You Are the White Moonlight in My Heart

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I, I, I will complain. I can understand the feeling of not having readers' comments. It's easy to criticize and doubt yourself, and it's easy to break down from time to time. This should be due to the subject matter. There are very few readers of modern romance. Most of the readers who watch female videos like ancient romance, farming, and cultivating immortals. I have never read this kind of romance. I read ten chapters according to the standards of youth literature and art movies, and the article is still fine. I just want to complain about something: the protagonist really has a halo. One more thing, I don't know if it's my problem, I feel like the main character's memory is not deep enough. I'm going to make a few comments on the assumption that it's your problem. Male videos pay attention to conflicts. Conflicts promote the progress of the plot, attract readers' attention, and become readers' memory points. I don't know much about female videos, but from your article, there is a conflict between two men emotionally entangled. After thinking about it carefully, the problem may be that the conflicts are not detailed enough, which does not help much in shaping the image of the protagonist. In some of the movies I have watched, the protagonists mostly portray images of suffering, embarrassment, etc. Create an image of the protagonist by describing some events and their impact on the protagonist. According to this logic, if the protagonist hears the deputy team leader talking about Brother Lin, she can write about the impact of the breakup on her life, for example: She is suffering, but she does not show it. Another example: The actor's special treatment of her made her guess about the actor's thoughts and inner struggles. That's it. Personal advice, I am not responsible for any mistakes. Farewell.

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