Tang Shu

The writing is really good, but I think it might be a little bit toxic for the average reader. To be honest, I don't really like the plot of revolving around prostitutes. I brag to my son about how popular I am as a geisha, and when I have no ability to protect the girl, I finally rescue the heroine from the brothel where she is accompanying the bartender, and then I think about letting her work as a singer. I believe this kind of plot is not liked by most people, and today's readers are very sensitive. But I predict that this kind of plot will continue and last for a long time. The writing is good, and the emotions are well written. You can write about feelings and love, but don't be a literary youth. When the heroine is about to be raped, the hero works hard to save her. This kind of plot is just bullshit now. In addition, in novels such as Dou Po Hui Ming, each plot has a small goal, and there is a cool point every dozens of chapters. Even a son-in-law who wants to be on the safe side clearly says that I just want salted fish, at least he has the character. But now the male protagonist of this book doesn't see what he wants to do. It's a bit flat. To be honest, maybe there are too few chapters. I'm scared of being fed, bb a few words. Overall, the writing is great, keep it up.

After reading two chapters, I felt pretty good, light and refreshing. I can't tell the size of the pattern at the moment, but it would be nice if the style can be maintained. Today's historical novels are so full of this struggle for hegemony, and that one who is drunk on the lap of a beautiful woman and wakes up to dominate the world, that people don't even bother to complain.

I have read the first chapter, it is a good book, if the quality can be maintained later, the score will not be bad.

The author, your book is too miserable. Go to the book circle to post a post to advertise it. Previously, all my recommendation votes were given to Lao Zhao. I'll give it to you now, he doesn't lack my tickets either.

I wish the new book a great success, welcome to return and collect it!

The author has great ideas! Come on!

I still like the one about the Sui Dynasty. I read so many novels about the Tang Dynasty that I vomited!

The writing and style are great, but I feel that there is no obvious main line at the beginning, and the sense of substitution is not strong enough, which will actually affect the performance of the novel. . . And the title of the book really sounds like an ancient Chinese novel written by a woman. .