I Am a Heavenly Master in Another World

I think the heroine's character is pretty good, and she doesn't have the attributes of a virgin like the heroine in the original book. Fortunately, the heroine in the original book doesn't appear much, otherwise the probability of being disgusted would be too high. The ending is really too rushed, but it is quite funny to watch this kind of character collapse and destroy yourself a few times. After reading two books by the author in a row, I feel that the author has a shortcoming in his writing. There are many characters that are not explained clearly in the whole book. Is it because there are too many characters. I don't write additional supplements For example, what happened to the Yun family in the end? Can such a big family control two-thirds of the Nine Groups really decline? What happened to Mrs. Li's heart? So many traces of personality in the world disappeared without a trace. Is the lamp stand really gone? Is the grudge between the Dongfang family and the heroine gone? There are others that I won't list But overall, this book is still worth reading.

The heroine is still a little bit more like a virgin. Are there no novels that don't have a virgin these days?

While saying that she doesn't want to care, she pretends to be very indifferent and cares about everything. This heroine's character is really hard to describe.

With all due respect, this book is a bit boring to read! !

Is this article an intellectually retarded novel?

I don't understand why some people think the heroine is the Virgin. Is the heroine a cold-blooded person who wants to see others die in front of her but fails to save them even though she has the ability to do so? She is a human being, and people have warmth!

I haven't seen a character with such a disgusting personality in a long time🙂🙂

I really feel that the heroine's grandmother is simply a troublemaker, looking for trouble whenever she has nothing to do, which makes her tired of her. And it's obviously my fault, but I always blame it on other people's alchemy masters. Are you embarrassed?

Why don't you explain it? You always take the blame for your personality. In fact, the pot can be thrown away, and the result is still the default. People who have been hurt still want to take revenge. What kind of brain circuit makes something simple become complicated?

This ending makes me a little confused!

A blunt beginning and illogical logic. 1. The main personality has never practiced. The sub-personality wants to practice. Where can I find books? Could it be that it would run into the room by itself and let the protagonist see it? Find it yourself? Can't others see such a big change? Are everyone else blind? Pack? Can this persona be fake? There are also books and tools, these things that appear inexplicably, are the protagonists blind? Stupid? Second, how to practice sub-personality cultivation and become a heavenly being? Fantasy training: Does your body not respond? The sub-personality is a guru, but the main personality is a weak chicken. Strong? Weak? Contradictory? Knowledge-based cultivation: Is there such a thing as knowledge-based cultivation in fantasy novels? Three, I originally wanted to say three, but it was said that the main personality soul was torn apart by ghosts, the sub-personality woke up, and your family's personality was split into two souls? Later, it came full circle. The main character was frightened and collapsed and dissipated on its own. It was not you who was caught by ghosts. There are so many questions in the first chapter, I am speechless...( ´◔‸◔`)

Why did the protagonist hide the truth when he first came out of the ghost world? There seems to be nothing wrong with telling the truthヽ(￣д￣;)ノ

There are a lot of missing words and typos in the article, especially the newly updated chapter, which is basically full of missing words. What the content says is all guesswork! Is the author serious? ? !

Why is it not updated?😰

This writing style really feels like I'm sorry for this score. Although it has no CP, but this? ? ? It's hard to explain in one word. The plot points are all clustered together in the academy. The inexplicable training and five years in the front, as well as the family with extremely good personalities, and the character in the school who pretends to be a bitch. It looks like an urban novel from ten years ago, and it also continues the consistent characteristics of female videos.

This book... Emmmm, the heroine's character is a bit too nice, but just because there is no cp, I will give you the ticket 🤓

More, not enough 😁😁😁

Very pretty😁

I think it's quite good-looking, and the heroine's character is not that of a virgin. She can't just ignore her, right? The most important thing is that there is no cp 😁 It would be better if the author made fewer typos

The author started reading in **

It would be interesting if people who were guilty of the ex's sin came to stab the protagonist a few times. I don't know what will happen, whether to kill him or let him go. Kill them for revenge, you are happy but others don't understand. I don't feel comfortable letting myself go, but I'm afraid of being retaliated against again.

A new book has just been uploaded and is being reviewed. The new book is "Psychic Baby Three and a Half Years Old". However, I suspect that the name may not pass the review. The name will have to be changed by then. I'm not sure what it will be called now. I hope you won't have to change it several times before giving it to me.

It would be nice if I were in a place where the spiritual energy was revived and I didn't have this sense of déjà vu on the earth. Also, it would be more interesting if the main character and deputy characters were together, otherwise it would feel like the main personality written before is completely unnecessary. The main and secondary personalities work together and explore the new world.

The heroine is the kind of person that others look down on you and you don't want to meddle in your own business, but you always meddle in your own business. It doesn't make me feel better, but it makes me very uncomfortable. I'm not a virgin, but I can only say that my character is very "cheap"?