Drunk Lying in the Spring Garden Watching the Moonlight

Well, I came in confused and walked out confused. Fortunately, I read a few more chapters, otherwise I wouldn't even be able to figure out what it was about. Point 1: If you forcefully enter the story, the sense of immersion will definitely be very weak. When I was suddenly introduced to my father-in-law, I was really confused. What the hell? The second point is that the paragraphs are actually not well divided. In many places, subjects, predicates, objects and other messy things are obviously missing. I don't really understand those things either. But at least I can still see it. The third point is that the writing style is actually quite acceptable, but in some places it still belongs to the so-called line drawing, which is quite different from the ancient words. You should study more. Yeah, but in the end, in summary, it is generally good. Although the story is old-fashioned, it will attract many people if it is played with tricks. Because this is an ancient proverb, you still need to pay attention to the writing style, but in the end it is secondary. The most important thing is the story. Being able to tell stories can attract people even if the writing style is not good, so what you need to pay more attention to is the story written by the author.

I came to try the poison. The story is good and attractive, but the writing is not delicate enough. It still lacks the ancient style. Some places are purely modern vernacular, and the details cannot withstand scrutiny. I hope you will write it well in the future. It has been collected. (ง •̀_•́)ง

Humble writers are asking everywhere to try the poison, and create a post to record their comments for future improvements 😡

Record the situation conveniently 2019.10.13 Opened the book 2019.10.14 Has the first collection and investment 2019.10.17 Received the short message 2019.10.20 Received the first one Recommended votes 2019.10.24 This article was officially signed 2019.10.31 Received the first reward 2019.12.01 Started delayed update and revision mode 2020.01.13 Resumed daily updates

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