Longwu Daotian

The writing and plot are not bad, but if you want to promote the book in the circle, you have to write 100,000 words. I will support it with a collection of recommendation votes 🙂🙂

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Tell the truth, don't be blind. Written by a five-year-old child, is it too mature? A five-year-old child in a strange place should be scared and cry. After you finish crying, you may behave in an unconscious and passive manner. Apart from this, there are no other issues. Sorry, I am obsessed with logic and do not represent the public opinion. Keep updated, keep up the good work

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I think the writing is quite smooth, but it's strange that the background is supposed to be ancient, but the wording of the characters doesn't quite match. The characterization is also a bit weak. The five or six-year-old protagonist is no different from an adult. The same goes for the others, who don't have very distinct personalities. In addition, relying solely on the desire for cultivation as the driving force does not give readers a strong sense of immersion. There are no contradictions and difficulties, so there is no strong sense of achievement for success... It is the traditional upgrade flow again. If you want to attract more readers, I hope the author will work harder!

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