Overlord

You want to be called "Great King", and the person is not dead yet, so he is designated as "Marquis Wu"? After reading one chapter, I didn't want to read anymore. I felt like the author was a primary school student.

The author, Fenghuo Opera: There were no princes from Qin before. The leaders of the Qin people were just officials. Qin officially became a vassal state after Ying Kai escorted King Ping to move eastward and King Ping granted him the title.

The protagonist's father is a prince, but his son is a prince's brother? The author is so awesome. If you don't even know the most basic common sense, you are like no one else.

The author probably doesn't understand history at all and speaks in plain language.

The author can go and read "Spring and Autumn I am the King" and "Warring States to Dominate the World" to see their level. If you can't control it, don't write this kind of historical text, and just write mindless and refreshing ones. King Zhou You, whose posthumous name is "You", is called after his death. How can anyone call him by his posthumous name while alive without fear of being slapped. Wu Hou, "" is also a posthumous title. Gonghou Bo Zinan, the highest in the Spring and Autumn Period was only Bo, and the emperor reached Bo. Only the overlord at that time could be called a posthumous Hou, and there was no Gong at all. For example, Duke Xiang of Qin, Duke Wu of Wei, Duke Huan of Qi, and Marquis Wu of Wei were all given posthumously. The children of a marquis are called young kings, female kings, or female gentlemen. Zhou etiquette is very strict, and there is no chance of messing around.

Did the author know that it is so secretive? King Ping colluded with the barbarian enemy Quanrong, killed his father and younger brother, and destroyed the Western Zhou Dynasty. King Ping's uncle and the king were supported by Guo and other princes and became king in Modi. Later, he and the king were killed by Jin Wenhou. Because of the venerable's taboo, history books seldom record these. So the weakness of the Eastern Zhou Dynasty was not just the failure of national power, but more importantly, the corruption of etiquette and law. How could a sinner like King Ping of Zhou who befriended the foreign enemies Dog Rong, killed his father and brother, and destroyed the Zhou Dynasty become the emperor? And Zheng Wugong's father died in the Haojing Incident. Therefore, in order to protect the throne, King Ping sent a large amount of Zhou territory to Qin, Zheng, Jin and other countries, causing the Zhou Dynasty to lose its national power and territory. Coupled with the political disunity of the vassal states, this was the main reason for the decline of the Eastern Zhou Dynasty. Otherwise, with King Zhou on the throne, the Eastern Zhou Dynasty would not have been like the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period.

There's a drama, "Big Poison", Wei Ritian is the protagonist, the author's writing is not good, and he can't write the taste. Anyway, the protagonist is acting like a bastard. Daxian will come. The supporting characters have no brains. They catch up one by one. If in real history, the pig's horns would have been played to death 20 times.

I remember that seven or eight years ago, when I was writing a novel, it would take me an hour to research information and half a day to look up information, for fear of making a mistake in a title.

What is written? Big brother? Heisehui, let's call him brother in Spring and Autumn Period. Uncle Ji. In addition, the wives of Weiguo are generally the ladies of other countries. They will not marry the daughter of a doctor as their official wife. Their status does not match. In the Spring and Autumn Period, there were strict classes: Jun, Qing, doctor, doctor, scholar.

Are you pretending to be a Weiguo in imaginary history? If Gao Ba Dou was from the Eastern Jin Dynasty, was silver used at this time? It seems so inconsistent.

Just look at the first few sentences and you can withdraw it. You said you don't have the skills to write about the Spring and Autumn Period and the Warring States Period? Humiliate oneself

No wonder there is a need to regulate online writing. Writing this kind of novel will indeed mislead a large number of primary and secondary school students who have no common sense.

Why is Zhuang Jiang called Jiang Ruoxi? This modern name immediately creates drama.

The names of the characters are very inconsistent with the history of the Spring and Autumn Period

The author has too many problems and shortcomings... The First Youwang is a posthumous title. Normally, how can anyone call a living person a posthumous title? Secondly, how can you, a princely family, be called "Brother Wang"? The third Duke of Wei Wu was granted by King Ping of Zhou Dynasty. There was no Duke of Wei Wu during the period of King Zhou You. Fourth, the issue of beacon-fire operas on princes is still a matter of doubt in the academic circles. I think this still needs to be considered. Fifth, the State of Qin only gained the status of a real vassal state during the period of Qin Xianggong, so it is too early to call him the Prince of Qin.

In the Great Zhou Dynasty, there were only Wang Ji, not princesses.

This book is too long-winded. It takes more than thirty chapters to marry a woman. The first twenty or so chapters are okay, but the more you read the later, the more long-winded it becomes. Can't it be limited to more than twenty chapters? The more words there are, the more boring it becomes. If you read too many words, you'll get bored.

It's silly and ridiculous that a person would fight with a monkey using his claws and teeth. The biggest difference between today's people and the ancients is their knowledge! Know what the future looks like. After watching a few pictures, I didn't dare to watch it anymore. The protagonist's IQ is not online.

During the Warring States Period, there was the title Prince, and it seemed that everyone was called the Crown Prince.

The writing is terrible. Is the author practicing his writing? It is recommended to write modern writing when practicing pen writing. Historical writing has too high requirements on wording and titles, and the most demanding readers are historical writing. Hope the next one will be better.

As long as you work hard, we will still believe in you. After all, growth is necessary.

I haven't read the novel, but I would like to ask if the protagonist's land area has expanded? Is the protagonist the boss of Weiguo? Otherwise, I won't be interested in watching it.

1.7 Million words and 800 recommendation votes. . . . .

How many chapters have passed and I still haven't become the boss?

The setting is completely wrong. You need to have an imaginary virtual dynasty. The style of painting in the early Spring and Autumn Period is not at all like this.

At first I almost thought it was a fairy tale😢