My Martial Soul Is a Soul Ring

The process of this book probably means that the village where the protagonist's biological father and mother lived was massacred by the Wuhun Palace for delivering babies to Tang Hao's family, and then the protagonist was adopted by Tang Hao. The protagonist kept hinting to Tang Hao, asking Tang Hao to teach him how to practice, and let Tang San teach him the Xuantian Kung Fu. They helped themselves become stronger, but in the end, they all pretended to be fools. In the end, they were revealed to be Tang Hao's son in Notting City, and then they killed Notting City's city lord and his party. From the beginning to the end, Tang Hao did not help the protagonist. In the end, he showed up and took away the money from the protagonist's body touching. The protagonist asked him to Not even taking the blame, he drove the protagonist to the Star Dou Forest to fend for himself, and then went to Shrek. Everyone is familiar with the process. When Tang Hao beat Zhao Wuji, he didn't mention the protagonist a word, and he simply vented his anger on Tang San. Later, Juhua Pass came, and the protagonist invited Tang Haochen's heart was set on killing Juhuaguan, but the three of them hit Juhuaguan and were seriously injured, so they were ready to run away. PS: In fact, the writing here is not good. Juhuaguan and Ghost Shadow are Titled Douluo who besieged Ah Yin. When Tang Hao saw them alone, he was afraid that he would directly use the Great Sumeru Hammer. Then the protagonist breaks off the relationship with Tang Hao, and then the Seven Elders of Haotian come and want to kill the protagonist Xiao Wu. When the protagonist successfully counterattacks, Tang Hao comes out to stop him and breaks off the relationship with the protagonist. The protagonist leads Tang Hao to the Star Forest and kills Tang Hao with the help of the Ming Dynasty and the Ming Dynasty. This book is good, the writing is okay, the characters are well drawn, but the character design is not right, and there is nothing else.

After reading so many chapters, I really can't help complaining. I feel like there is nothing good about it. Flanders is more greedy for money than the original book. Note that he is greedy for money, but he loves students more. It's okay that Tang Hao loves Tang San, but he should be kinder to Xiao Jiu. After all, he hurt a village and his parents, and he feels guilty, so he should work hard to compensate and not treat them too differently; in addition, Tang Hao can't beat Wuhun Palace, but he places his hope on the next generation, so when Tang San and Xiao Jiu show extremely strong talents, they should work hard to support them. He loves the sect and wants to return. This is just obsession and a kind of compensation, but he loves his wife even more. The three chairmen of the Education Committee of Tiandou Royal Academy are kind to people and tolerant. They may think Xiaojiu is funny and different, but they will never get angry like two idiots😡. Just a test. I think the plot afterwards is probably to kill Prince Snow Star, find Tang Long, and kill him. Tang San knew the truth and turned against him. Xiao Jiu couldn't bear the pain and killed him. Xiao Wu begged for mercy and Tang San escaped. The three education committee chairmen were slapped in the face, resentful, and raped. Shrek fell apart, and Master firmly supported Xiaojiu. Finally, in general, this book is good, but the characters are too bad and a bit dark. I hope the author will change it and we will promote positive energy, thank you! Come on＾0＾~

It's really quite poisonous. The article requires readers to be mindless, but as a result, their soul bones are robbed every time. Is this sick? You have no clues, don't you think that the titled Douluo will lose his soul bone when he dies? Will you be able to pee? If you don't want readers to think that your logic is illogical or something, then you should write more smoothly. If you write something that is not smooth, you will be tortured and aggrieved, and you still want readers to buy into it, you are overthinking it.

The early writing was pretty good, but later it completely fell apart. It was too toxic. I left.

When I saw the author's pen name, I understood everything. I finally understood why the protagonist did what he did. The author is a black fan 😅

1. I have read a lot of Douluo fan novels recently, and the plots almost all follow the main line of the original Douluo Continent. But the main line of this book is to use the time line of the original work to write a novel that takes place at the same time, in different places, and with different plots. So I feel that this novel is different from the original Douluo Dalu. 2. The plot is very attractive, almost breaking away from the original Douluo Continent. I feel like the plot is a bit sped up. I don't know if it's the plot or the author… 3 In terms of character setting, extreme

The previous chapters are all the same old routine with no changes, which is indeed a bit boring, because this is the trend now. The egg and soul ring at the end are martial souls, which is really unexpected. It will inevitably feel poisonous, but it also indirectly pave the way for the curse seal in the later chapters, and also provides a lot of room for the protagonist's space and the development of the plot, which can be said to be very good. The deviation of the protagonist's character and Tang Wu's attitude towards the protagonist and Tang San paved the way for the later plot of the book not to follow the routine of other similar light novels. It has a big reversal, which can be said to be the biggest advantage. With oneself as the center of development, it can bring people into the story to a large extent. The sense of reality makes people feel very real, and I won't give in to you just because you are the protagonist of the original work (you have to realize that I am the real protagonist now, and pay attention, haha~... (Joking)) Overall, if you resist the poisonous articles at the beginning, the content behind it is really exciting. I hope there will be no eunuchs, please give me a lot of support~~😄😄

This is the best Douluo time-travel novel I have ever read. It's really emotional.

I think the writing style is good, the characters' personalities are well described, and some foreshadowings are also well written, making it very immersive. The characters of the main characters in the novel are well controlled. I have carefully understood the settings of each character in the original work, and the plot is also well controlled. I personally think this is a very good novel. I hope the author will write this novel seriously.

It's scary to think about it. Many links highlight the protagonist's plan. The author dug a lot of holes himself, but he filled them all. He is very thoughtful. However, the early plot is too fast, and Xiaojiu is a bit young. Haha, you can actually skip a few years and change it to a bigger one.

It was quite enjoyable to watch it at first, but what the heck with 98 pictures immediately put me off.

After reading it, the overall feeling is that the emotions have not been fully processed. Personally, I feel that the joyful side has come out, but the sad side has not yet been fully reflected. I personally don't feel like crying when I watch it. The portrayal of "Xiao Jiu" was also very successful, making people remember what kind of person he is, how he does things, his style of doing things, and how he treats others. In other respects, I just want to say, "The author has the final say." Whatever the author writes is what he writes. I don't know if it's the late stages, but I still want to say cheers to the author!

Why is my stuff gone😢

Dai Mubai abandoned Zhu Zhuqing and indulged in eating, drinking, whoring and gambling. Tang San, extremely self-centered, Tangmen style. Xiao Wu, when he first met Tang San, he became red when he was close to Zhu. Ning Rongrong, with a witch personality, is the daughter of a sect who doesn't understand conspiracy and conspiracy? Ma Hongjun, eating, drinking, whoring and gambling, has all the five poisons. The big owl is greedy for money, Yu Xiaogang is selfish The second dragon is irritable. Force a group and fight the young ones and the old ones. Haotian Sect, I can't stand up after kneeling for a long time. Blue Lightning Tyrannosaurus Rex Sect, same as above. Excluding the famous hundred thousand year old soul beasts that Tang San forcibly resurrected after becoming a god, basically all the famous soul beasts in Dou Yili have become Tang San's soul rings and soul bones. I feel that this fan novel is really like the Douluo Continent I imagined, except that the protagonist is too buggy. At least everyone will not be forcibly defeated.

I can't figure out why the adopted son of the protagonist has such a face and carries the banner of Tang Hao and the Haotian Sect, causing trouble everywhere, causing trouble, and provoking enemies for them? Others have raised you for six years, and you don't want to repay the kindness of raising him. If you meet people, you will say that you are Tang Hao's son. What a fucking bitch, scum, white-eyed wolf.

The author could write a book where he went to Shrek to rob Zhu Zhuqing, Ning Rongrong and Liu Erlong, then went to Holy Soul Village to steal the Blue Silver Emperor, then went to Wuhun Palace to hook up with Bibi Dong, and captured Xiao Wu in the Soul Master Competition. During the final battle of gods, he was sitting in the car holding the Blue Silver Emperor in his left hand and feeding the protagonist grapes, and holding Xiao Wu in his right hand and feeding the protagonist wine. Liu Erlong beat his legs in front of him, Bibi Dong squeezed his shoulders in the back, and shouted to Tang San, "Your mother is really moist." Make these two idiots Tang San and Yu Xiaogang so angry.

Please stop writing this routine of mindless pretense and slap in the face, okay? Looks awkward

The Tang Sect was originally a sect that played with drugs and hidden weapons. Tang San believed in the Tang Sect's style of doing things. If it hadn't been for the protagonist, he would have been beaten to death. The most disgusting thing for me is the one-part team. If the grandson is not good enough, the son will be in the role, and if the son is not good enough, the grandpa will be in the role. It is a standard supporting cast, and in the end it was clear. The same goes for Yu Xiaogang. After flirting with the two girls, he went to live in seclusion without saying anything? I really sigh for Bibi Dong,

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It's so brainless, there's not a single normal person in the whole book

Look at me

Author, why is your book gone? Do you still have a group? I caught up on it just in time, and I saw it was gone today.

How did you get into the book "The Emperors"? I've been saving for a long time to see the results, but it's gone. Can I still release it?

I looked at the book review section and everyone said this book was good, but I didn't see it. Of course, I only read more than 30 chapters because I couldn't stand it anymore. The protagonist is all kinds of arrogance, all kinds of pretense, and some forced intelligence reduction. In Chapter 17, a level 29 weakling took a 6-year-old child into the Soul Beast Forest and actually wanted to have a picnic. Then someone kindly reminded her, but the protagonist provoked her and called her a dog. You are right. The master's original work cannot defeat the strength of the 400-year-old Mandala Snake. Going to have a picnic in the Soul Beast Forest is either a brain retardation or something. In Chapter 32, a group of people intercepted and killed the protagonist. As a result, the protagonist and the group exchanged names and martial soul levels. Please, this is not a normal duel. Is it really okay to reveal the details like this? Chapter 36, are you sure it's a martial soul fusion plan and not a new martial soul? Fusion meter and soul ring soul meter? Forget it, your martial soul fusion is martial soul fusion. Why did you create the Curse Seal of Heaven? Not to mention that the power system is different. You have something that people have worked hard for so many years to research, and you just have it. I don't know how to describe it. There are even more small details. He doesn't say bad words or anything like that. He still makes people kneel down and kowtow at every turn, and he always thinks about killing people. By the way, is it really okay if you kill someone in school? If you kill someone from the City Lord's Mansion, you will be expelled from the school. Although it is normal for people to die in the world of soul masters, you are killing someone in a public place without signing a life and death certificate. You are not a strong man, but no one cares about you. Isn't this illegal? I really don't know why a book like this is called a good book

After reading this, I will never read Douluo Continent fan fiction again, because it has fulfilled all my expectations for Douluo Continent fan fiction. I have never seen such a fun fan fiction. I feel like voting for my first monthly ticket at the starting point

Qian Renxue's first ten-thousand-year soul ring? Is there a problem with you or with me?

I feel that this book is better than the original work. Many issues that were not covered in the original work are basically covered here.

It does seem a bit poisonous from the front. This is mainly due to the order of the author's narrative. For example, Xiao Jiu killed Tang Hao. The author did not explain the reason at the beginning, but it looked very poisonous 🪖. It was not explained until very later that Tang Hao wanted Xiao Jiu to be Tang San's scapegoat. Tang Hao deliberately exposed Xiao Jiu as his son and then let Xiao Jiu die, so that everyone would think that his son was dead and would not think about Tang San again. Tang San would be absolutely safe as long as he did not expose the Clear Sky Hammer spirit. The author's narrative order has a big problem. Many of Xiaojiu's actions were not explained clearly in time. The first part looked very poisonous, but after reading the cause and effect written at the end, I felt relieved. If I had the patience to read it, I felt that the book was okay.

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This book is very good depending on the audience it is suitable for. However, there are a few points to remind you that this book can be said to be a left-leaning evil. If you reorganize your concepts before reading the book, this will be a very good book. If you Sanguanqi cannot accept Zuo Mo, it is recommended not to try to watch it to avoid feeling bad. It would be great if you could adjust yourself.